Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and be more specific about the rules. Also, ensure subject-verb agreement ('my school also has'). Use linking words to list rules clearly.

Ví dụ: Yes, my school has several rules for students, such as wearing the uniform properly and speaking only in English during class. Additionally, we must be punctual and respect our teachers.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and filler words like 'uh' and 'you know'. Clarify your points and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules because it would help them develop discipline and good habits, which are important for their future.

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more concise.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a very dedicated maths teacher in 12th grade. She ensures that we understand every question by spending extra time on difficult problems until all students grasp them.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and filler words. Be clear and concise, and use linking words to explain your preference logically.

Ví dụ: Although rules are important, I prefer fewer rules at school because too many can be overwhelming and sometimes cause students to be late or stressed.

Gợi ý: Avoid informal language and vague phrases like 'never gave us any of her smarts'. Be more specific and use appropriate vocabulary to describe strictness.

Ví dụ: Yes, in 6th grade, my Hindi teacher was very strict. She disciplined students who did not complete their homework, which made many of us afraid to disobey her rules.

Gợi ý: Avoid unclear words like 'Velocity' and filler words. Use correct grammar and clearer expressions. Explain your opinion with logical reasons and linking words.

Ví dụ: No, I would not want to work in a school without rules because students need discipline to learn effectively. Without rules, managing the class would be very difficult.

× Yes, like all schools, my school also have a lot of rules for students, which includes wearing your uniform properly, speaking in English.

✓ Yes, like all schools, my school also has a lot of rules for students, which include wearing your uniform properly, speaking in English.

The subject 'my school' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have' to agree in number. Also, 'rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'include' instead of 'includes'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue involving singular and plural forms.

× Yes, I think students would benefit more from more schools since, uh, they'll be more disciplined in their life and they'll have, you know, better habits by following these rules.

✓ Yes, I think students would benefit more from more rules since, uh, they'll be more disciplined in their life and they'll have, you know, better habits by following these rules.

The word 'schools' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is 'rules'. Using 'schools' changes the meaning and is a plural noun that does not fit the context. This is a singular/plural and word choice issue.

× She's a very dedicated teacher. She makes sure we understand each and every question that we do.

✓ She's a very dedicated teacher. She makes sure we understand each and every question that we have.

The phrase 'question that we do' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'have' when referring to questions or problems to solve. This is a verb usage issue related to the object of understanding.

× Even though I think rules are good, I genuinely don't want more, uh, schools at school.

✓ Even though I think rules are good, I genuinely don't want more, uh, rules at school.

The word 'schools' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is 'rules'. Using 'schools' changes the meaning and is a plural noun that does not fit the context. This is a singular/plural and word choice issue.

× Yeah, I did have a really strict teacher back when I was in 6th grade. My Hindi teacher was really strict. Everyone was scared of her. I think she used to beat students who didn't study properly or do their homework.

✓ Yeah, I did have a really strict teacher back when I was in 6th grade. My Hindi teacher was really strict. Everyone was scared of her. I think she used to punish students who didn't study properly or do their homework.

The phrase 'used to beat' is inappropriate and likely incorrect in this context. 'Used to punish' is a better choice to convey strictness without implying physical violence. This is a word choice and past tense usage issue.

× She was so strict and she never gave us any of her smarts.

✓ She was so strict and she never gave us any of her marks.

The word 'smarts' is incorrect here; the intended word is likely 'marks' (grades). This is a word choice issue involving plural nouns.

× Velocity So I would never want to work in a Rotary school because, uh, from my generation self, the students are really bad and I don't think it's, I think they need to be disciplined.

✓ So I would never want to work in a rule-free school because, uh, from my generation's perspective, the students are really bad and I don't think it's, I think they need to be disciplined.

The phrase 'Velocity So' is unclear and likely a transcription error. 'Rotary school' is incorrect; the intended phrase is 'rule-free school'. Also, 'from my generation self' is incorrect; 'from my generation's perspective' is correct. These are word choice and singular/plural issues.

× And if there's no rules in a school, it's going to be really hard to teach them.

✓ And if there are no rules in a school, it's going to be really hard to teach them.

The phrase 'there's no rules' is incorrect because 'rules' is plural, so the correct form is 'there are no rules'. This is a 'there be' issue involving subject-verb agreement.