Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yes, there are survival rules for students at my school. For example, in my Senior High School, we needed to wear a uniform every day to maintain a neat appearance. Also, we were not allowed to dye our hair, and we had to keep our nails clean and short to follow the school's rules.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
I think it depends on the number of walls. If there are too many walls, students might feel restricted and their development could be limited. However, having a moderate amount of roads can help students stay focused and create a positive learning environment.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have had a really dedicated teacher. This was when I was in the elementary school. She would prepare gift boxes for some students who perform excellent day. Because she wanted to encourage those students to study hard.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Thí sinh
In my opinion, I prefer to have fewer rules at school because it allows me to have more freedom to express myself. For example, I can choose my own clothes and learn in a more relaxed and open environment.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a really strict teacher. When I was in Senior High School, she believed that every student should pass the school exams, so she was very strict about discipline and even paid close attention to the classroom environment. Because of her strict rules, we had to be very focused during lessons.
Giám khảo
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Thí sinh
Absolutely not. In this generation, more students are becoming increasingly naughty and if there is no regulations to restrict them, they will be very terrible and students cannot focus and concentrate on their schoolwork.
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× I think it depends on the number of walls.
✓ I think it depends on the number of rules.
这里的“walls”是拼写错误，应该是“rules”（规则）。单复数错误导致词义错误。
× If there are too many walls, students might feel restricted and their development could be limited.
✓ If there are too many rules, students might feel restricted and their development could be limited.
同上，'walls'应为'rules'，保持语义一致。
× However, having a moderate amount of roads can help students stay focused and create a positive learning environment.
✓ However, having a moderate amount of rules can help students stay focused and create a positive learning environment.
'roads'应为'rules'，保持语义正确。
× She would prepare gift boxes for some students who perform excellent day.
✓ She would prepare gift boxes for some students who performed excellently that day.
动词时态应与过去时态一致，且“perform excellent day”结构不正确，应为“performed excellently that day”。
× Because she wanted to encourage those students to study hard.
✓ Because she wanted to encourage those students to study hard.
此句为片段句，缺少主句，建议合并或改为完整句。
× Yes, I have a really strict teacher.
✓ Yes, I had a really strict teacher.
根据上下文，描述过去的经历，时态应为过去时。
× if there is no regulations to restrict them, they will be very terrible and students cannot focus and concentrate on their schoolwork.
✓ if there are no regulations to restrict them, they will be very terrible and students cannot focus and concentrate on their schoolwork.
'regulations'为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'。
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