Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it has some redundancy (mentioning attendance rules twice) and minor language errors. Try to avoid repeating the same point and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, aim for more natural phrasing and concise sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, my school has several important rules. For example, attendance is strictly monitored to ensure a good learning environment. Additionally, mobile phones are banned during class to help students focus better.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing (e.g., "more beneficial from these roles", "mild phones"). Try to use correct vocabulary and grammar, and organize your ideas clearly with linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students benefit from having more rules. For instance, banning mobile phones helps reduce distractions, and strict attendance policies encourage students to be more attentive in class.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but has several language mistakes (e.g., "mathematic teacher", "uses of a mole phones"). Also, try to provide more specific details about why the teacher is dedicated and use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher named Anjali who taught mathematics. She was strict about attendance and prohibited mobile phone use because she believed these rules helped students focus and perform better in exams.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors (e.g., "a more roles", "uses of my phones"). Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with specific reasons. Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure.

Ví dụ: I prefer having more rules at school because they help students develop discipline. For example, rules about attendance and mobile phone use encourage better focus and communication among students.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but has many grammatical errors and unclear phrases (e.g., "Wish me every time through by different ways"). Try to use correct verb tenses and clearer expressions. Also, organize your answer with linking words and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very strict maths teacher named Anjali. She was strict about attendance and homework deadlines. If I didn't complete my homework on time, she would remind me firmly. She also prohibited mobile phone use during class.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing (e.g., "role preschool", "required a some strictness"). Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points logically.

Ví dụ: No, I would not like to work in a school without rules. Without rules, it would be hard to manage students and ensure they complete their tasks. Sometimes, a certain level of strictness is necessary to create a productive learning environment.

× Yes, there are many rules which I have to follow during my study.

✓ Yes, there are many rules which I have to follow during my studies.

The word 'study' in this context should be plural 'studies' because it refers to the general period or activities of learning, which is countable and usually pluralized in this context.

× mobile phones are prohibited so that they can concentrate on the study without disturbing anyone.

✓ mobile phones are prohibited so that they can concentrate on their studies without disturbing anyone.

The phrase 'concentrate on the study' is incorrect because 'study' should be plural and possessive pronoun 'their' is needed to specify whose studies are being referred to.

× Moreover, they are more strict about attendance as well.

✓ Moreover, they are stricter about attendance as well.

The comparative form 'stricter' should be used instead of 'more strict' for correct adjective comparison.

× Yes, there is no doubt that students are more beneficial from these roles because with the uh banning of the mild phones at the schools, they can study on very well without any distraction.

✓ Yes, there is no doubt that students benefit more from these rules because with the banning of mobile phones at schools, they can study very well without any distractions.

The phrase 'students are more beneficial from these roles' is incorrect; 'students benefit more from these rules' is correct. Also, 'roles' should be 'rules', 'mild phones' should be 'mobile phones', and 'study on very well' should be 'study very well'. 'Distraction' should be plural 'distractions' to match the context.

× with our roles strict rules regarding the attendance, they can attend the class at attentively and focus on our study without any disturbance.

✓ with our strict rules regarding attendance, they can attend class attentively and focus on their studies without any disturbance.

The phrase 'roles strict rules' is incorrect; it should be 'strict rules'. 'Attend the class at attentively' is incorrect; it should be 'attend class attentively'. 'Our study' should be 'their studies' to match the subject. 'Disturbance' is acceptable but 'distraction' might be better.

× Yes, in my life I got a dedicated teacher which helps me a lot during my studies.

✓ Yes, in my life I had a dedicated teacher who helped me a lot during my studies.

The relative pronoun 'which' is incorrect for people; 'who' should be used. Also, tense consistency requires past tense 'had' and 'helped' because the event is in the past.

× She is a mathematic teacher.

✓ She is a mathematics teacher.

The correct noun is 'mathematics' when referring to the subject; 'mathematic' is incorrect.

× She is very strict about the attendance and uses of a mole phones.

✓ She is very strict about attendance and the use of mobile phones.

'Uses of a mole phones' is incorrect; it should be 'the use of mobile phones'. 'Mole phones' is a misspelling of 'mobile phones'.

× She thinks that without mild phones a learner can study well, achieve good scores in examination.

✓ She thinks that without mobile phones, a learner can study well and achieve good scores in examinations.

'Mild phones' is a misspelling of 'mobile phones'. Also, 'achieve good scores in examination' should be 'achieve good scores in examinations' for plural and natural usage. The conjunction 'and' is needed to connect the two verbs.

× According to me, there should be a more roles because these rules are very beneficial for the overall development of the children, especially related to the attendance and the uses of my phones.

✓ According to me, there should be more rules because these rules are very beneficial for the overall development of children, especially related to attendance and the use of mobile phones.

'A more roles' is incorrect; 'more rules' is correct. 'The children' should be 'children' without 'the' for general reference. 'Uses of my phones' should be 'use of mobile phones'.

× In addition to this, uh, some rules like communication is very important in a proper way.

✓ In addition to this, some rules like communication are very important in a proper way.

The subject 'some rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'.

× Yes in my life I got a very strict teacher with her name was Anjali she was maths teacher.

✓ Yes, in my life I had a very strict teacher whose name was Anjali; she was a maths teacher.

'With her name was' is incorrect; 'whose name was' is correct. Also, 'got' should be 'had' for past tense. 'Maths teacher' needs an article 'a'.

× She was very strict about the attendance and the homework when I didn't complete the homework on a timesheet.

✓ She was very strict about attendance and homework when I didn't complete the homework on time.

'On a timesheet' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on time'. Also, 'the attendance' should be 'attendance'.

× Wish me every time through by different ways.

✓ She punished me every time in different ways.

'Wish me' is incorrect; likely intended 'punished me'. 'Through by different ways' is incorrect; 'in different ways' is correct.

× She strict about the uses of the my phone in class.

✓ She was strict about the use of my phone in class.

'She strict' lacks the verb 'was'. 'Uses of the my phone' is incorrect; it should be 'use of my phone'.

× No, I do not like to work as a teacher in a role preschool because if there are then no rules, it will be very difficult for a teacher to make our students comfortable.

✓ No, I do not like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because if there are no rules, it will be very difficult for a teacher to make students comfortable.

'Role preschool' is incorrect; it should be 'rule-free school'. 'Then no rules' should be 'no rules'. 'Our students' should be 'students' to match the general statement.

× Because sometimes students are not able to complete their task and they required a some strictness and that time it it makes it possible to work on that environment.

✓ Because sometimes students are not able to complete their tasks and they require some strictness, and at that time it makes it possible to work in that environment.

'Task' should be plural 'tasks'. 'Required' should be present tense 'require' to match 'are not able'. 'A some strictness' is incorrect; 'some strictness' is correct. 'It it' is a repetition error. 'Work on that environment' should be 'work in that environment'.