Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。文を簡潔にし、文法を正しく使い、具体的な情報を盛り込むことが重要です。例えば、主語と動詞の一致に注意し、冗長な表現を避けましょう。

Ví dụ: At my university, there are no strict rules. For example, students are allowed to wear whatever they want, which makes the environment quite free and relaxed.

Gợi ý: 回答が不明瞭で文が途中で終わっています。意見をはっきり述べ、理由や具体例を付け加えて、論理的に話を展開しましょう。接続詞を使って文をつなげることも大切です。

Ví dụ: I think it depends on the students. In a positive environment, fewer rules can make students feel more comfortable and motivated. However, some rules are necessary to maintain discipline and order.

Gợi ý: 文法の誤りと不自然な表現が目立ちます。過去の経験を話す際は時制に注意し、文を簡潔にまとめ、具体的な内容を明確に伝えましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, when I was in high school, a social science teacher helped me learn how to write correct answers for university entrance exams, which was very helpful.

Gợi ý: 文法ミスや不明瞭な表現が多いです。意見を明確に述べ、理由を具体的に説明し、文を完結にまとめることが必要です。不要な言葉は避けましょう。

Ví dụ: I strongly prefer fewer rules at school because students should take responsibility for their own behavior. Too many rules can prevent them from thinking independently.

Gợi ý: 意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。文法を正しく使い、話の流れを整理して、具体的な説明を加えると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: No, I haven't had a really strict teacher. Most of my teachers were dedicated and helped me study effectively by answering my questions whenever I had them.

Gợi ý: 文法の誤りと不自然な表現があります。理由を明確に述べ、文を簡潔にまとめ、接続詞を適切に使いましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to work in a rule-free school because students there are independent and eager to learn, which would motivate me as a teacher.

× I'm an undergraduate student so there is no strict rules at my university and UH both now and whenever the high high school student there is no strict rules and teachers allows us to wear what we wanted to and this time was a free.

✓ I'm an undergraduate student so there are no strict rules at my university and UH both now and whenever the high school students are there are no strict rules and teachers allow us to wear what we want to and this time was free.

The subject 'rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'high school student' should be plural 'students' to match the context. 'Teachers' is plural, so the verb should be 'allow' instead of 'allows'. 'Wanted' should be 'want' to match present tense. 'This time was a free' is incorrect; 'free' is an adjective and does not need 'a'. The correct phrase is 'this time was free'.

× teachers allows us to wear what we wanted to and this time was a free.

✓ teachers allow us to wear what we want to and this time was free.

The verb 'allow' should be in the base form to agree with plural subject 'teachers'. 'Wanted' should be 'want' to maintain present tense consistency. 'A free' is incorrect; 'free' is an adjective and does not require an article here.

× It depends on student morale in the good environment where more moralistic students are and more and less and less rules makes their lives feel comfortable and better.

✓ It depends on student morale in a good environment where more moralistic students are and fewer rules make their lives feel comfortable and better.

'Student morale' is uncountable, so 'the' is not appropriate; 'a good environment' is better. 'Less rules' should be 'fewer rules' because 'rules' are countable. The verb 'makes' should be 'make' to agree with plural subject 'rules'.

× Yes, I heard, and when I was a high school student, one of the teachers that major in social sciences taught me how to write the right answer in the preparing for an university's entrance exam this teaching.

✓ Yes, I heard, and when I was a high school student, one of the teachers who majored in social sciences taught me how to write the right answer in preparing for a university entrance exam.

'Major' should be past tense 'majored' to match past context. 'That' should be 'who' when referring to people. 'In the preparing' is incorrect; it should be 'in preparing'. 'An university' is incorrect because 'university' starts with a consonant sound; it should be 'a university'. 'This teaching' is unclear and unnecessary here.

× I strongly prefer to have an fewer and fewer rules at schools.

✓ I strongly prefer to have fewer and fewer rules at schools.

'An' is incorrect before 'fewer' because 'fewer' starts with a consonant sound and is used with plural countable nouns. The phrase 'an fewer' is grammatically incorrect.

× UH students should be more responsible for their conduct, and too many rules will deprives them from a thinking uh their own, so fura and furore should.

✓ UH students should be more responsible for their conduct, and too many rules will deprive them from thinking on their own, so fewer and fewer should.

The verb 'deprives' should be 'deprive' to agree with plural subject 'rules'. 'A thinking' is incorrect; 'thinking' is uncountable here and does not need an article. 'Fura and furore' seems to be a mishearing or typo; likely intended 'fewer and fewer'.

× No I haven't. I often met many dedicated teacher but no one works. Uh Lily restricted.

✓ No, I haven't. I have often met many dedicated teachers but no one was really strict.

'Teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to match 'many'. 'Works' is incorrect here; likely intended 'was strict'. 'Lily restricted' is unclear and likely a mishearing; corrected to 'was really strict'.

× They often told me how to study effectively and and anytime answered my questions about my studies.

✓ They often told me how to study effectively and answered my questions about my studies anytime.

The repeated 'and and' is incorrect; only one 'and' is needed. 'Anytime answered' is awkward; better to place 'anytime' at the end for clarity.

× And yes, I would. It seems attractive for me because many students who have their own independence and for eager to study on their own. Will makes me more motivated to teach.

✓ And yes, I would. It seems attractive to me because many students have their own independence and are eager to study on their own. This makes me more motivated to teach.

'For eager' is incorrect; should be 'are eager'. 'Will makes' is incorrect; 'will' is unnecessary here and 'makes' is the correct verb. 'Attractive for me' should be 'attractive to me'.