Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup jelas, tetapi kalimatnya terlalu panjang dan agak berbelit. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih singkat dan langsung ke inti, serta gunakan kata penghubung yang tepat agar jawaban lebih alami dan efektif.

Ví dụ: Yes, my school has several rules for both students and teachers. These rules help maintain a good learning environment and support academic success.

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda mengandung pengulangan dan penggunaan kata pengisi seperti 'uh' yang mengurangi kelancaran. Cobalah untuk menghilangkan pengulangan dan kata pengisi, serta gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe more rules would benefit students because they encourage discipline. Moreover, following rules helps students develop strong character traits.

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, namun ada pengulangan kata dan kalimat terakhir kurang efektif. Cobalah untuk menghindari pengulangan dan membuat kalimat penutup yang lebih alami dan jelas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a dedicated teacher named Mr. Agus in high school. He was very skilled in mathematics and always explained concepts in a simple way, which showed his dedication.

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda mengandung kesalahan tata bahasa dan kalimat yang kurang jelas. Cobalah untuk memperbaiki struktur kalimat dan gunakan kata kerja yang tepat agar jawaban lebih natural dan mudah dipahami.

Ví dụ: I prefer schools to have more rules because they help students learn discipline and develop their character. Since school is a place for learning, rules can guide students to behave properly.

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda agak membingungkan dan ada pengulangan serta kata pengisi. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih jelas dan terstruktur dengan baik, serta hindari penggunaan kata pengisi.

Ví dụ: I don't remember having a very strict teacher. Most teachers followed the rules but were flexible, allowing us some freedom while still expecting respect and obedience.

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan terdapat pengulangan serta kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk menyusun kalimat yang lebih singkat, jelas, dan langsung menjawab pertanyaan dengan alasan yang spesifik.

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't like to work in a school without rules because rules are important to create a good environment for students to develop their character and abilities.

× In my school they have regulations to control the students and the teacher and the education environment in school, and it also has a purpose to maintain the environment to support the academic atmosphere for studying.

✓ In my school they have regulations to control the students and the teachers and the educational environment in school, and it also has a purpose to maintain the environment to support the academic atmosphere for studying.

The word 'teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to match the plural 'students' and the context of multiple teachers. Also, 'education environment' should be 'educational environment' as an adjective form is needed to describe the environment.

× if there are rules, some, not some, but all student in the school should obey the regulation to keep discipline in school.

✓ if there are rules, some, not some, but all students in the school should obey the regulations to keep discipline in school.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' because it refers to all students collectively. Also, 'regulation' should be plural 'regulations' to match the context of multiple rules.

× He is Mr. Agus.

✓ He was Mr. Agus.

Since the student is referring to a teacher in the past (high school), the verb 'is' should be in past tense 'was' to maintain tense consistency.

× I do prefer the school have more regulations because it can be really a platform from students to learn discipline and develop their character.

✓ I do prefer the school to have more regulations because it can be really a platform for students to learn discipline and develop their character.

The phrase 'the school have' is incorrect; it should be 'the school to have' to express preference properly. Also, 'from students' should be 'for students' as the platform is intended for students.

× Especially school is the environment for students to learning something new, so when student was introduced about the rules is it will benefit from for them.

✓ Especially school is the environment for students to learn something new, so when students are introduced to the rules, it will benefit them.

The verb 'learning' should be 'learn' after 'to' (infinitive form). 'Student was introduced' should be 'students are introduced' to match plural and present tense. 'Is it will benefit from for them' is incorrect; correct form is 'it will benefit them'.

× They sometimes give us the uh, the flexibility to follow, but still obey and respect.

✓ They sometimes give us the flexibility to follow, but still obey and respect the rules.

The sentence lacks the object after 'obey and respect'; adding 'the rules' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× No, I would not. I don't think that was a good option for me to choose a workplace because a rule free school at school.

✓ No, I would not. I don't think that is a good option for me to choose a workplace because a rule-free school is not ideal.

The phrase 'that was' should be 'that is' to maintain present tense. 'Rule free school at school' is awkward and redundant; 'rule-free school' with a hyphen is correct, and the phrase should be completed for clarity.

× I don't think that's really good options because school is a place that provide environment to develop and increase character ability and.

✓ I don't think that's a really good option because school is a place that provides an environment to develop and improve character abilities.

'Options' should be singular 'option' to match 'that's'. 'Provide' should be 'provides' to agree with singular 'school'. 'Increase character ability and.' is incomplete; corrected to 'develop and improve character abilities' for clarity and completeness.