Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并且注意时态和介词的正确使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many rules at my high school. For example, students are not allowed to bring their phones to school starting this Friday. Also, teachers think that spending too much time on phones can negatively affect our studies.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，建议使用更连贯的句子并用连接词使逻辑更清晰。

Ví dụ: I don't think more rules would benefit students. It's important for young people to explore freely. If rules control them too much, they might miss opportunities to develop important skills and achieve personal growth.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，建议注意冠词和形容词的正确使用，并且使句子更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a very dedicated teacher, my high school English teacher. She is very responsible and checks our homework carefully. She is also willing to give us extra classes, which I find very impressive.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，句子结构不够自然，建议使用更准确的表达和连接词。

Ví dụ: I definitely prefer fewer rules at school. Honestly, many of the current rules are not very useful for students, so having fewer rules would be better.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够正式，建议使用更准确的时态和词汇，避免口语化和重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very strict math teacher. Math is not my strong subject, and I often got low scores. She would scold me and make me copy the entire paper repeatedly until I could solve the problems myself. It was quite frustrating.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够连贯，语法和用词有误，建议使用更清晰的句子结构和准确的词汇。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to work in a school without strict rules. I believe it creates a good environment where students and teachers can get along better. Also, after graduation, students would definitely appreciate their teachers more.

× Well, actually there's quite a lot of rules in my high school like students cannot bring their phone to the school from on this Friday and students cannot scroll really long here 'cause the teachers think that it will have bad impact on their study.

✓ Well, actually there are quite a lot of rules in my high school, like students cannot bring their phones to the school from this Friday and students cannot scroll for a really long time here because the teachers think that it will have a bad impact on their study.

这里的rules是复数，应该用are而不是is；phone应使用复数phones；scroll后面需要加介词for和时间段；bad impact前需要加不定冠词a。

× Well definitely would not benefit more from the rules cause umm it's good for students to explore more when they're still young.

✓ Well, they definitely would not benefit more from the rules because, umm, it's good for students to explore more when they're still young.

缺少主语they，导致句子不完整；cause应改为because以符合正式表达。

× But if you just let the rules controlling them, probably their lack of these skills and they can, they cannot have their own achievements.

✓ But if you just let the rules control them, they will probably lack these skills and cannot have their own achievements.

let后应接动词原形control，而不是动名词controlling；句子结构不完整，需补充主语和谓语。

× She just so responsible for all the students.

✓ She is just so responsible for all the students.

句子缺少系动词is，导致结构不完整。

× She checked the homework so carefully and she's willing to give us the extra class.

✓ She checks the homework so carefully and she's willing to give us extra classes.

时态应保持一致，描述习惯动作用一般现在时checks；extra class应使用复数形式extra classes。

× To be honest, nowadays most rules that in the school is definitely not useful for children, so I think few rules is better.

✓ To be honest, nowadays most rules in the school are definitely not useful for children, so I think fewer rules are better.

rules是复数，谓语动词应使用are；few和fewer的区别，fewer用于可数名词复数；句子中缺少谓语动词。

× Well, I had a really strict teacher that is my math teacher.

✓ Well, I had a really strict teacher who was my math teacher.

描述过去的情况，关系代词后谓语动词应使用过去时was。

× You know, math is just not my thing and umm, I always get really bad score and she's gonna shouting at me and let me copy the whole paper over and over again until I can do it on my own.

✓ You know, math is just not my thing and, umm, I always got really bad scores and she was going to shout at me and let me copy the whole paper over and over again until I could do it on my own.

描述过去的事情，时态应使用过去时；score应使用复数scores；gonna shouting不正确，应为going to shout。

× That just make me feel really annoying to be honest.

✓ That just makes me feel really annoyed, to be honest.

主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加s；feel后接形容词annoyed表示感受，而不是副词annoying。

× I think it's such a good environment for us students and teachers getting along well with each other without the rules and UMM, and also when they're graduated, the students will be definitely really appreciated about the teachers.

✓ I think it's such a good environment for us students and teachers to get along well with each other without rules, and, umm, also when they graduate, the students will definitely really appreciate the teachers.

get along后应使用不定式to get along；without the rules中the不必要；when they're graduated应改为when they graduate；appreciated用错，应该用appreciate。