Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构不完整，表达不自然。建议加强语法基础，注意主谓一致和时态使用，同时简洁明了地回答问题。

Ví dụ: Yes, at my school, students must wear uniforms and are not allowed to use phones during class.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不清晰，逻辑不连贯，词汇使用不准确。建议学习如何组织句子，使用连接词，并用具体例子支持观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe more rules can help students focus better. For example, wearing uniforms saves time choosing clothes, so we can be more punctual.

Gợi ý: 回答内容混乱，语法和词汇错误严重，难以理解。建议练习简单句表达，明确描述老师的特点和行为。

Ví dụ: Yes, my junior high school class manager was very dedicated. She always stayed with us and cared about our progress.

Gợi ý: 回答中词汇使用错误，句子不通顺，表达含糊。建议学习正确词汇，简洁表达观点，并用具体理由支持。

Ví dụ: I prefer to have more rules at school because they help me focus and protect me from distractions.

Gợi ý: 回答非常不完整且含糊，缺乏具体信息和连贯性。建议练习完整句子，清楚描述老师的严格表现。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a strict teacher who taught us carefully and corrected our mistakes one by one.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不够清晰，语法错误影响理解。建议使用正确语法表达观点，并说明理由。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to work in a school without strict rules because I want to build friendly relationships with my students and manage the class effectively.

× Is in my school student must wear uniform and we are not allowed to use phone when we have class.

✓ In my school, students must wear uniforms and we are not allowed to use phones when we have class.

句子开头缺少主语和正确的be动词，应该用“There is”或直接用“In my school”引出句子。并且“student”应为复数“students”，phone应为复数“phones”。

× Is in my school student must wear uniform and we are not allowed to use phone when we have class.

✓ In my school, students must wear uniforms and we are not allowed to use phones when we have class.

“student”应为复数形式“students”，因为指的是所有学生；“uniform”和“phone”也应为复数形式“uniforms”和“phones”，表示多件物品。

× Actually I think students would benefit more from more rules because rules help us learn better and 1st on important task.

✓ Actually, I think students would benefit more from having more rules because rules help us learn better and focus on important tasks.

“benefit from”后面应接动名词形式“having”，而不是直接接名词。

× Actually I think students would benefit more from more rules because rules help us learn better and 1st on important task.

✓ Actually, I think students would benefit more from having more rules because rules help us learn better and focus on important tasks.

“1st on important task”表达不正确，应改为“focus on important tasks”，使用正确的动词和复数形式。

× For example use uniform can reduce our choosing close time to go to school.

✓ For example, using uniforms can reduce the time we spend choosing clothes to go to school.

“uniform”应为复数“uniforms”，且“use”应改为动名词“using”；“close”应为“clothes”。

× Is my junior high school class manager because she always a company all over and forget her little sister she always look forward.

✓ My junior high school class manager is very dedicated because she always accompanies us and never forgets her little sister; she always looks forward.

句子缺少主语和谓语，且“Is”位置错误，应调整句子结构；“a company”应为“accompanies”；动词需加第三人称单数形式。

× Is my junior high school class manager because she always a company all over and forget her little sister she always look forward.

✓ My junior high school class manager is very dedicated because she always accompanies us and never forgets her little sister; she always looks forward.

动词“accompany”、“forget”、“look”应加第三人称单数形式“accompanies”、“forgets”、“looks”，因为主语是“she”。

× I prefer to have more fruits than few woods because I think woods can help me to against many bad students that I have the time to first study.

✓ I prefer to have more fruits than few woods because I think woods can help me against many bad students so that I have time to study first.

“fruits”和“woods”应为复数形式，且“few woods”表达不清，应明确数量。

× I prefer to have more fruits than few woods because I think woods can help me to against many bad students that I have the time to first study.

✓ I prefer to have more fruits than few woods because I think woods can help me against many bad students so that I have time to study first.

“help me to against”中“to”多余，应去掉，正确用法是“help me against”。

× Actually, yes, everyone's words. Uh, she will look and she will teach us something 1 by 1. Umm.

✓ Actually, yes, everyone listens to her words. She will look after us and teach us something one by one.

句子结构混乱，“everyone's words”表达不清，应改为“everyone listens to her words”；“she will look”不完整，应补充“after us”。

× Actually, yes, everyone's words. Uh, she will look and she will teach us something 1 by 1. Umm.

✓ Actually, yes, everyone listens to her words. She will look after us and teach us something one by one.

“look”后应加介词“after”表示照顾，缺少介词导致表达不完整。

× Yes, because when I work as a teacher I want to be friends with my students. I think I have ability to manage them after a refill school.

✓ Yes, because when I work as a teacher, I want to be friends with my students. I think I have the ability to manage them in a rule-free school.

“after a refill school”表达错误，应为“in a rule-free school”，介词使用错误。

× Yes, because when I work as a teacher I want to be friends with my students. I think I have ability to manage them after a refill school.

✓ Yes, because when I work as a teacher, I want to be friends with my students. I think I have the ability to manage them in a rule-free school.

“ability”前缺少定冠词“the”，应为“the ability”。