Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then add specific examples. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct. For instance, mention a particular rule and explain why it is important.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school that students must follow. For example, we are not allowed to leave the school premises during class hours to ensure our safety and focus on studies.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence and avoid repeating ideas. Use linking words like 'because' or 'as a result' to connect your points. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students benefit from having more rules because they promote discipline and respect towards elders and teachers, which helps us develop good habits for life.

Gợi ý: Provide a direct answer with specific details about one dedicated teacher. Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a dedicated teacher who always encouraged us to be respectful and hardworking. She genuinely cared about our progress and supported us both academically and personally.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and clearly, avoid confusion between 'rooms' and 'rules'. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons for your preference.

Ví dụ: I prefer having more rules at school because they help students develop important values like honesty and respect, creating a positive learning environment for everyone.

Gợi ý: Give a clear and concise answer with specific examples. Avoid filler words and improve grammar and sentence flow.

Ví dụ: Yes, my science teacher, Mr Juan Mogul, was very strict. He insisted that our handwriting be neat and clean, which helped us develop good writing habits.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear opinion and explain your reasons with specific details. Avoid incomplete sentences and filler words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to work in a rule-free school because it would allow me to be creative in teaching and help students learn through imagination, which can improve their knowledge and vocabulary.

× Yes, there are various kind of umm rules and regulations in schools which we have to follow while being students.

✓ Yes, there are various kinds of umm rules and regulations in schools which we have to follow while being students.

The phrase 'various kind' is incorrect because 'various' implies plural, so the noun following it should be plural as well. Therefore, 'kind' should be 'kinds' to agree in number with 'various'.

× we still properly follow that rules.

✓ we still properly follow those rules.

The demonstrative pronoun 'that' is singular and does not agree with the plural noun 'rules'. The correct plural form is 'those' to match the plural noun.

× Yes, following rules will be benefit for the students because it helps us to stay disciplined and respectful, respectful to ours elders and as well as teachers.

✓ Yes, following rules will be a benefit for the students because it helps us to stay disciplined and respectful, respectful to our elders as well as teachers.

The phrase 'will be benefit' is incorrect because 'benefit' is a noun and needs an article 'a' before it. Also, 'ours elders' is incorrect; the possessive pronoun should be 'our' without 's'.

× respectful to ours elders and as well as teachers.

✓ respectful to our elders as well as teachers.

The possessive pronoun 'ours' is incorrect here; it should be 'our' to correctly modify the plural noun 'elders'.

× It also makes us disciplined and obeying person in life.

✓ It also makes us disciplined and obedient people in life.

The phrase 'obeying person' is incorrect because 'obeying' is a verb form and 'person' is singular. The correct adjective is 'obedient' and the plural noun 'people' matches the plural subject 'us'.

× Yes umm in my school there are many umm hardworking teachers which teach us on moral and respectfully umm, they are very dedicated to ours, their work and they are very umm genuine and loves us and take our care care.

✓ Yes, umm in my school there are many umm hardworking teachers who teach us morals and respect, umm, they are very dedicated to their work and they are very genuine and love us and take care of us.

'Which' should be 'who' when referring to people. 'Teach us on moral and respectfully' is incorrect; it should be 'teach us morals and respect'. 'Ours' is incorrect; it should be 'their' to show possession. 'Loves' should be 'love' to agree with plural subject 'they'. 'Take our care care' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'take care of us'.

× I prefer having more rooms at schools because umm they have students develop important values like honesty and respect umm overall having rules.

✓ I prefer having more rules at school because umm they help students develop important values like honesty and respect. Umm overall, having rules...

The word 'rooms' is incorrect in context; it should be 'rules'. 'Schools' should be singular 'school' to match the context. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Having more rules create a positive learning environment that benefits everyone.

✓ Having more rules creates a positive learning environment that benefits everyone.

The subject 'Having more rules' is singular (gerund phrase), so the verb should be singular 'creates' to agree in number.

× Yes, I have one science teacher whose name is Juan Mogul. He is really strict teacher while during my high schools he checked our handwriting also umm he need our handwriting so umm clean and out and we still also just properly and still be neat and clean.

✓ Yes, I have one science teacher whose name is Juan Mogul. He is a really strict teacher. During my high school, he checked our handwriting. Also, he needed our handwriting to be clean and neat, and we still properly keep it neat and clean.

'Strict teacher' needs an article 'a'. 'High schools' should be singular 'high school' for the period of study. 'He need' should be 'he needed' for past tense agreement. The phrase 'so umm clean and out' is unclear and corrected to 'to be clean and neat'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, if I get a chance to work as a teacher in a real free school, I will definitely engage in there because as a teacher we can get a lot of learning processes and also can enhance our knowledge and vocabulary all through our imaginations and.

✓ Yes, if I get a chance to work as a teacher in a rule-free school, I will definitely engage there because as a teacher we can experience a lot of learning processes and also enhance our knowledge and vocabulary through our imaginations.

'Real free school' is incorrect; it should be 'rule-free school'. 'Engage in there' is incorrect; 'engage there' is correct. 'Get a lot of learning processes' is awkward; 'experience a lot of learning processes' is better. The sentence ending is incomplete and corrected for clarity.