Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。例えば、「This student couldn't bring our enterprises」は意味が不明瞭で、正しい表現に直す必要があります。また、具体的なルールの説明が曖昧なので、より明確に述べることが望ましいです。

Ví dụ: Yes, there were several rules at my high school. For example, students were not allowed to bring electronic devices such as mobile phones, games, or comics to school.

Gợi ý: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。例えば、「Obeying loose」という表現は不自然で、正しい表現に直す必要があります。また、理由を明確に述べ、接続詞を使って論理的に話す練習をしましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think having more rules can help students become more polite and disciplined. However, sometimes too many rules can be annoying and restrictive.

Gợi ý: 内容は良いですが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が目立ちます。例えば、「It's a hard when I was a high school student」は意味が不明瞭です。より自然な表現と具体的な説明を心がけましょう。

Ví dụ: When I was in high school, I had a very dedicated English teacher. He taught us not only language skills but also important life lessons, which have been essential for me.

Gợi ý: 回答が非常に不明瞭で、意味が伝わりにくいです。「Huber lose」や「having lose」は誤りで、正しい単語や表現を使う必要があります。また、理由を明確に述べ、文を簡潔にまとめましょう。

Ví dụ: I prefer to have fewer rules at school because sometimes strict rules can be annoying. For example, the early start time was difficult for me because I am not a morning person.

Gợi ý: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。「hot and had a tenderness」などの表現は不自然です。より簡潔で正確な表現を使い、具体例を明確に述べましょう。

Ví dụ: Actually, my teachers in junior high and high school were very kind and gentle. For example, my math teacher never scolded me even when I forgot to do my homework.

Gợi ý: 回答が不完全で文法的に誤りがあります。「little free school」や「schools with」の表現が不明瞭です。理由を明確に述べ、文を完結させる練習をしましょう。

Ví dụ: No, I would not like to work at a school without rules. I believe that rules help students behave politely and maintain discipline, which is important for learning.

× This student couldn't bring our enterprises, for example, games, comics or mobile phones.

✓ Students couldn't bring their belongings, for example, games, comics, or mobile phones.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'This student' (singular) and 'our enterprises' which is unclear and incorrect. It should be plural 'Students' and 'their belongings' to match the context. 'Enterprises' is not appropriate here; 'belongings' or 'items' fits better.

× Obeying loose leads to be more polite, that's why I agree this point.

✓ Obeying rules leads to being more polite, that's why I agree with this point.

The phrase 'Obeying loose' is incorrect; 'loose' is an adjective meaning not tight, but the intended word is 'rules'. Also, 'leads to be' should be 'leads to being' because 'lead to' is followed by a gerund.

× But on the other hand really sometimes annoying.

✓ But on the other hand, it is sometimes really annoying.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb, making it incomplete. Adding 'it is' clarifies the sentence structure and makes it grammatically correct.

× It's a hard when I was a high school student, uh, my English teacher was very dedicated person.

✓ It was hard when I was a high school student. Uh, my English teacher was a very dedicated person.

The phrase 'It's a hard' is incorrect; it should be 'It was hard' to match past tense. Also, 'very dedicated person' needs an article 'a' before 'very dedicated person'.

× He not only told us about the English skills, but also the important importance of our lives.

✓ He not only taught us English skills, but also the important aspects of our lives.

'Told us about the English skills' is awkward; 'taught us English skills' is better. 'Important importance' is redundant; 'important aspects' or 'importance' alone is sufficient.

× That experience is really essential for my life.

✓ That experience was really essential for my life.

The sentence is grammatically correct but the tense should be past 'was' to match the past context.

× Yes, I prefer to have Huber lose because sometimes having lose annoys me.

✓ Yes, I prefer to have fewer rules because sometimes having loose rules annoys me.

'Huber lose' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended 'fewer rules'. 'Having lose' is incorrect; 'having loose rules' or 'having fewer rules' is correct.

× For example, I am rather uh night old, so the start time of the school is historically uh decided.

✓ For example, I am rather a night owl, so the start time of the school is historically decided.

'Night old' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'night owl' meaning someone who stays up late. 'Historically uh decided' should be 'historically decided'.

× Actually now when I was there junior high school and high school student old teacher is very kind and hot and had a tenderness.

✓ Actually, when I was a junior high and high school student, my old teachers were very kind, warm, and tender.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. It needs proper subject-verb agreement and clearer adjectives. 'Hot' is inappropriate; 'warm' fits better.

× For example the maths teacher did not scold me even though we for forgot to do homework.

✓ For example, the math teacher did not scold me even though I forgot to do my homework.

'We for forgot' is incorrect; it should be 'I forgot'. Also, 'maths' is acceptable in British English but 'math' is more common in American English. 'My homework' is more natural.

× Especially at the little free school, based on obeying laws, students can behave politely and strictly.

✓ Especially at a free school, based on obeying rules, students can behave politely and properly.

'Little free school' is unclear; 'a free school' is better. 'Obeying laws' is too strong; 'obeying rules' fits school context. 'Strictly' is an adverb usually for behavior enforcement, 'properly' fits better for polite behavior.

× For this reason, I would like to be our teacher at schools with.

✓ For this reason, I would like to be a teacher at such schools.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'Our teacher at schools with' is unclear. The correction completes the sentence properly.