Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I feel like every schools have their rules and in our school we are not allowed to use electronics, fire or other dangerous things in our student apartment and we have to go back to our rooms before midnight.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
No I don't because I think too many rules can be stressful and even harmful to students creativity. So I think a balance works best. We need enough rules to keep order but still giving students freedom to explore their own way of thinking.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes I did. I remember my high school Chinese teacher was really dedicated. She always stayed late after class to check our eyes and helped us with writing. I nearly saw her seem tired and she was always patient with us.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Thí sinh
Definitely fewer. I think rules are necessary, but too many just add pressure. So I think with fewer rules, students can explore their own way of thinking and try new things, which I think is really important in education.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, I remember my primary school maths teacher was really strict, especially when it came to our homework and test scores. I remember that if someone forgot to do her homework, she would call their parents and punish them.
Giám khảo
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Thí sinh
Honestly I don't want to be a teacher but I think working in a roof free school like side sounds appealing to me because I think this school gives enough freedom to both students and teachers.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如"every schools"应为"every school",且句子较长且缺少适当的连接词,建议简化句子结构并使用连接词使表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, every school has its own rules. At my school, we are not allowed to use electronics or fire in the dormitory, and we must return to our rooms before midnight.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较好,但"students creativity"应为"students' creativity",且"giving"应改为"give"以保持时态一致。建议注意语法细节,提升表达准确性。
Ví dụ: No, I don't think more rules are beneficial because too many rules can be stressful and harm students' creativity. Therefore, a balance is best: enough rules to maintain order but still giving students freedom to explore their own thinking.
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中"check our eyes"表达不清,可能想表达"check our work"或"check our progress",且"I nearly saw her seem tired"表达不自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和自然表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My high school Chinese teacher was very dedicated. She often stayed late after class to check our homework and help us with writing. Although she looked tired sometimes, she was always patient with us.
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Điểm: 90.0Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰,表达自然。可以尝试使用更多连接词如"because"来增强逻辑性,使回答更连贯。
Ví dụ: I definitely prefer fewer rules because while rules are necessary, too many can add pressure. With fewer rules, students can explore their own thinking and try new things, which is very important in education.
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体,但"forgot to do her homework"应为"forgot to do their homework"以保持主语一致。建议注意代词使用的准确性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I remember my primary school math teacher was very strict, especially about homework and test scores. If a student forgot to do their homework, she would call their parents and punish them.
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在拼写错误,如"roof free"应为"rule-free","like side"表达不清。建议注意拼写和表达准确性,避免模糊不清。
Ví dụ: Honestly, I don't want to be a teacher, but working in a rule-free school sounds appealing because such a school gives enough freedom to both students and teachers.
× Yeah, I feel like every schools have their rules and in our school we are not allowed to use electronics, fire or other dangerous things in our student apartment and we have to go back to our rooms before midnight.
✓ Yeah, I feel like every school has its rules and in our school we are not allowed to use electronics, fire or other dangerous things in our student apartment and we have to go back to our rooms before midnight.
“every”后面应接单数名词,不能用复数“schools”;主语“every school”是单数,谓语动词应使用单数形式“has”。
× Yeah, I feel like every schools have their rules and in our school we are not allowed to use electronics, fire or other dangerous things in our student apartment and we have to go back to our rooms before midnight.
✓ Yeah, I feel like every school has its rules and in our school we are not allowed to use electronics, fire or other dangerous things in our student dormitory and we have to go back to our rooms before midnight.
“student apartment”用词不当,通常学生住宿用“dormitory”或“dorm”更合适。
× No I don't because I think too many rules can be stressful and even harmful to students creativity.
✓ No, I don't because I think too many rules can be stressful and even harmful to students' creativity.
“students creativity”缺少所有格,应为“students' creativity”,表示“学生们的创造力”。
× Yes I did. I remember my high school Chinese teacher was really dedicated. She always stayed late after class to check our eyes and helped us with writing.
✓ Yes I did. I remember my high school Chinese teacher was really dedicated. She always stayed late after class to check our eyes and help us with writing.
“helped”应与前面的“stayed”保持一致,使用不定式“help”表示目的。
× I nearly saw her seem tired and she was always patient with us.
✓ I rarely saw her seem tired and she was always patient with us.
“nearly”用法错误,应使用“rarely”表示“很少”,表达意思更准确。
× Honestly I don't want to be a teacher but I think working in a roof free school like side sounds appealing to me because I think this school gives enough freedom to both students and teachers.
✓ Honestly I don't want to be a teacher but I think working in a rule-free school like this sounds appealing to me because I think this school gives enough freedom to both students and teachers.
“roof free”应为“rule-free”,表示“无规则的”;“like side”应为“like this”,指代前文提到的学校。