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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Thí sinh

Yes, there are many rules for student at my schools. Uh, basically it is really important for every individual students uh to follow rules. Uh, like if someone don't follow rules, they never will be success in their academic background.

Giám khảo

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Thí sinh

Definitely student will get benefit from following rules like uh, if someone follow rules, they not only uh, be punctual, but also after finishing their school or university, uh, when they try to be work at that time, it will be helpful for them.

Giám khảo

Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?

Thí sinh

I know number of dedicated teacher who are really interested to teach their student and as much as possible they try to support them. Uh, I know in a teacher who are really help me when I was class 5, uh, I will never forget him.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?

Thí sinh

I like more rule rather than few. Like if someone follow rule, they not only uh be punctual, but also they can learn how to manage every situation or how to handle any difficult circumstance. So if people follow rules, they will be learn it.

Giám khảo

Have you ever had a really strict teacher?

Thí sinh

Yes, I face a teacher who are really strict, but to be honest, he's really health supportive. And whenever I feel like, uh, any kind of difficulties and I call him as much as possible, he tried to help me. Uh, but uh, he's realistic about who see, if student don't follow rules, they, uh, take punishment.

Giám khảo

Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?

Thí sinh

To be honest, I didn't have interested to teach at school, but uh, if I have a job, uh, for teaching, I will try to provide a law, uh, which is really essential for a student like uh, they have too many, they have mandatory to wear uniform when they come school.

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Part 1

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and use correct grammar, for example, 'students' instead of 'student'. Also, make your answer more concise and clear by directly stating the rules and their importance.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many rules at my school. It is important for every student to follow them because without rules, students cannot succeed academically.

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure. Use linking words like 'not only... but also' correctly and provide clearer reasons why more rules can benefit students.

Ví dụ: Definitely, students benefit from following rules because not only do they become punctual, but these habits also help them in their future jobs after graduation.

Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Use correct grammar and singular/plural forms. Be more specific about the teacher and your experience. Avoid filler words and make your answer more structured.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a dedicated teacher in class 5 who was very supportive and interested in teaching. I will never forget his help during my studies.

Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Improve grammar by using plural forms and correct verb tenses. Use linking words properly and avoid filler words. Make your points clearer and more concise.

Ví dụ: I prefer more rules at school because following rules helps students become punctual and teaches them how to manage difficult situations effectively.

Have you ever had a really strict teacher?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Use correct grammar and sentence structure. Avoid filler words and clarify your points. Explain the teacher's strictness and supportiveness more clearly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a strict teacher who was also very supportive. Whenever I had difficulties, he helped me, but he was firm about punishing students who did not follow the rules.

Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and sentence clarity. Avoid filler words and be more direct. Explain your opinion clearly and provide specific examples of essential rules.

Ví dụ: To be honest, I am not interested in teaching, but if I do, I would set essential rules, such as requiring students to wear uniforms at school.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, there are many rules for student at my schools.

Yes, there are many rules for students at my school.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' to match 'many rules' which is plural. Also, 'schools' should be singular 'school' to match the context of one school. In English, singular and plural forms must agree properly.

Singular and plural issue

× basically it is really important for every individual students uh to follow rules.

basically it is really important for every individual student to follow rules.

The phrase 'every individual students' is incorrect because 'every' requires a singular noun, so 'students' should be 'student'. This is a common singular and plural agreement issue.

Modal verb usage

× like if someone don't follow rules, they never will be success in their academic background.

like if someone doesn't follow rules, they will never be successful in their academic background.

The modal verb 'don't' should be 'doesn't' for third person singular 'someone'. Also, 'never will be success' is incorrect; it should be 'will never be successful' to use the adjective form correctly. Modal verbs and verb forms must be used properly.

Singular and plural issue

× Definitely student will get benefit from following rules like uh, if someone follow rules, they not only uh, be punctual, but also after finishing their school or university, uh, when they try to be work at that time, it will be helpful for them.

Definitely students will get benefit from following rules like, if someone follows rules, they will not only be punctual, but also after finishing their school or university, when they try to work, it will be helpful for them.

