Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и завершённым. Следует избегать грамматических ошибок и неполных предложений, а также использовать связующие слова для логичности. Например, можно добавить объяснение, почему форма неудобна, и завершить мысль о правилах по волосам.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many rules at my school. For example, wearing a uniform is mandatory, which I find quite inconvenient because it limits personal expression. Additionally, students must keep their hair tidy, which helps maintain discipline and a neat appearance.

Gợi ý: Ответ должен быть более развёрнутым и использовать связующие слова для плавности. Следует уточнить, почему правила должны касаться учёбы, и привести примеры таких правил.

Ví dụ: No, I don't think more rules would benefit students. In my opinion, rules should focus on academic matters rather than appearance, such as uniforms or makeup, because this helps students concentrate better on their studies.

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит ошибки в словах и структуре. Следует использовать правильные слова и грамматику, а также связующие слова для ясности. Нужно объяснить, почему учитель считается преданным и привести конкретные примеры поддержки.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have had a dedicated teacher. She was both strict and kind, which motivated me a lot. For instance, she always helped me with difficult topics when other teachers did not provide much support.

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит много ошибок и непонятных слов. Нужно использовать правильную лексику и грамматику, а также связующие слова. Следует чётко объяснить, почему меньше правил лучше, с конкретными причинами.

Ví dụ: I definitely prefer fewer rules at school because strict regulations about appearance, like hairstyles and makeup, are less important and can distract students from focusing on learning.

Gợi ý: Ответ очень неясный и содержит много грамматических ошибок. Следует использовать правильные времена и местоимения, а также связующие слова. Нужно чётко описать опыт с строгим учителем и объяснить, почему он был строгим и хорошим.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have had a strict teacher. Although she was very demanding, she was also a good teacher because she helped us improve significantly.

Gợi ý: Ответ должен быть более ясным и грамматически правильным. Следует объяснить, почему работа в школе без правил кажется стрессовой, используя связующие слова для логичности.

Ví dụ: If I had the opportunity to work as a teacher, I would not want to work in a rule-free school because managing students without any rules would be very stressful and challenging.

× There are a lot of rules for students at schools especially uniform is the most demanding role.

✓ There are a lot of rules for students at school, especially the uniform rule is the most demanding.

The word 'schools' should be singular 'school' to match the context. Also, 'uniform' should be followed by 'rule' to clarify meaning and 'role' is incorrect here. The definite article 'the' is needed before 'uniform rule' to specify it.

× Additionally, we need to collect our hair and.

✓ Additionally, we need to tie up our hair.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' which is incorrect conjunction use. Also, 'collect our hair' is not idiomatic; 'tie up our hair' is the correct phrase.

× No, I don't think so. In my view, rules should be those that relate to our study. Not uniform, not hairs, makeup, just something that really relates.

✓ No, I don't think so. In my view, rules should be those that relate to our studies. Not uniform, not hair, or makeup, just something that really relates.

'Our study' should be plural 'our studies' to refer to academic subjects generally. 'Hairs' is incorrect; 'hair' is uncountable here. Also, 'makeup' should be preceded by 'or' to list items properly.

× Yes I have. I have one of them who is really deductive. She is simultane, simultaneously mandatory and kind.

✓ Yes, I have. I have one who is really dedicated. She is simultaneously strict and kind.

'Deductive' is incorrect; the intended word is 'dedicated'. 'Simultane' is incomplete and should be 'simultaneously'. 'Mandatory' is incorrect in this context; 'strict' fits better.

× She really support me whereas others don't.

✓ She really supports me whereas others don't.

The verb 'support' must agree with the singular subject 'She', so it should be 'supports'.

× Definitely fewer rules because as I mentioned before, I in my view, uh, heiress and our makeup less important and can sometimes distract from main goal of addiction.

✓ Definitely fewer rules because, as I mentioned before, in my view, hair and our makeup are less important and can sometimes distract from the main goal of education.

'Heiress' is incorrect; the intended word is 'hair'. 'Hair' and 'makeup' are plural subjects and require the verb 'are'. 'Addiction' is incorrect; the intended word is 'education'. Also, 'the' is needed before 'main goal'.

× In my view, spontaneously yes and no, because I have, I had one teacher who have teached us.

✓ In my view, spontaneously yes and no, because I had one teacher who taught us.

'Have teached' is incorrect; the past tense of 'teach' is 'taught'. Also, 'have' should be removed to maintain past tense consistency.

× Uh, he's really very mandatory, but sometimes she really good teacher, significant.

✓ He was really very strict, but sometimes she was a really good and significant teacher.

'Mandatory' is incorrect; 'strict' is appropriate. 'Significant' should be used as an adjective describing 'teacher' with 'a'. Also, pronouns 'he' and 'she' are inconsistent; likely referring to the same person, so pronouns should be consistent.

× Uh, she did significant.

✓ She did significant work.

The sentence is incomplete; 'did significant' needs an object like 'work' to be correct.

× In my view, if I had the opportunity to work as a teacher, I wouldn't do it because for me this measure is really very stressful.

✓ In my view, if I had the opportunity to work as a teacher, I wouldn't do it because for me this job is really very stressful.

'Measure' is incorrect in this context; 'job' fits better. The modal verb usage is correct.