Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复词汇，表达不够自然，且细节描述不够具体。建议避免重复，使用更准确的词汇，并具体说明规则内容。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school, which is one of the top private high schools in Taiwan. For instance, students must follow guidelines regarding hairstyles, uniforms, and dress code to maintain discipline.

Gợi ý: 表达不够连贯，语法错误较多，且观点不够清晰。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并明确表达观点。

Ví dụ: I believe that rules help create a respectful learning environment; however, if there are too many rules, students might feel overwhelmed and tempted to break them.

Gợi ý: 语法和用词有误，表达不够自然。建议注意主谓一致，使用更准确的词汇，并丰富细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. Many teachers at my school are very dedicated; for example, they often spend extra time helping students who are struggling with their studies.

Gợi ý: 句子结构混乱，表达不清晰，且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并使用正确的语法。

Ví dụ: I prefer having some rules at school because they help students develop respect for teachers and classmates, creating a positive environment.

Gợi ý: 表达不够自然，细节描述不够清晰。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并具体说明严格的表现。

Ví dụ: Yes, my high school teacher was very strict. For instance, if a student's math score was below 90, they would receive a penalty point.

Gợi ý: 表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，且用词不当。建议使用更准确的词汇，简化句子，并明确表达观点。

Ví dụ: I wouldn't like to work in a school without rules because I am not very strict, and rules help me manage students effectively.

× For example, my school is the top one privacy school in Taiwan.

✓ For example, my school is the top private school in Taiwan.

这里的“privacy school”应为“private school”，因为“privacy”是名词，表示“隐私”，而“private”是形容词，表示“私立的”，符合语境。

× We have to obey the rule like our hairstyle, our shirt and other art rule.

✓ We have to obey the rules like our hairstyle, our shirt and other art rules.

“rule”应使用复数形式“rules”，因为后面列举了多个规则。

× I think the rules can create a respectable learning environment for school student.

✓ I think the rules can create a respectable learning environment for school students.

“student”应为复数“students”，因为指的是学校里的所有学生。

× However, too many rules should be obeyed.

✓ However, too many rules should not be obeyed.

句意应表达“太多规则不应该被遵守”，原句缺少否定，导致意思错误。

× Well, let students feel tired and want to broken the rules.

✓ Well, let students feel tired and want to break the rules.

“broken”是过去分词，句中应使用动词原形“break”与“want to”搭配。

× Many teacher in the top private high school will dedicate in their career.

✓ Many teachers in the top private high school will dedicate themselves to their career.

“teacher”应为复数“teachers”，且“dedicate”后应加反身代词“themselves”并用介词“to”。

× Many teacher in the top private high school will dedicate in their career.

✓ Many teachers in the top private high school will dedicate themselves to their career.

“dedicate”后应接介词“to”，表示“致力于”。

× For example, they will pay extra time to support those whose work is a little bit poor.

✓ For example, they will spend extra time to support those whose work is a little bit poor.

“pay extra time”表达不正确，应为“spend extra time”。

× Although I know the disadvantage of more rules will be.

✓ Although I know the disadvantages of more rules will be.

“disadvantage”应为复数“disadvantages”，因为指多个缺点。

× However, I still support that we have morals at school which can make students respect their teacher, their children, their student and created a environmental.

✓ However, I still support that we have morals at school which can make students respect their teachers, their children, their students and create an environment.

“created”应为动词原形“create”，与“can”连用；“teacher”和“student”应为复数；“a environmental”应为“an environment”，冠词使用错误。

× However, I still support that we have morals at school which can make students respect their teacher, their children, their student and created a environmental.

✓ However, I still support that we have morals at school which can make students respect their teachers, their children, their students and create an environment.

“a environmental”错误，因“environment”以元音音素开头，应使用“an”。

× Yes, my Senior High School teacher is very strict to every student.

✓ Yes, my Senior High School teacher is very strict with every student.

“strict to”应改为“strict with”，且“student”可保持单数，表示每个学生。

× Yes, my Senior High School teacher is very strict to every student.

✓ Yes, my Senior High School teacher is very strict with every student.

“strict”后应接介词“with”，表示对某人严格。

× For example, if our math score is under 90, that's one point we got 1 punishment.

✓ For example, if our math score is under 90, that's one point and we get one punishment.

“got”应为一般现在时“get”，与条件句时态一致；“1”应写为“one”；“punishment”前加冠词。

× For example, if our math score is under 90, that's one point we got 1 punishment.

✓ For example, if our math score is under 90, that's one point and we get one punishment.

条件句中应使用一般现在时，故“got”应改为“get”。

× I don't think so because I am not a straight person and I don't want to pay more attention on control students.

✓ I don't think so because I am not a strict person and I don't want to pay more attention to controlling students.

“straight”应为“strict”；“pay attention on”应为“pay attention to”；“control students”应改为动名词形式“controlling students”。

× I don't think so because I am not a straight person and I don't want to pay more attention on control students.

✓ I don't think so because I am not a strict person and I don't want to pay more attention to controlling students.

“straight”是形容词，意思是“直的”，应为“strict”表示“严格的”；“pay attention”后应接介词“to”；“control”应改为动名词“controlling”。

× So if the school rules can help me to control my student I will be very appreciated.

✓ So if the school rules can help me to control my students, I will be very appreciative.

“student”应为复数“students”；“appreciated”应为形容词“appreciative”，表示“感激的”。

× So if the school rules can help me to control my student I will be very appreciated.

✓ So if the school rules can help me to control my students, I will be very appreciative.

“appreciated”是过去分词，表示被感激；此处应使用形容词“appreciative”，表示“感激的”。