'Student' should be plural 'students' to match the general statement. 'Someone follow' should be 'someone follows' for third person singular. 'They not only uh, be punctual' should be 'they will not only be punctual' to include the modal verb 'will'. 'Try to be work' is incorrect; it should be 'try to work'. These are singular/plural and modal verb usage errors.

Singular and plural issue

× I know number of dedicated teacher who are really interested to teach their student and as much as possible they try to support them.

I know a number of dedicated teachers who are really interested to teach their students and as much as possible they try to support them.

'Number' needs an article 'a number of'. 'Teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to match 'a number of'. 'Student' should be plural 'students' to match 'their'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

Sentence structure errors

× Uh, I know in a teacher who are really help me when I was class 5, uh, I will never forget him.

Uh, I know a teacher who really helped me when I was in class 5, I will never forget him.

'In a teacher' is incorrect; it should be 'a teacher'. 'Who are really help me' is incorrect; it should be 'who really helped me' (past tense). 'When I was class 5' should be 'when I was in class 5'. This is a sentence structure and tense error.

Singular and plural issue

× I like more rule rather than few.

I like more rules rather than few.

'Rule' should be plural 'rules' to match 'more' which refers to plural. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

Modal verb usage

× Like if someone follow rule, they not only uh be punctual, but also they can learn how to manage every situation or how to handle any difficult circumstance.

Like if someone follows rules, they not only will be punctual, but also can learn how to manage every situation or how to handle any difficult circumstance.

'Someone follow' should be 'someone follows' for third person singular. 'They not only uh be punctual' should be 'they will be punctual' to include the modal verb 'will'. Also, 'rule' should be plural 'rules' to match the context. These are modal verb and singular/plural issues.

Future tense issue

× So if people follow rules, they will be learn it.

So if people follow rules, they will learn it.

'Will be learn' is incorrect; the correct future tense form is 'will learn'. The auxiliary verb 'be' is unnecessary here. This is a future tense usage error.

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, I face a teacher who are really strict, but to be honest, he's really health supportive.

Yes, I faced a teacher who was really strict, but to be honest, he's really health supportive.

'Face' should be past tense 'faced' to match the past event. 'Who are' should be 'who was' to agree with singular 'teacher'. This is a subject-verb agreement and past tense issue.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× he's really health supportive.

he's really health-supportive.

'Health supportive' should be hyphenated as 'health-supportive' to function as a compound adjective. This is an adjective usage issue.

Sentence structure errors

× And whenever I feel like, uh, any kind of difficulties and I call him as much as possible, he tried to help me.

And whenever I felt any kind of difficulties and called him as much as possible, he tried to help me.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. 'Feel' and 'call' should be past tense 'felt' and 'called' to match 'he tried'. This is a tense consistency and sentence structure error.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× he's realistic about who see, if student don't follow rules, they, uh, take punishment.

he's realistic about who sees, if students don't follow rules, they take punishment.

'Who see' should be 'who sees' for third person singular. 'Student' should be plural 'students' to match 'don't follow rules'. This is a pronoun and singular/plural agreement issue.

Modal verb usage

× To be honest, I didn't have interested to teach at school, but uh, if I have a job, uh, for teaching, I will try to provide a law, uh, which is really essential for a student like uh, they have too many, they have mandatory to wear uniform when they come school.

To be honest, I wasn't interested in teaching at school, but if I have a job for teaching, I will try to provide rules which are really essential for students, like they have to wear uniforms when they come to school.

'Didn't have interested' is incorrect; it should be 'wasn't interested' (past tense of 'to be' + adjective). 'Provide a law' should be 'provide rules' (plural). 'They have too many' is unclear and unnecessary. 'They have mandatory to wear uniform' should be 'they have to wear uniforms' (modal verb 'have to' for obligation). 'Come school' should be 'come to school' (preposition). These are modal verb, article, preposition, and singular/plural issues.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

DifficultHard; Troublesome; Inconvenient
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
InterestedAttentive; Concerned; Partisan
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
PossibleFeasible; Conceivable; Potential
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