Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yeah, definitely. For example, we have to be punctual for classes and wear a uniform. There are also rules about no use during lessons.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
No, really. I think too many rules can make students feel restricted. A balance is better. Enough structure to keep things organized, but still some freedom.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, my high school English teacher was amazing. She always stayed after class to help students and make her lessons really engaging.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Thí sinh
I'd go with fewer rules. I think it helps students learn to be more responsible and independent when they are trusted more.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Thí sinh
Oh for sure, my maths teacher in year 10 was super strict. No talking, no late homework. It was a bit stressful but we did learn a lot.
Giám khảo
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Thí sinh
Probably not. I think some basic rules are necessary to make sure classes run smoothly and everyone feels respected.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为简洁,但缺少对“no use”具体指什么的明确说明,且表达略显口语化。建议用更准确的词汇表达,并补充细节使回答更完整。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students must be punctual, wear uniforms, and are prohibited from using mobile phones during lessons to avoid distractions.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答观点明确,但句子结构较简单,缺少连接词使内容衔接更流畅。建议使用连接词丰富句子结构,增强表达逻辑。
Ví dụ: No, I don't think more rules would benefit students. While some structure is necessary to maintain order, too many rules can make students feel restricted and less motivated.
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且表达清晰,但可以增加更多细节描述老师的教学方法或影响,以增强内容丰富度。
Ví dụ: Yes, my high school English teacher was very dedicated. She often stayed after class to provide extra help and used interactive activities to make lessons engaging and effective.
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答观点明确,但缺少连接词和具体例子支持观点。建议增加连接词并举例说明信任如何促进责任感。
Ví dụ: I prefer fewer rules at school because when students are trusted, they tend to become more responsible and independent. For example, without strict supervision, I learned to manage my time better.
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较口语化,缺少连接词和更具体的描述。建议使用更正式的表达,并详细说明严格教学的影响。
Ví dụ: Yes, my year 10 math teacher was very strict. He enforced rules like no talking during class and no late homework submissions. Although it was stressful, this discipline helped us improve significantly.
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答简洁且观点明确,但可以增加连接词和具体理由,使表达更完整。
Ví dụ: Probably not. I believe that some basic rules are essential to ensure classes run smoothly and that all students feel respected and safe.
× There are also rules about no use during lessons.
✓ There are also rules about no phone use during lessons.
原句中缺少了具体的名词,导致表达不完整。应补充具体内容,如“phone use”,使句子完整且明确。
× A balance is better.
✓ A balance is better.
此句无明显量词错误,保持原句。
× I think it helps students learn to be more responsible and independent when they are trusted more.
✓ I think it helps students learn to be more responsible and independent when they are trusted more.
此句中代词使用正确,无需修改。
× No talking, no late homework.
✓ No talking, no late homework submissions.
原句中“no late homework”表达不完整,建议补充“submissions”使表达更准确。
× Probably not. I think some basic rules are necessary to make sure classes run smoothly and everyone feels respected.
✓ Probably not. I think some basic rules are necessary to make sure classes run smoothly and everyone feels respected.
此句中代词使用正确,无需修改。