Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more fluent and clear by avoiding hesitations and repetitions. Use a clear topic sentence and provide specific details about the types of rules. For example, mention some common rules and their purposes to enrich your answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many rules at my university. For instance, students must attend classes regularly and submit assignments on time. These rules help maintain discipline and ensure a good learning environment.

Gợi ý: Improve clarity by organizing your ideas logically and using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases like 'put in northern all type of situations.' Instead, explain how more rules can help in specific situations to create a peaceful environment.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe more rules can benefit students because they provide clear guidelines for behavior. For example, rules against bullying help create a peaceful and respectful atmosphere for everyone.

Gợi ý: Work on sentence structure and clarity. Use past tense consistently and complete your thoughts. Provide specific examples of how the teacher was dedicated and how it helped you connect with the subject.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a dedicated history teacher in high school. He explained topics clearly and used interesting examples, which helped me understand and enjoy history more.

Gợi ý: Express your opinion clearly and avoid vague phrases like 'inner rules.' Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons for your preference.

Ví dụ: I prefer to have a moderate number of rules at school because they help maintain order and create a respectful environment for everyone.

Gợi ý: Clarify your sentences and avoid unclear words like 'Burberry.' Use correct grammar and provide specific details about why the teacher was strict and how it affected the class.

Ví dụ: Yes, my philosophy professor was very strict. His classes were challenging, and he expected all students to participate actively, which made the atmosphere tense.

Gợi ý: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Use correct verb tenses and avoid incomplete sentences. Clearly explain why you would not like to work in a rule-free school and provide reasons.

Ví dụ: No, I would not like to work in a school without rules because rules are necessary to maintain respect and order. Without them, it would be difficult to teach effectively.

× Yeah, they, there are many rules in my, in my university, uh, because we have a, a ruler's book, so we have to follow to, to stay in the university and apply for the different type of course.

✓ Yeah, there are many rules in my university because we have a rule book, so we have to follow it to stay in the university and apply for different types of courses.

The original sentence has redundancy and incorrect article usage ('a ruler's book' should be 'a rule book'). Also, 'different type of course' should be plural 'different types of courses' to match plural context. The phrase 'follow to' is incorrect; it should be 'follow it'. This correction addresses the 'There be issue' and article errors.

× ...apply for the different type of course.

✓ ...apply for different types of courses.

The phrase 'different type of course' is incorrect because 'different' implies plural, so 'types' and 'courses' should be plural to agree in number.

× ...so we have to follow to, to stay in the university...

✓ ...so we have to follow it to stay in the university...

The verb 'follow' should be followed by an object, not a preposition 'to'. The correct phrase is 'follow it'.

× Yes, I think so, because this rule put in northern all type of situations and things, so it's more it's easier to only follow and make a peaceful place for the people.

✓ Yes, I think so, because this rule applies to all types of situations and things, so it's easier to follow and create a peaceful place for people.

The original sentence misuses 'put in northern' which is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'applies to'. Also, 'all type' should be 'all types'. The phrase 'make a peaceful place for the people' is better as 'create a peaceful place for people' for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, when I was in a high school, I had a history teacher and and he was really dedicated because he, the way he's playing all the topics was fantastic and I connect with the history and the examples that.

✓ Yes, when I was in high school, I had a history teacher who was really dedicated because the way he explained all the topics was fantastic and I connected with the history and the examples.

The phrase 'he's playing all the topics' is incorrect; it should be 'he explained all the topics'. Also, 'I connect' should be past tense 'I connected' to match the past context. 'In a high school' should be 'in high school'.

× MMM I in the middle. I would like to have the inner rules to have a good environment at school.

✓ I'm in the middle. I would like to have more rules to have a good environment at school.

'The inner rules' is incorrect; likely intended 'more rules'. Also, 'MMM I in the middle' is incomplete and should be 'I'm in the middle'.

× Uh, I think the rules make the things in order and make the people feel good. I'd be more respectful with others.

✓ I think the rules keep things in order and make people feel good. I'd be more respectful to others.

'Make the things in order' is incorrect; 'keep things in order' is better. 'Make the people feel good' should be 'make people feel good'. 'Respectful with others' should be 'respectful to others'.

× Yes, I have That was my philosophy professor. Uh, I remember all his classes was really difficult because all the Burberry feels like tension, impression and no one, all the students, uh, can answer for.

✓ Yes, I have. That was my philosophy professor. I remember all his classes were really difficult because they felt tense and oppressive, and no student could answer.

'I have That was' is incomplete; should be 'Yes, I have.' The verb 'was' should be 'were' to agree with plural 'classes'. The phrase 'all the Burberry feels like tension, impression' is unclear and likely incorrect; replaced with 'they felt tense and oppressive' for clarity. 'No one, all the students, can answer for' is incorrect; corrected to 'no student could answer'.

× No, I wasn't because I really thinks the rules are necessary to survive and to have a nice environment, so I couldn't, uh, explain the topics with the students. Don't be respectful to me.

✓ No, I wouldn't because I really think the rules are necessary to survive and to have a nice environment, so I couldn't explain the topics to the students if they weren't respectful to me.

'I wasn't' is incorrect modal usage; should be 'I wouldn't' to express preference. 'I really thinks' should be 'I really think'. 'Don't be respectful to me' is incorrect; corrected to 'if they weren't respectful to me' to clarify meaning.

× And apart of that I don't like teaching other persons I don't have.

✓ Apart from that, I don't like teaching other people.

'Apart of that' should be 'Apart from that'. 'Other persons I don't have' is unclear and incorrect; simplified to 'other people'.