Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid repeating words like 'strict rule' and 'dressing'. Also, be more concise and clear.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, we have a strict dress code where girls must wear knee-length skirts and boys must wear trousers.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some vocabulary mistakes ('roles' instead of 'rules') and incomplete ideas. Try to use correct words and complete your thoughts clearly. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'psychological' without explanation.

Ví dụ: I don't think students would benefit from having more rules because too many rules can cause stress and pressure, which might affect their mental health negatively.

Gợi ý: Your answer has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and singular/plural agreement. Also, provide more specific details to support your answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have had a very dedicated teacher. For example, one teacher helped students financially when they faced money problems.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but has some grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Try to use complete sentences and avoid repeating phrases like 'If there'.

Ví dụ: I prefer a balanced number of rules. Necessary rules should be enforced, but unnecessary ones should be removed.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and contains many fillers like 'uh' and 'umm'. Try to complete your sentences and reduce hesitation to sound more confident and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a strict teacher named John in Senior High School. He would punish students even if they were a minute late to class.

Gợi ý: Your answer has many fillers and some grammatical errors. Try to speak more fluently without hesitation and use correct sentence structures. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Ví dụ: I would not like to work in a rule-free school because students tend to be aggressive and undisciplined, which makes teaching very difficult.

× Yes Sir, there are quite rules at my school.

✓ Yes Sir, there are quite a few rules at my school.

The phrase 'quite rules' is incorrect because 'rules' is plural and needs a quantifier. 'Quite a few' is the correct quantifier for plural nouns. This corrects the singular/plural quantifier usage.

× The first one is they have strict rule, strict dress dressing code such as girls should wear knee length skirt and boys should wear trousers.

✓ The first one is they have strict rules, a strict dress code such as girls should wear knee-length skirts and boys should wear trousers.

The word 'rule' should be plural 'rules' to match the context. 'Dress dressing code' is incorrect; it should be 'dress code'. 'Knee length skirt' should be 'knee-length skirts' to agree in number and use correct adjective form.

× I am do have a really dedicated teachers.

✓ I do have really dedicated teachers.

The phrase 'I am do have' is incorrect; 'do have' is sufficient. 'Teachers' is plural, so 'a' should be removed. This corrects verb usage and article with plural noun.

× For instance, there was once a teacher who would help the students financially if they have financial problem.

✓ For instance, there was once a teacher who would help the students financially if they have financial problems.

'Financial problem' should be plural 'financial problems' to match the plural subject 'students' and generalize the issue.

× I generally prefer to have a well balanced rules like if there.

✓ I generally prefer to have well-balanced rules like if there.

'A well balanced rules' is incorrect because 'rules' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. 'Well-balanced' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective.

× If there is a necessity for a certain rule, it must be implemented.

✓ If there is a necessity for a certain rule, it must be implemented.

This sentence is correct in 'there be' usage; no correction needed.

× However, the extra unnecessary rules should be omitted.

✓ However, the extra unnecessary rules should be omitted.

This sentence is correct; no plural or singular issue.

× Uh, there was a teacher named John in my umm, Senior High School where he would, umm, give punishment to students even for being a minute late to their classes and.

✓ Uh, there was a teacher named John in my Senior High School who would give punishment to students even for being a minute late to their classes.

'Where' should be 'who' when referring to a person. The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' which should be removed for completeness.

× I don't think so because, uh, in when there is a rule free school students tend to be, uh, very, uh, aggressive, very, umm, undisciplined, which, uh, would make it harder for me to teach them anything.

✓ I don't think so because when there is a rule-free school, students tend to be very aggressive and very undisciplined, which would make it harder for me to teach them anything.

The phrase 'in when' is incorrect; 'when' alone is sufficient. 'Rule free' should be hyphenated as 'rule-free'. Also, redundant fillers and commas are removed for clarity.