Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding confusing phrases like 'maintain the decrement of the academic sector.' Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question. Use simple and clear language to explain the rules.

Ví dụ: Yes, my school had many rules to ensure students behaved properly and focused on their studies. Even now at university, there are rules to help maintain a good learning environment.

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and unclear phrases such as 'we can say.' Make your answer more direct and structured by stating your opinion clearly and supporting it with specific reasons.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe more rules help students become punctual and focused. For example, rules about attendance encourage students to be on time and take their studies seriously.

Gợi ý: Improve clarity by organizing your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid confusing grammar and pronoun use. Be specific about how the teacher was dedicated.

Ví dụ: Yes, my mother was a dedicated teacher for fifth grade. She treated all her students like her own children and helped them even in subjects she was not assigned to, so they could perform well in exams.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more natural by using simpler sentence structures and clearer explanations. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: I prefer fewer but stricter rules because too many rules can make students feel overwhelmed. Strict rules help students stay disciplined and punctual without feeling burdened.

Gợi ý: Avoid sharing negative or sensitive personal experiences that may be inappropriate. Instead, focus on describing the teacher's strictness in a respectful and clear way, using proper grammar and sentence structure.

Ví dụ: Yes, in fifth grade I had a strict teacher named Dimple Sharma. She enforced rules firmly and expected us to follow them closely, which helped maintain discipline in the class.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more fluent by removing filler words and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons for your opinion.

Ví dụ: No, I would not like to work in a rule-free school because without rules, students may lack discipline and punctuality. This makes it difficult for teachers to manage the class and help students focus on their studies.

× Yes, there were many rules in my school but now I'm pursuing for my bachelors in university.

✓ Yes, there were many rules in my school but now I'm pursuing my bachelor's degree at university.

The phrase 'pursuing for my bachelors' is incorrect. The verb 'pursue' does not require the preposition 'for' in this context. Also, 'bachelors' should be 'bachelor's degree' to be grammatically correct and clear.

× There are also many rules that all students have to follow to maintain the decrement of the academic sector we can see.

✓ There are also many rules that all students have to follow to maintain the development of the academic sector we can see.

The word 'decrement' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is likely 'development'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; replacing 'decrement' with 'development' corrects the meaning.

× Yes, of course rules are something that makes student punctual and quite more uh, oriented.

✓ Yes, of course rules are something that make students punctual and more oriented.

The subject 'rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'make' not 'makes'. Also, 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with the plural subject.

× Yes my mother was a teacher of class 5th and she actually teach all the students like her own kids even though it is if she do not belong to the subject also then also she used to teach the students so that she he or she can get good marks in the exams.

✓ Yes, my mother was a teacher of class 5th and she actually taught all the students like her own kids even if she did not belong to the subject; she still used to teach the students so that they could get good marks in the exams.

The verb 'teach' should be in past tense 'taught' to match the past context. The phrase 'if she do not belong' should be 'if she did not belong' for correct tense and subject-verb agreement. The pronouns 'she he or she' are confusing; 'they' is appropriate here to refer to students.

× According to me, fewer rules but stricter one makes the students more punctual and disciplined, as if there will be more rules than students will start neglecting or feeling like a burden on them.

✓ According to me, fewer rules but stricter ones make the students more punctual and disciplined, because if there are more rules, students will start neglecting them or feeling burdened by them.

The phrase 'stricter one' should be plural 'stricter ones' to agree with 'fewer rules'. The verb 'makes' should be 'make' to agree with plural subject. Also, 'as if' is incorrectly used; 'because' fits better here.

× She was very strict and always scold me and once she slapped me also for no reason or I can say because I was injured that time she slapped me because I went to a reception for bandage.

✓ She was very strict and always scolded me and once she also slapped me for no reason, or I can say because I was injured at that time; she slapped me because I went to a reception for a bandage.

The verb 'scold' should be in past tense 'scolded' to match the past context. The sentence is run-on and needs punctuation for clarity. 'Bandage' needs an article 'a' before it.

× No, because rule free school is something like that has no discipline or punctual students.

✓ No, because a rule-free school is something that has no disciplined or punctual students.

The phrase 'rule free school' needs a hyphen and an article 'a' before it. Also, 'discipline' should be 'disciplined' as an adjective to describe students.

× Uh, and teaching these like of students is quite difficult for a teacher or it is very tough to handle.

✓ Uh, and teaching these kinds of students is quite difficult for a teacher; it is very tough to handle them.

The phrase 'these like of students' is incorrect; it should be 'these kinds of students'. Also, the sentence needs a pronoun 'them' to refer back to students.

× And uh, obviously students will not listen to the teacher and do not focus on studies.

✓ And uh, obviously students will not listen to the teacher and will not focus on their studies.

The verb 'do not focus' should be 'will not focus' to match the future tense 'will not listen'. Also, 'studies' should be preceded by the possessive pronoun 'their' for clarity.