Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Sua resposta tem algumas hesitações e erros que afetam a naturalidade e clareza. Tente responder diretamente à pergunta com uma estrutura clara, evitando repetições e erros gramaticais, e use conectores para organizar suas ideias.

Ví dụ: When I was in primary school, there were many rules for students, especially during lunch break. For example, we were not allowed to go upstairs. However, I am not sure if the rules are the same nowadays.

Gợi ý: Sua resposta é um pouco confusa e contraditória. Tente expressar sua opinião claramente e usar conectores para explicar suas razões de forma lógica e natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students benefit from having rules because they help guide behavior. Without rules, children might not learn discipline, which is important for becoming responsible adults.

Gợi ý: Sua resposta contém hesitações e erros gramaticais que prejudicam a clareza. Tente estruturar a resposta com uma frase principal clara e detalhes específicos, evitando repetições e erros de tempo verbal.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a dedicated teacher named Amelia when I was in the second grade of primary school. She was very special to me because she always encouraged me to do my best.

Gợi ý: Sua resposta está confusa e contém erros que dificultam o entendimento. Procure responder diretamente à pergunta, explicando sua preferência com exemplos claros e conectores adequados.

Ví dụ: I prefer to have fewer rules at school because when I was a student, the teachers were very strict and sometimes aggressive, which made the experience unpleasant.

Gợi ý: Sua resposta é compreensível, mas contém hesitações e repetições. Tente ser mais conciso e usar vocabulário variado para descrever o professor e a situação.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very strict math teacher in the fifth grade. He was often angry with me because I struggled with the subject and was not a good student.

Gợi ý: Sua resposta é clara, mas contém erros gramaticais e falta de coesão. Tente usar estruturas corretas e conectores para tornar a resposta mais natural e fluente.

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't like to work as a teacher because I don't have the talent for it. Instead, I prefer to become a lawyer, so I am studying hard to achieve that goal at my company.

× We didn't have the we were not.

✓ We were not allowed to go upstairs.

The original sentence is incomplete and confusing. The correct form uses 'There were' or 'We were not allowed' to indicate prohibition. Here, 'We were not allowed to go upstairs' is the correct expression to show a rule.

× I really don't know nowadays.

✓ I really don't know nowadays.

This sentence is grammatically correct but lacks clarity. No pronoun error is present, so no correction is needed.

× Yes. I don't think that it's important to have rules, especially when you are a kid, you know, because if you grow up without any rules, you are going to become a bad person, a bad adult. So it's important to have it.

✓ Yes. I think that it's important to have rules, especially when you are a kid, you know, because if you grow up without any rules, you are going to become a bad person, a bad adult. So it's important to have them.

The original sentence contradicts itself by saying 'I don't think that it's important' but then explains why rules are important. Also, 'have it' is incorrect because 'rules' is plural, so 'have them' is correct.

× I have never forget her because she was so special to me.

✓ I have never forgotten her because she was so special to me.

The verb 'forget' should be in the past participle form 'forgotten' when used with 'have never'. This is a common past tense error.

× I prefer to feel more to less rules.

✓ I prefer to feel fewer rules.

The phrase 'more to less rules' is incorrect. The correct comparative quantifier for countable nouns like 'rules' is 'fewer'. Also, 'feel' is incorrect here; 'have' is better.

× I prefer to feel more to less rules.

✓ I prefer to have fewer rules.

Same as above, 'fewer' is used for countable nouns like 'rules'. 'Have' is the correct verb to express possession of rules.

× You know that time the teachers were so aggressive and they didn't care about us, so it was not a good time.

✓ You know, at that time, the teachers were very strict and they didn't care about us, so it was not a good time.

The word 'aggressive' is not appropriate to describe teachers in this context; 'strict' is more suitable. Also, adding commas improves sentence clarity.

× I had a, a great, a strict teacher when I was at the 5th grade.

✓ I had a great, strict teacher when I was in the 5th grade.

The correct preposition is 'in' when referring to grades or years in school, not 'at'.

× He was very, very angry about me because I was not a good student.

✓ He was very angry with me because I was not a good student.

The correct preposition with 'angry' is 'with' when referring to a person, not 'about'.

× I prefer become a lawyer.

✓ I prefer to become a lawyer.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the infinitive form with 'to', so 'prefer to become' is correct.

× That's why I'm studying hard to get this position at the company that I work.

✓ That's why I'm studying hard to get this position at the company where I work.

The relative clause needs the preposition 'where' to correctly refer to the place of work.