Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to give a more detailed answer by mentioning some specific rules and their purposes. This will make your answer more informative and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many rules at my school, such as wearing uniforms, being punctual, and respecting teachers. These rules help maintain order and create a good learning environment.

Gợi ý: Focus on clear sentence structure and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons why more rules could be beneficial.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students would benefit from more rules because they encourage discipline and respect among students. For example, rules against bullying can create a safer school environment.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and clarity by using correct verb forms and sentence structure. Also, explain why the teacher is dedicated beyond just being strict.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a very dedicated teacher who is strict but cares about our progress. He always encourages us to follow the rules and work hard, which helps us improve.

Gợi ý: Use clearer sentence structure and avoid repetition. Provide specific examples of how rules help students learn discipline and respect.

Ví dụ: I prefer having more rules at school because they teach students discipline and respect. For instance, rules about punctuality help us develop good habits for the future.

Gợi ý: Correct grammar mistakes and clarify your sentences. Also, explain how the strictness of the teacher affected you or the class.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very strict teacher named Mr. Sandra. He was straightforward and disciplined us when we broke rules, which helped us stay focused in class.

Gợi ý: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly and provide specific examples of challenges in a rule-free school.

Ví dụ: No, I would not like to work in a rule-free school because without rules, students might not respect teachers. For example, without discipline, it could be difficult to manage the class and prevent conflicts.

× Absolutely yes I do things all student would be beneficial if they have more rule because more student they are more B tend to like just disciplines and they have to respect other people.

✓ Absolutely yes, I do think all students would benefit if they have more rules because the more students there are, the more they tend to like discipline and they have to respect other people.

The sentence has singular and plural mismatches: 'all student' should be 'all students', 'more rule' should be 'more rules', and 'more student' should be 'more students'. Also, 'like just disciplines' is unclear and corrected to 'like discipline'. These corrections ensure subject and noun agreement and clarity.

× No not be avoiding the violations in school.

✓ No, they should not avoid the violations in school.

The phrase 'No not be avoiding' is incorrect. The correct form is 'they should not avoid' to express prohibition or advice. Also, 'violations in school' is acceptable but the verb form needed correction.

× I have one of the most uh, dedicated teacher in my school.

✓ I have one of the most uh, dedicated teachers in my school.

'Teacher' should be plural 'teachers' because 'one of the most' refers to a member of a group, so the noun must be plural.

× He always scold at us if he breaking the rule and if we do not have disciplines, uh, even if a small thing, he always scold at us.

✓ He always scolds us if he breaks the rules and if we do not have discipline, even for a small thing, he always scolds us.

The verb 'scold' requires the object directly without 'at'. Also, 'breaking' should be 'breaks' to match subject-verb agreement. 'Disciplines' should be 'discipline' as an uncountable noun. 'Rule' should be plural 'rules'.

× From my perspective, I do prefer to have more UMM rules in my school because it helps student to gain more knowledge of the disciplines and they even have more about the knowledge how to respect of other people even if they outside the school or inside the school that will teach student how to behave more good.

✓ From my perspective, I prefer to have more rules in my school because it helps students gain more knowledge of discipline and teaches them how to respect other people, whether they are outside or inside the school. That will teach students how to behave better.

'Student' should be plural 'students'. 'Disciplines' should be 'discipline' as an uncountable noun. 'Have more about the knowledge how to respect of other people' is awkward and corrected to 'teaches them how to respect other people'. 'More good' is incorrect; 'better' is the correct comparative adverb.

× I have one of the most treated teacher in my schools.

✓ I have one of the most strict teachers in my school.

'Treated teacher' is incorrect; likely intended 'strict teacher'. 'Teacher' should be plural 'teachers' after 'one of the most'. 'Schools' should be singular 'school' to match context.

× He is so straightforward and he always scored at us if we break the rule and if we have a lack of disciplines.

✓ He is so straightforward and he always scolds us if we break the rules and if we lack discipline.

'Scored at us' is incorrect; correct verb is 'scold'. 'Rule' should be plural 'rules'. 'Have a lack of disciplines' is incorrect; correct is 'lack discipline'.

× No, I don't think I can be the teacher and I don't really interesting of being a teacher because I think teacher is so much complicated to teach your students, especially when it's a rule free school because umm I think students won't be respected to you and they have a lack of disciplines so they tend to be more like violence and do the best.

✓ No, I don't think I can be a teacher and I'm not really interested in being a teacher because I think teaching is very complicated, especially in a rule-free school, because I think students won't respect you and they will lack discipline, so they tend to be more violent and misbehave.

'Don't really interesting' should be 'not really interested'. 'Teacher is so much complicated' corrected to 'teaching is very complicated'. 'Students won't be respected to you' corrected to 'students won't respect you'. 'Have a lack of disciplines' corrected to 'lack discipline'. 'More like violence and do the best' corrected to 'more violent and misbehave' for clarity and correctness.