Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, be careful with grammar, such as plural forms and article usage. Aim to provide a clear topic sentence followed by specific supporting details.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many rules and regulations at my school. These rules help guide students throughout their studies, enabling them to stay focused and achieve their academic goals effectively.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat vague and incomplete. Try to provide more specific reasons and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and ensure clarity.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think students would benefit from having more rules because they provide clear guidance and help maintain discipline. Consequently, students can concentrate better on their studies and improve their academic performance.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity at the end. Also, there are grammatical errors such as tense inconsistency and missing articles. Try to complete your thoughts and provide specific examples of the teacher's dedication.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a dedicated chemistry teacher in college. She always made sure that every student understood the coursework by explaining difficult concepts clearly and offering extra help when needed.

Gợi ý: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'figure rules'. Try to express your opinion clearly with correct grammar and provide reasons to support your preference.

Ví dụ: I don't mind whether the school has more or fewer rules because, in my opinion, the most important thing is to study hard, stay disciplined, and achieve success in the future.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and contains repetition and grammatical errors. Try to complete your sentences and avoid repeating words. Also, provide specific examples to illustrate the teacher's strictness.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very strict teacher in dosage formulation during college. She enforced discipline strictly, and as a result, many students, including half of our class, failed the course.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains some hesitations and informal expressions. Try to express your ideas more clearly and formally, and use linking words to connect your points.

Ví dụ: I cannot imagine working as a teacher because I dislike being restricted by many rules. Even in a rule-free school, there would still be some regulations since managing students requires certain guidelines.

× Yes, there's a lot of rules and regulation for students at my school.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of rules and regulations for students at my school.

The phrase 'there's' is a contraction of 'there is', which is singular, but 'rules and regulation' is plural. Therefore, 'there are' should be used to agree with the plural subject. Also, 'regulation' should be plural as 'regulations' to match 'rules'.

× Mostly it would help to guide the students during their school days for them to be able to achieve and reach the goal of the students.

✓ Mostly it helps to guide the students during their school days so that they can achieve and reach their goals.

The modal verb 'would' is unnecessary here because the statement is about a general truth or fact. Using the simple present 'helps' is more appropriate. Also, 'for them to be able to' is wordy; 'so that they can' is clearer. 'Goal of the students' is better as 'their goals' for conciseness and clarity.

× Rules are good, it will help.

✓ Rules are good; they will help.

The sentence has a subject-verb agreement issue. 'Rules' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'they' instead of 'it'. Also, the two independent clauses should be separated by a semicolon or period.

× I believe that students would benefit more from more rules because this will be a guide for students to help reach their goal.

✓ I believe that students would benefit more from more rules because these will be a guide for students to help reach their goals.

'This' refers to plural 'rules', so it should be 'these'. Also, 'goal' should be plural 'goals' to match 'students'.

× Also, it will help discipline the students and be able to focus on their studies and maintain.

✓ Also, it will help discipline the students and enable them to focus on their studies and maintain their progress.

The phrase 'be able to focus' lacks a subject; it should be 'enable them to focus'. The verb 'maintain' needs an object to clarify what is being maintained.

× Yes, I remember when I was in college, we have this teacher in chemistry.

✓ Yes, I remember when I was in college, we had this teacher in chemistry.

The past tense 'had' should be used to match the past time frame 'when I was in college'. 'Have' is present tense and incorrect here.

× I really like her because I can see that she is dedicated to her work and she made sure that her students understand the coursework and help us to get.

✓ I really liked her because I could see that she was dedicated to her work and she made sure that her students understood the coursework and helped us to succeed.

The sentence refers to past events, so past tense verbs 'liked', 'could see', 'was', 'understood', and 'helped' should be used. Also, 'help us to get' is incomplete; 'helped us to succeed' is clearer.

× I actually doesn't mind if the school has more or figure rules at school because for me the important thing is to study well, be disciplined and be able to succeed and reach the goal in the future.

✓ I actually don't mind if the school has more or fewer rules because, for me, the important thing is to study well, be disciplined, and be able to succeed and reach my goals in the future.

The subject 'I' requires the auxiliary verb 'do' in negative form 'don't', not 'doesn't'. 'Figure rules' is incorrect; it should be 'fewer rules'. Also, 'reach the goal' is better as 'reach my goals' for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, I remember when I was in college we had this teacher in dosage formulation.

✓ Yes, I remember when I was in college we had this teacher in dosage formulation.

This sentence is correct in tense and structure; no correction needed.

× She was so strict that half of our class got failed failed grade.

✓ She was so strict that half of our class got failing grades.

The phrase 'got failed failed grade' is incorrect and redundant. 'Got failing grades' is the correct expression to indicate students received failing marks.

× She is very strict and disciplined when it comes.

✓ She was very strict and disciplined when it came to teaching.

The sentence refers to a past event, so past tense 'was' and 'came' should be used. Also, 'when it comes' is incomplete; adding 'to teaching' clarifies the meaning.

× I can't imagine myself working as a teacher because I I'm a person who doesn't like to be chained up.

✓ I can't imagine myself working as a teacher because I am a person who doesn't like to be chained up.

The phrase 'I I'm' is a typo; it should be 'I am'. The modal verb usage is correct here.

× I don't like to have a lot of rules.

✓ I don't like having a lot of rules.

Both forms are acceptable, but 'don't like having' is more natural and idiomatic in this context.

× It might be a rule free school, but still there will be regulations because you are working with students.

✓ It might be a rule-free school, but there will still be regulations because you are working with students.

The phrase 'rule free' should be hyphenated as 'rule-free' to form a compound adjective. Also, 'there will still be' is the correct word order for emphasis.