Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be more natural and clear. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, explain why uniforms help discipline and why smartphones are distracting.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many rules at my school. For instance, students must wear a unique uniform to promote discipline. Also, smartphones are not allowed in class because they can distract students from learning.

Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and repeat ideas. Use linking words to organize your answer and provide specific reasons. For example, explain how rules help students prepare for real life.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe more rules would benefit students because they help maintain discipline. Moreover, rules teach students how to behave responsibly, which is important for their future work life.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and has many hesitations. Try to complete your sentences and give specific examples of how the teacher was dedicated. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very dedicated math teacher in high school. She always helped students solve problems and assisted us with our homework. She often stayed after class to support us.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your opinion clearly. Also, be specific about why a balanced number of rules is good.

Ví dụ: I prefer a balanced number of rules at school. This is because rules help maintain discipline and create a safe environment for learning. However, too many rules can be restrictive for students.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Avoid incorrect words like 'realistic' instead of 'strict'. Complete your sentences and explain why the strict teacher was good for you.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a strict math teacher in high school. Although she was strict, I think it was good because it helped me focus and improve my skills.

Gợi ý: Try to avoid repetition and improve grammar. Use linking words to explain your opinion clearly and provide reasons why rules are important.

Ví dụ: Actually, no. I would prefer to teach at a school with many rules because they help students maintain discipline. Without rules, the learning environment can become chaotic and ineffective.

× Yes, there are many rules for my schools.

✓ Yes, there are many rules for my school.

The word 'schools' is plural, but the context refers to a single school. Using the singular form 'school' is correct here to match the intended meaning.

× the students have to wear a unique uniform to have a discipline

✓ the students have to wear a unique uniform to maintain discipline

The phrase 'to have a discipline' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'to maintain discipline' because 'discipline' is an uncountable noun here and 'maintain' is the appropriate verb.

× they have a they have to use not a smartphone and the class because they can distract them and.

✓ they have to not use smartphones in the class because they can distract them.

The sentence has repeated words and incorrect pronoun usage. 'They have a they have to use not a smartphone and the class' is ungrammatical. Correct structure is 'they have to not use smartphones in the class'. Also, 'smartphone' should be plural as it refers generally to any smartphones.

× more rules can maintain the discipline for students

✓ more rules can help maintain discipline for students

The verb 'maintain' should be preceded by 'help' to correctly express the idea that rules assist in maintaining discipline. 'Can maintain' is less natural here.

× they can be, uh, a disciplined in the future

✓ they can be, uh, disciplined in the future

'Disciplined' is an adjective and does not need the article 'a'. Using 'a disciplined' is incorrect.

× she's very, she was very, uh, dedicated and help uh, students, uh, to solve their problems and can, and help them, uh, do their homework and uh, she stayed.

✓ she was very dedicated and helped students to solve their problems and helped them do their homework, and she stayed.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. Since the teacher is referred to in the past, verbs should be in past tense: 'helped' instead of 'help' and 'helped' instead of 'help'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and should be finished properly.

× Actually, I prefer a balanced number of rules at school.

✓ Actually, I prefer a balanced amount of rules at school.

'Number' is used with countable nouns, and 'rules' are countable, so 'number' is correct. However, 'balanced number' is acceptable but 'balanced amount' is less appropriate. Actually, 'balanced number' is correct here, so no correction needed. This suggestion is invalid and should be removed.

× Having rules is OK because it maintain the discipline and make it a safety environment for education in the school and students can't understand the discipline.

✓ Having rules is OK because they maintain discipline and make it a safe environment for education in the school, and students can understand discipline.

'It' is incorrect when referring to 'rules' (plural), so 'they' should be used. 'Maintain' and 'make' should be in plural form to agree with 'rules'. 'Safety environment' should be 'safe environment'. 'Can't understand' contradicts the intended meaning; it should be 'can understand'.

× Yes, I had a realistic teacher in my high school.

✓ Yes, I had a strict teacher in my high school.

The word 'realistic' is incorrect in this context. The intended meaning is 'strict', which describes a teacher who enforces rules firmly.

× The math teacher was and she's a very districted, but I think that it's very good for us and after and then I understand the.

✓ The math teacher was very strict, and I think that it was very good for us, and afterwards I understood the importance.

'Districted' is not a correct word; the intended word is 'strict'. The sentence is incomplete and needs to be finished properly. Also, tense consistency is important.

× Actually no. I I would like to be a teacher at a school that have many rules that help student maintain the discipline because without rules students can can't learn about discipline and educational environment can be very bad.

✓ Actually no. I would like to be a teacher at a school that has many rules that help students maintain discipline because without rules students can't learn about discipline and the educational environment can be very bad.

'Have' should be 'has' to agree with singular 'school'. 'Student' should be plural 'students'. 'Can can't' is incorrect; only 'can't' is needed. 'Educational environment' needs the definite article 'the'.