Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to organise your answer more clearly by starting with a direct response, then giving specific examples. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and unclear phrases such as 'petty rules' or 'tail'. Use correct vocabulary, for example, 'hair' instead of 'tail', and be precise with rules you mention. Keep your answer concise and coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must keep their hair neatly trimmed and are not allowed to wear nail polish or jewellery. These rules help maintain a uniform appearance among students.

Gợi ý: Focus on giving a clear opinion and support it with reasons. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words like 'because' or 'therefore' to connect ideas logically. Try to finish your thoughts fully to make your answer more effective.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules because they help maintain order and discipline. Without rules, it would be difficult for students to focus and learn effectively.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by reducing hesitation and using more precise vocabulary. Instead of 'really dedicated towards their students or their work', say 'very dedicated to their students and passionate about teaching'. Also, try to link your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have had many dedicated teachers. For instance, at my private school, the teachers were very hardworking and passionate about helping students succeed.

Gợi ý: Make your opinion clearer by stating it directly at the start. Avoid vague phrases like 'you know' and incomplete ideas. Use linking words such as 'however' to contrast ideas. Be specific about the effects of having more or fewer rules.

Ví dụ: I prefer schools to have some leniency for students, as too many strict rules can be stressful. However, without enough rules, students might become less disciplined and inconsistent in their behaviour.

Gợi ý: Try to organise your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid incomplete sentences and repetition. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'because' to explain the effects of the teacher's strictness.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very strict maths teacher in 6th grade. She often scolded students, and when she entered the classroom, everyone would become very quiet because they were afraid of being shouted at.

Gợi ý: Express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons. Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences. Use linking words like 'because' to connect your ideas logically. Try to be more specific about why a rule-free school would be problematic.

Ví dụ: No, I would not like to work in a rule-free school because without rules, children might become undisciplined and behave rudely. Rules are important to create a respectful learning environment.

× Yes, there are actually uh, petty rules at best school for the students.

✓ Yes, there are actually petty rules at my school for the students.

The phrase 'at best school' is incorrect because 'best' is an adjective and needs a determiner or possessive pronoun before 'school'. The correct phrase is 'at my school' to indicate the specific school being referred to.

× There is this rule of maintaining your uh, tail or cutting your tails on time before it grows a lot or you can't apply date polishes or any type of journey you can't wear them.

✓ There is this rule about maintaining your hair or cutting your hair on time before it grows too long, and you can't apply nail polish or wear any type of jewellery.

The original sentence misuses 'tail' instead of 'hair', and 'date polishes' likely means 'nail polish'. Also, 'journey' is incorrect; it should be 'jewellery'. The prepositions and word choices were incorrect, so they were corrected to appropriate terms and prepositions for clarity.

× If the organization, the school doesn't have any rules, uh, that I guess it would be not so great for them because, uh, rules.

✓ If the organization, the school, doesn't have any rules, I guess it would not be so great for them because of the rules.

The sentence structure is awkward and incomplete. Adding 'because of the rules' clarifies the reason. Also, commas are added for clarity. The plural 'rules' is correct here.

× I think rules is good to be consistent to be dis.

✓ I think rules are good to keep consistency and discipline.

The subject 'rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, the phrase 'to be consistent to be dis' is unclear and corrected to 'to keep consistency and discipline' for clarity.

× all of my teachers were really dedicated towards their students or their work.

✓ All of my teachers were really dedicated to their students and their work.

The correct preposition after 'dedicated' is 'to', not 'towards'. Also, 'and' is more appropriate than 'or' to connect the two objects of dedication.

× I, I've learned from the private school, so the teachers are really hard working and they are so enthusiastic about their work.

✓ I have learned from a private school, so the teachers are really hardworking and enthusiastic about their work.

'The private school' implies a specific school; if not specific, 'a private school' is better. 'Hard working' should be one word 'hardworking'. The sentence is corrected for article use and word form.

× I think that they should give leniency to the students or to the employees.

✓ I think that they should give leniency to the students or employees.

The preposition 'to' is correctly used before 'students', but repeating it before 'employees' is unnecessary. Removing the second 'to' improves sentence flow.

× But I guess it would create a best people will be more, you know, less consistent and less disciplined as they are when they are strict rules.

✓ But I guess it would create a situation where people will be less consistent and less disciplined than when there are strict rules.

The phrase 'a best people' is incorrect; 'a situation where people' is appropriate. Also, 'as they are when they are strict rules' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'than when there are strict rules' for comparison.

× In 6th grade I had really strict maths teachers used to scold everyone.

✓ In 6th grade, I had a really strict maths teacher who used to scold everyone.

The original sentence incorrectly combines plural 'teachers' with singular verb 'used to scold'. It is corrected to singular 'teacher who used to scold' for subject-verb agreement.

× And whenever she came into the class, everyone, literally there was a bit of silence.

✓ And whenever she came into the class, there was literally a bit of silence from everyone.

The original sentence has awkward word order. Moving 'literally' and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and flow.

× And she shouted at students very.

✓ And she shouted at the students a lot.

The original sentence ends abruptly and is incomplete. Adding 'a lot' completes the thought and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I don't think so that work any other teacher in a room free school would be that great because the children there would be out disciplined or would be rude.

✓ I don't think that working as a teacher in a rule-free school would be that great because the children there would be undisciplined or rude.

'Work any other teacher' is incorrect; 'working as a teacher' is correct. 'Room free' should be 'rule-free'. 'Out disciplined' is incorrect; 'undisciplined' is the correct adjective.

× So I think that is not a great thing to do because when a child is not disciplined, they're just rude.

✓ So I think that is not a great thing to do because when a child is not disciplined, they are just rude.

Using 'they're' as a singular pronoun is acceptable in informal English, but for clarity, 'they are' is better. The sentence is otherwise correct.