Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be clearer and more grammatically correct. Use singular/plural forms correctly and avoid unclear phrases like 'two year uniform' and 'makes 1 perfect'. Try to give a direct topic sentence and then support it with specific details using linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules for students at my school. For example, all students must wear the school uniform every day, which helps create a sense of unity. Additionally, we are expected to follow instructions from teachers to maintain discipline and focus on our studies.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and be specific about how more rules help students. Avoid vague phrases like 'curtain extend rules' and 'help maintain displaying'.

Ví dụ: I believe that having more rules can benefit students to some extent because they help maintain discipline and create a structured learning environment, which is essential for academic success.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting verb agreement and adding linking words for coherence. Also, try to use a wider range of vocabulary to describe the teacher's dedication.

Ví dụ: Yes, I was lucky to have a very dedicated teacher in high school. She was passionate about her subject and always went the extra mile by staying after class to help students who needed extra support.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and grammar correction. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas and be more specific about how too many rules affect students.

Ví dụ: I prefer a balanced number of rules at school. Having some rules is necessary to maintain discipline; however, too many rules can negatively affect students' progress and may cause mental and physical stress.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use correct verb tenses and pronouns, and avoid vague expressions like 'calling me about formulas'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very strict math teacher in high school. He often insisted that I memorize formulas perfectly, which was challenging. Sometimes, his strictness made me feel upset, but it also helped me improve my skills.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using more natural phrases and correcting minor grammar errors. Use linking words to explain your reasons more effectively.

Ví dụ: No, I would not like to work in a rule-free school because rules are essential for maintaining discipline and creating a structured learning environment, which helps both teachers and students to focus better.

× Every learner have two year uniform and also live under instruction that may put a positive impact on students.

✓ Every learner has a two-year uniform and also lives under instructions that may have a positive impact on students.

The subject 'Every learner' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have' and 'lives' instead of 'live'. Also, 'two year uniform' should be 'two-year uniform' as a compound adjective. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' to match the context. 'May put' is better as 'may have' to express impact.

× This rule makes 1 perfect toward their studies.

✓ This rule makes one perfect towards their studies.

The number '1' should be written as 'one' in formal writing. Also, 'toward' should be 'towards' for correct prepositional usage in this context. The sentence is unclear; 'makes one perfect' is ambiguous and may need rephrasing for clarity.

× I believe that having more rules for students can be beneficial to be curtain extend rules, help maintain displaying and create a structured learning environment which is essential for academic success.

✓ I believe that having more rules for students can be beneficial to a certain extent; rules help maintain discipline and create a structured learning environment which is essential for academic success.

The phrase 'to be curtain extend rules' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'to a certain extent'. Also, 'help maintain displaying' is incorrect; likely intended 'help maintain discipline'. The sentence needed restructuring for clarity and correct modal verb usage.

× She was always passionate about her subject and went the extra mile to ensure every student understand the material, often staying after class to offer extra help.

✓ She was always passionate about her subject and went the extra mile to ensure every student understood the material, often staying after class to offer extra help.

The verb 'understand' should be in past tense 'understood' to agree with the past tense context set by 'was' and 'went'. This maintains tense consistency.

× Having some rule is necessary for living in the discipline.

✓ Having some rules is necessary for living with discipline.

'Rule' should be plural 'rules' because 'some' refers to more than one. Also, 'living in the discipline' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'living with discipline'.

× But if I just talk about too many rules, that may put a negative impact on students progression that may harsh them mentally and physically.

✓ But if I just talk about too many rules, that may have a negative impact on students' progression and may harm them mentally and physically.

'Put a negative impact' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'have a negative impact'. 'Students progression' needs an apostrophe to show possession: 'students' progression'. 'Harsh' is an adjective; the correct verb is 'harm'.

× He was my math teacher. He was always calling me about formulas.

✓ He was my math teacher. He was always calling on me about formulas.

The phrase 'calling me about formulas' is unclear; the correct expression is 'calling on me' meaning to ask or question. This is a prepositional usage issue but also relates to clarity.

× Sometime I also felt cried because of their behavior.

✓ Sometimes I also felt like crying because of their behavior.

'Felt cried' is incorrect; 'felt like crying' is the correct expression. Also, 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency.

× I think he was very strict in my.

✓ I think he was very strict with me.

'In my' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'with me' to indicate the person affected by strictness.