Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Hello I'm seeing Senior High School team singing Jews like reaching each classroom before 7:00 AM. I'm looking for a children in the nine years 30 feet.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I think to lose beneficial to students present all the for some rules like we do, we can't chatting doing their questions, you know. So I always been involved for students to study efficiently.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Thí sinh
Teacher, I have had to be humanly replicated, so you have to actually teacher cheer and just scream after your room in the morning to tell me. Preparing a series of classes, the isolated students questions students in the new environment.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Thí sinh
My favorite boy users can help us to regulate our behaviors and reduce some distractions and help us to focus on newly entertaining steadily. I feel sorry for the news like not cheating and totally personally of profession.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Thí sinh
No, not sure is true in your classroom is really strict with your family or restarting. Most of the leaders who comment on our homework accomplishment and within schools and it. She helps me a lot in studying.
Giám khảo
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Thí sinh
Women and Washington willing to kill you free school as a teacher because it was a less suddenly coming to several students for previous years so that you rely on them how to just remove themselves.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence about the rules at your school, and provide specific details. Avoid irrelevant or confusing phrases.
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must arrive before 7:00 AM and attend all their classes punctually. These rules help maintain discipline and ensure everyone is prepared for the day.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: Your answer is difficult to understand and lacks clear structure. Try to start with a clear opinion, then explain why with specific examples, using linking words to connect your ideas.
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules. For instance, rules that prevent chatting during lessons can help students concentrate better. Therefore, these rules encourage a more efficient learning environment.
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Điểm: 15.0Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and does not clearly answer the question. Focus on giving a direct response about a dedicated teacher you have had, and provide specific examples of their dedication.
Ví dụ: Yes, I have had a very dedicated teacher. She always prepared interesting lessons and stayed after class to help students with their questions. Her enthusiasm motivated me to study harder.
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant information. Try to clearly state your preference and explain your reasons with specific details, using linking words for coherence.
Ví dụ: I prefer to have more rules at school because they help regulate our behaviour and reduce distractions. For example, rules against cheating promote fairness and encourage students to work honestly.
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Điểm: 15.0Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and does not directly answer the question. Provide a clear yes or no answer, then explain with specific examples about a strict or not strict teacher you have had.
Ví dụ: No, I have not had a very strict teacher. Most of my teachers are supportive and give helpful feedback on our homework, which has helped me improve my studies.
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Điểm: 10.0Gợi ý: Your answer is very unclear and does not address the question properly. Try to clearly state your opinion about working in a rule-free school and explain your reasons with specific details.
Ví dụ: I would not like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because without rules, students might behave poorly. Rules are important to create a good learning environment and help students focus.
× Hello I'm seeing Senior High School team singing Jews like reaching each classroom before 7:00 AM.
✓ Hello, I am a student at Senior High School and we have a rule about reaching each classroom before 7:00 AM.
The original sentence is unclear and contains several unrelated or incorrect phrases. The sentence structure is incorrect and does not convey a clear meaning. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and uses proper sentence structure.
× I'm looking for a children in the nine years 30 feet.
✓ I am looking after children aged nine years old in a 30-foot area.
The phrase 'a children' is incorrect because 'children' is plural and does not take the article 'a'. Also, 'in the nine years 30 feet' is unclear and likely incorrect. The correction uses proper quantifiers and clearer phrasing.
× Yeah, I think to lose beneficial to students present all the for some rules like we do, we can't chatting doing their questions, you know.
✓ Yeah, I think it is beneficial for students to have some rules like we do; we can't chat while doing our questions, you know.
The original sentence misuses pronouns and has unclear phrasing. 'To lose beneficial' is incorrect; it should be 'it is beneficial'. Also, 'we can't chatting doing their questions' is grammatically incorrect. The correction fixes pronoun use and verb forms.
× So I always been involved for students to study efficiently.
✓ So I have always been involved in helping students to study efficiently.
The original sentence lacks the auxiliary verb 'have' and uses the incorrect preposition 'for' instead of 'in'. The correction adds the auxiliary verb and correct preposition to improve clarity and grammar.
× Teacher, I have had to be humanly replicated, so you have to actually teacher cheer and just scream after your room in the morning to tell me.
✓ I have had teachers who were very strict; they would actually cheer and sometimes scream after us in the classroom in the morning to get our attention.
The original sentence is confusing and contains nonsensical phrases like 'humanly replicated' and 'teacher cheer'. The correction restructures the sentence to convey the intended meaning clearly.
× Preparing a series of classes, the isolated students questions students in the new environment.
✓ They prepared a series of classes and helped students with their questions in the new environment.
The original sentence lacks a clear subject and misuses pronouns, making it unclear. The correction adds a subject and clarifies the actions.
× My favorite boy users can help us to regulate our behaviors and reduce some distractions and help us to focus on newly entertaining steadily.
✓ My favourite school rules can help us regulate our behaviour, reduce distractions, and help us focus on learning steadily.
The phrase 'favorite boy users' is incorrect and unclear. It likely intends to refer to 'school rules'. The correction replaces the phrase with the correct noun and improves sentence clarity.
× I feel sorry for the news like not cheating and totally personally of profession.
✓ I feel sorry for those who cheat and believe in the importance of honesty and professionalism.
The original sentence misuses 'news' instead of 'those' or 'people' and has unclear phrasing. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and corrects pronoun use.
× No, not sure is true in your classroom is really strict with your family or restarting.
✓ No, I am not sure if there is a really strict teacher in my classroom or family.
The original sentence is unclear and misuses pronouns and sentence structure. The correction clarifies the question and corrects pronoun use.
× Most of the leaders who comment on our homework accomplishment and within schools and it.
✓ Most of the teachers comment on our homework and school performance, and they help me a lot with studying.
The original sentence is fragmented and uses incorrect conjunctions. The correction connects ideas properly and clarifies meaning.
× Women and Washington willing to kill you free school as a teacher because it was a less suddenly coming to several students for previous years so that you rely on them how to just remove themselves.
✓ I would be willing to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because it would allow students to take more responsibility for themselves over the years.
The original sentence is confusing and misuses modal verbs and other words. The correction uses appropriate modal verbs and clarifies the intended meaning.