Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yes, to be honest my school has many rules for students, but I think it's a good thing and it can encourage some students become more and more activity and learning some some and and learn more knowledge. So I think it's a good thing.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
From my point of view, I think students would be beneficial more from morals because I think a good rules apply a important role in school and it can encourage some students become more and more activity and learn more knowledge. So I think it's.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Thí sinh
Speak.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I prefer to have more rules at school because I think good rules play a important role in my school. It can encourage me and other students become more and more active. And we can.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Thí sinh
Real to be honest I had a really strict teacher and she is my primary school and she teach maths for me. She is really strict and when we go to TA math class and we all sky skied.
Giám khảo
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Thí sinh
Umm, from my point of view, I don't like to work as a teacher in roofing school because I think roof free school isn't, umm, excellent. And umm, is is come to be, uh, excellent, excellent school because I think.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复,表达不够自然且内容不够具体。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并提供具体的规则例子。
Ví dụ: Yes, my school has many rules, such as wearing uniforms and being punctual. I think these rules help students stay disciplined and focused on their studies.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多,表达不清晰,且未完整回答问题。建议明确表达观点,使用连贯的句子,并举例说明规则如何帮助学生。
Ví dụ: I believe students benefit more from having clear rules because they create a safe and organized environment, which helps us concentrate better on learning.
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Điểm: 0.0Gợi ý: 未作答,建议在回答时直接表达观点,并简要说明老师的特点或影响。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a dedicated teacher who always helped students after class and made lessons very interesting.
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误较多,表达不够清晰。建议完整表达观点,使用连贯句子,并具体说明规则的好处。
Ví dụ: I prefer more rules at school because they help maintain order and motivate students to participate actively in class.
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和不清晰的表达,且内容不具体。建议用正确的时态和句子结构,具体描述老师的严格表现。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a strict math teacher in primary school who always expected us to complete our homework on time and paid attention to details.
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答含糊不清,语法错误多,未完整表达观点。建议明确表达态度,使用连贯句子,并说明原因。
Ví dụ: I would not like to work in a school without rules because I believe rules are necessary to maintain discipline and create a good learning environment.
× ...it can encourage some students become more and more activity and learning some some and and learn more knowledge.
✓ ...it can encourage some students to become more and more active and learn more knowledge.
动词encourage后应接不定式to do,且形容词active拼写错误,activity是名词,应改为形容词active。
× ...encourage some students become more and more activity and learning some some and and learn more knowledge.
✓ ...encourage some students to become more and more active and learn more knowledge.
activity是名词,句中应使用形容词active来修饰students。
× ...it can encourage some students become more and more activity and learn more knowledge.
✓ ...it can encourage some students to become more and more active and learn more knowledge.
动词encourage后应接不定式to do,而不是直接接动词原形。
× From my point of view, I think students would be beneficial more from morals because I think a good rules apply a important role in school...
✓ From my point of view, I think students would benefit more from rules because I think good rules play an important role in school...
beneficial是形容词,句中应使用动词benefit。morals(道德)与上下文不符,应为rules。a good rules中rules为复数,不能用不定冠词a。apply a important role应改为play an important role。
× ...a good rules apply a important role in school...
✓ ...good rules play an important role in school...
rules为复数,前面不应加不定冠词a。apply a important role搭配错误,应为play an important role。
× ...it can encourage some students become more and more activity and learn more knowledge.
✓ ...it can encourage some students to become more and more active and learn more knowledge.
encourage后应接不定式to do。
× Student: Speak.
✓ Student: Yes, I have had a really dedicated teacher.
原句无谓语,句子不完整,应补充完整句子表达意思。
× ...good rules play a important role in my school.
✓ ...good rules play an important role in my school.
important以元音音素开头,前面冠词应为an而非a。
× It can encourage me and other students become more and more active.
✓ It can encourage me and other students to become more and more active.
encourage后应接不定式to do。
× Real to be honest I had a really strict teacher and she is my primary school and she teach maths for me.
✓ To be honest, I had a really strict teacher in my primary school and she taught me maths.
teach应使用过去式taught,且表达地点应为in my primary school。
× ...she is my primary school and she teach maths for me.
✓ ...she was my primary school teacher and she taught me maths.
应使用was表示过去身份,teach后接宾语,for me不合适,应直接用taught me。
× She is really strict and when we go to TA math class and we all sky skied.
✓ She was really strict. When we went to math class, we all studied hard.
原句结构混乱,go应使用过去式went,sky skied无意义,应改为studied hard。
× ...I don't like to work as a teacher in roofing school because I think roof free school isn't, umm, excellent.
✓ I don't like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because I think a rule-free school isn't excellent.
roofing school应为rule-free school,且前面需加不定冠词a。
× ...roof free school isn't, umm, excellent.
✓ ...a rule-free school isn't excellent.
roof free拼写错误,应为rule-free。
× And umm, is is come to be, uh, excellent, excellent school because I think.
✓ And it cannot become an excellent school because I think...
原句语序混乱,缺少主语和谓语,需调整为完整句子。