Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yes, there are survival rules for students at my school. For example, in my Senior High School, we needed to wear a uniform every day to maintain a neat appearance. Also, we were not allowed to dye our hair, and we had to keep our nails clean and short to follow the school's rules.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
I think it depends on the number of walls. If there are too many walls, students might feel restricted and their development could be limited. However, having a moderate amount of roads can help students stay focused and create a positive learning environment.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have had a really dedicated teacher. This was when I was in the elementary school. She would prepare gift boxes for some students who perform excellent day. Because she wanted to encourage those students to study hard.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Thí sinh
In my opinion, I prefer to have fewer rules at school because it allows me to have more freedom to express myself. For example, I can choose my own clothes and learn in a more relaxed and open environment.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a really strict teacher. When I was in Senior High School, she believed that every student should pass the school exams, so she was very strict about discipline and even paid close attention to the classroom environment. Because of her strict rules, we had to be very focused during lessons.
Giám khảo
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Thí sinh
Absolutely not. I believe that without any rules or regulations, students might become very disruptive and find it difficult to focus on their studies. For example, in a rule free environment, some students may take advantage of the lack of discipline which could lead to chaos and.
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× I think it depends on the number of walls.
✓ I think it depends on the number of rules.
这里的“walls”是拼写错误，应该是“rules”（规则）。单复数错误导致词义错误。建议注意单词拼写，确保表达准确。
× If there are too many walls, students might feel restricted and their development could be limited.
✓ If there are too many rules, students might feel restricted and their development could be limited.
同上，‘walls’应为‘rules’，单词拼写错误导致语义不清。
× However, having a moderate amount of roads can help students stay focused and create a positive learning environment.
✓ However, having a moderate amount of rules can help students stay focused and create a positive learning environment.
‘roads’应为‘rules’，拼写错误导致语义错误。
× She would prepare gift boxes for some students who perform excellent day.
✓ She would prepare gift boxes for some students who performed excellently that day.
‘perform excellent day’结构不正确，应该用过去式‘performed’和副词‘excellently’修饰动词，且加上时间状语‘that day’。建议注意动词时态和副词使用。
× Because she wanted to encourage those students to study hard.
✓ She wanted to encourage those students to study hard.
句子以连词‘Because’开头，导致句子结构不完整，应将其与前句合并或改为完整句。建议避免使用不完整的从句。
× Yes, I have a really strict teacher.
✓ Yes, I had a really strict teacher.
上下文为过去时态，描述过去经历，动词时态应为过去式‘had’。建议时态保持一致。
× Because of her strict rules, we had to be very focused during lessons.
✓ We had to be very focused during lessons because of her strict rules.
句子以连词‘Because’开头，形成不完整句，应调整句子结构使其完整。建议避免使用独立的从属连词开头句子。
× For example, in a rule free environment, some students may take advantage of the lack of discipline which could lead to chaos and.
✓ For example, in a rule-free environment, some students may take advantage of the lack of discipline, which could lead to chaos.
句子末尾不完整，缺少内容，且‘rule free’应连字符连接为‘rule-free’。建议注意句子完整性和复合形容词的正确写法。
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