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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Thí sinh

A Definitely. There are many roads in my school. For example, students shouldn't eat in the class and students shouldn't sleep early in the class. I think it's a good way to make us live a better life.

Giám khảo

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Thí sinh

Well, of course many rules help students to develop good habits, but too much can be the opposite. Students should be given more space to think, think of themselves, and do more free things in their free time.

Giám khảo

Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?

Thí sinh

Well, of course, in my high school, my chemistry teacher always stayed in the classroom even after the class to solve the problems for the students and.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?

Thí sinh

Oh, I think fewer rules are better because the university students should have more time to spend on their truly love things and they should have the ability to be independent and creative.

Giám khảo

Have you ever had a really strict teacher?

Thí sinh

Yes, it's my headmaster in junior high school. I remember that time, my English grade was not very ideal, so he chatted with me. She told me that you shouldn't be so lazy, you should pay more effort in it.

Giám khảo

Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?

Thí sinh

Oh, I don't want to work as a teacher even in a real free school because the kids can be more wild be if there are no restrictions. So it will cost lots of patience. I don't have that natural patience.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当,如“roads”应为“rules”,“sleep early in the class”表达不准确。建议使用正确的词汇和句式,避免重复,表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students are not allowed to eat or sleep during class. I believe these rules help maintain a good learning environment.

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答思路清晰,但表达略显重复,如“think, think of themselves”建议简化。可以使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I think having some rules is beneficial because they help students develop good habits; however, too many rules might restrict their freedom. Therefore, students should have enough space to think independently and enjoy their free time.

Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答不完整,句子未结束,缺少细节支持。建议完整表达观点,并补充具体例子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very dedicated chemistry teacher in high school. She often stayed after class to help students with their questions, which showed her commitment to our learning.

Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 表达基本清楚,但“truly love things”用词不准确,建议使用更自然的表达,如“things they truly love”。句子结构可更流畅。

Ví dụ: I prefer fewer rules because university students need more time to focus on things they truly love, and having fewer rules encourages independence and creativity.

Have you ever had a really strict teacher?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中性别代词混用(he/she),表达不够自然,且“pay more effort in it”不地道。建议注意代词一致性,使用更自然的表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, my headmaster in junior high was very strict. When my English grades were low, he talked to me and said I shouldn't be lazy and needed to work harder.

Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚,但有语法错误,如“more wild be if”应为“wilder if”。建议注意语法准确性,表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I wouldn't want to work as a teacher in a school without rules because children might become wilder without restrictions, which would require a lot of patience that I don't naturally have.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of prepositions

× There are many roads in my school.

There are many rules in my school.

这里的 'roads' 应该是 'rules',因为题目问的是学校的规章制度,而不是道路。这个错误属于词汇使用错误,虽然不在列表中,但为了准确表达,需改正。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× students shouldn't sleep early in the class.

students shouldn't sleep in the class.

'sleep early' 这个表达不符合英语习惯,应该直接说 'sleep in the class',因为 'sleep early' 意思是早睡,与句意不符。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× my chemistry teacher always stayed in the classroom even after the class to solve the problems for the students and.

my chemistry teacher always stayed in the classroom even after the class to solve problems for the students.

句子末尾多了一个 'and',导致句子不完整,应去掉。

Singular and plural issue

× the university students should have more time to spend on their truly love things

the university students should have more time to spend on their true love things

'truly love things' 中 'truly' 是副词,修饰 'love' 不合适,应改为形容词 'true' 修饰 'love things'。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I remember that time, my English grade was not very ideal, so he chatted with me. She told me that you shouldn't be so lazy, you should pay more effort in it.

I remember that time, my English grade was not very ideal, so he chatted with me. He told me that I shouldn't be so lazy, and I should put more effort into it.

前后代词不一致,先用 'he' 指代校长,后面却用 'she',应保持一致。同时,直接引语改为间接引语时,代词应相应变化。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× you should pay more effort in it.

you should put more effort into it.

英语中 'pay effort' 不常用,正确搭配是 'put effort into',表示投入努力。

Incorrect use of conjunctions

× the kids can be more wild be if there are no restrictions.

the kids can be wilder if there are no restrictions.

'more wild be' 语序错误,且比较级用法不正确,应改为 'wilder',且去掉多余的 'be'。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BetterSuperior; More advantageous; To a higher standard
EarlyAdvance; Primitive; Prompt
FreeWithout charge; Unencumbered by; Vacant; Independent; On the loose
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
HighTall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
LazyIdle
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
WildUntamed; Primitive; Uninhabited; Uncontrolled; Distraught
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