Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Sure, there's some rules for students. At my school, for example, most students live in the UMM dormitory at school, so they are not allowed to leave the campus on weekdays. Another rule is that they are expected to respect teachers.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
Yes or no? It really depends on the quantity of rules. I think uh adequate amount of rules are beneficial for students to grow and to study because they have to know there are boundaries between.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Thí sinh
Sure. I have a professor who is really dedicated, umm, to the teaching. He always tells us many humorous and funny stories about the historical figures like Joe Berlin and some a literalist.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Thí sinh
I prefer fewer rooms at school if I'm a student because I'm a courteous student who know how to respect others. If I have more rules, I have to obey them, which makes me feel uncomfortable and some rules.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Thí sinh
MMM yes I've had some St. teachers from primary school as well as to college schools. In the college I have a professor teacher who is really strict. For example, he gives us some assignments and asks us to display it.
Giám khảo
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Thí sinh
Actually, no. I do prefer to work in a school with adequate rules. Adequate rules, umm, help people understand the boundaries between acceptable behaviours and unacceptable behaviours.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如"there's some rules"应为"there are some rules"。建议注意主谓一致,同时回答可以更简洁自然,避免重复。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students living in the dormitory cannot leave campus on weekdays. Also, respecting teachers is mandatory.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯,表达含糊且句子不完整。建议使用更清晰的句子结构,避免犹豫词,补充完整观点。
Ví dụ: I believe that having an adequate number of rules benefits students because it helps them understand boundaries and focus on their studies.
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和表达错误,如"to the teaching"应为"to teaching","a literalist"用词不当。建议使用准确词汇并减少口头语。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a dedicated professor who made lessons interesting by sharing humorous stories about historical figures like Joe Berlin and other literary figures.
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有词汇错误,如"rooms"应为"rules",句子结构混乱。建议注意词汇准确性,表达更清晰连贯。
Ví dụ: I prefer fewer rules at school because I am respectful and can behave properly without many restrictions. Too many rules make me feel uncomfortable.
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在发音词汇错误,如"St."应为"strict",句子不完整且表达不够清晰。建议使用完整句子并避免口头语。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have had strict teachers both in primary and college. For example, my college professor assigns tasks and requires us to present them in class.
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答较好,但存在口头语"umm",建议减少口头语,使表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: No, I would prefer to work in a school with adequate rules because they help define acceptable and unacceptable behaviours clearly.
× Sure, there's some rules for students.
✓ Sure, there are some rules for students.
这里的主语是复数名词"rules",所以谓语动词应该用复数形式"are",而不是单数形式"is"。这是单复数一致错误。
× I think uh adequate amount of rules are beneficial for students to grow and to study because they have to know there are boundaries between.
✓ I think an adequate number of rules is beneficial for students to grow and to study because they have to know there are boundaries.
"amount"通常用于不可数名词,"rules"是可数名词,应该用"number"。此外,"number"作为主语时谓语动词用单数形式"is"。另外,句尾"boundaries between"不完整,去掉"between"更合适。
× I have a professor who is really dedicated, umm, to the teaching.
✓ I have a professor who is really dedicated to teaching.
"dedicated to"后面接动名词形式,"the teaching"中的定冠词不必要且不自然,应去掉"the"。
× He always tells us many humorous and funny stories about the historical figures like Joe Berlin and some a literalist.
✓ He always tells us many humorous and funny stories about historical figures like Joe Berlin and some literalists.
"the historical figures"改为复数无冠词形式更自然;"some a literalist"结构错误,应改为"some literalists",保持复数形式。
× I prefer fewer rooms at school if I'm a student because I'm a courteous student who know how to respect others.
✓ I prefer fewer rules at school if I'm a student because I'm a courteous student who knows how to respect others.
"rooms"应为"rules",符合上下文;"who know"主语是单数"student",谓语动词应为"knows"。
× If I have more rules, I have to obey them, which makes me feel uncomfortable and some rules.
✓ If I have more rules, I have to obey them, which makes me feel uncomfortable because of some rules.
句尾"and some rules"不完整且无意义,改为"because of some rules"使句意完整。
× MMM yes I've had some St. teachers from primary school as well as to college schools.
✓ MMM yes I've had some strict teachers from primary school as well as college schools.
"St."应为"strict"的缩写,且"to college schools"中"to"多余,应去掉。
× In the college I have a professor teacher who is really strict.
✓ In college, I have a professor who is really strict.
"In the college"通常说"in college";"professor teacher"重复,应只用"professor"。
× For example, he gives us some assignments and asks us to display it.
✓ For example, he gives us some assignments and asks us to display them.
"assignments"是复数,指代代词应为复数"them",而不是单数"it"。
× Adequate rules, umm, help people understand the boundaries between acceptable behaviours and unacceptable behaviours.
✓ Adequate rules help people understand the boundaries between acceptable behaviours and unacceptable behaviours.
句子本身语法正确,无需修改。