Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and be more specific about the rules. Also, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words for coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must maintain discipline, keep a neat appearance, and complete their assignments on time. These rules help create a positive learning environment.

Gợi ý: Clarify your ideas and avoid confusing pronouns. Use linking words to connect your points and provide specific reasons why more rules could be beneficial.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules because rules teach us how to live responsibly. For instance, they help us develop good habits and make daily life easier.

Gợi ý: Focus on clear and correct sentence structure. Avoid vague phrases like 'heart problems' and 'bad questions'. Provide specific examples of how the teacher was dedicated.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very dedicated math teacher who patiently explained difficult problems and provided extra practice materials. She always made sure I understood the concepts thoroughly.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Be more specific about why you prefer more rules and how they help.

Ví dụ: I prefer having more rules at school because they promote discipline and order. Since school is like a second home, these rules help us learn important life skills that we can apply later.

Gợi ý: Avoid negative or inappropriate words like 'stupid'. Use clear sentences and provide balanced opinions with specific examples about the teacher's strictness and teaching.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a strict social studies teacher who assigned daily homework and enforced rules firmly. Although he was strict, he was knowledgeable and helped us understand important social topics.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more natural by varying sentence structure and adding linking words. Provide specific reasons why rules are important in a school setting.

Ví dụ: No, I would not like to work in a rule-free school because rules are essential for maintaining order. Without rules, students might struggle to focus, which could affect their success.

× Yes, I think Steven would benefit more from the more rules.

✓ Yes, I think Steven would benefit more from more rules.

The phrase 'the more rules' is incorrect because 'more rules' is a general plural noun phrase and does not require the definite article 'the'. Removing 'the' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× They know how to live your life.

✓ They know how to live their life.

The pronoun 'your' is inconsistent with the subject 'They'. To maintain agreement, 'your' should be replaced with 'their' to match the third person plural subject.

× They need to know how to make your life easier and in this way, that's why rule is very important in our life.

✓ They need to know how to make their life easier and in this way, that's why rules are very important in our life.

The pronoun 'your' should be 'their' to agree with the subject 'They'. Also, 'rule' should be plural 'rules' to match the context of general rules being important.

× Yes, I have a very dedicated teacher who is a math teacher who teach me everything, how to solve the problems, the heart problems, which I don't know, it is practically with me and like reading everything to solve bad questions.

✓ Yes, I have a very dedicated teacher who is a math teacher who teaches me everything, how to solve the problems, the hard problems, which I don't know, it is practical for me and like reading everything to solve difficult questions.

The verb 'teach' should be 'teaches' to agree with the singular subject 'teacher'. Also, 'heart problems' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'hard problems'. 'Practically with me' is corrected to 'practical for me' for clarity. 'Bad questions' is better expressed as 'difficult questions'.

× Yeah, I prefer more rules at the school because you have to be in discipline at the school, you have to follow the rule, the rule of the school.

✓ Yeah, I prefer more rules at the school because you have to be disciplined at the school, you have to follow the rules, the rules of the school.

'Discipline' as a noun is uncountable, but the phrase 'be in discipline' is incorrect; it should be 'be disciplined' (adjective). Also, 'rule' should be plural 'rules' to match the context.

× Yes, I have a really stupid teacher who is a social teacher who gives everyday assignment fits properly and we we didn't do anything he just punished us and give some tips.

✓ Yes, I have a really strict teacher who is a social teacher who gives everyday assignments properly and when we didn't do anything, he just punished us and gave some tips.

'Stupid' is likely a misuse; 'strict' fits the context better. 'Assignment fits' is incorrect; it should be 'assignments'. 'Give' should be 'gave' to match past tense. Added missing conjunction 'when' for clarity.

× Also he's very good. Also he teaches us very good.

✓ Also, he's very good. Also, he teaches us very well.

'Good' is an adjective and should be replaced with the adverb 'well' when modifying the verb 'teaches'. Commas added after 'Also' for correct punctuation.

× No, I don't like to work it as a teacher in school because rules are very important.

✓ No, I don't like to work as a teacher in school because rules are very important.

The word 'it' is unnecessary and incorrect in this sentence and should be removed for grammatical correctness.