Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific examples or reasons. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many rules at my school to help students learn discipline and respect. For example, we have rules about punctuality and behavior in class to create a good learning environment.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Focus on giving a clear opinion with supporting reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas and complete your sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe more rules can help students develop good habits and achieve their goals because rules teach responsibility and organization.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally relevant but could be more specific. Provide a clear topic sentence and add details about a particular teacher or example to support your answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher who always encouraged us to work hard and helped us understand difficult subjects clearly.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat confusing and lengthy. Try to state your preference clearly and support it with concise reasons. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: I prefer having more rules at school because they help students develop discipline early, which is important for their future success.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations. Try to give a direct answer and explain briefly with clear sentences. Avoid filler words and incomplete thoughts.

Ví dụ: No, I never had a very strict teacher. Most teachers were firm but also supportive, helping us understand our responsibilities.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but is repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Express your opinion clearly and support it with logical reasons using proper sentence structure.

Ví dụ: No, I would not like to work in a school without rules because discipline is essential for students to learn and succeed in life.

× Yes, the schools have lot of rules because only students go to the school to learn rules and become a good society members and to be good in their studies.

✓ Yes, the school has a lot of rules because only students go to the school to learn rules and become good members of society and to do well in their studies.

The word 'schools' should be singular 'school' to match the context. 'Lot' needs the article 'a' to become 'a lot'. 'Members' should be plural but preceded by 'good' without 'a' and 'society members' should be 'members of society' for correct phrasing.

× For example, the student only learn rules from the school and become a good members.

✓ For example, the students only learn rules from the school and become good members.

The subject 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with the plural verb 'learn'. 'A good members' is incorrect because 'members' is plural and should not have the article 'a'.

× Yes, rules are very important in our daily life so if a person is good in their rules and he was the rules and regulations, then they can become a good society member and they could achieve their goals in an easy way because they know how to prepare and.

✓ Yes, rules are very important in our daily life so if a person is good at following rules and regulations, then they can become a good member of society and achieve their goals easily because they know how to prepare.

The phrase 'good in their rules' is incorrect; it should be 'good at following rules'. 'He was the rules and regulations' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'following rules and regulations'. 'A good society member' is correct but 'good members' is plural. The sentence was incomplete and needed correction for clarity and grammar.

× Yes, In my school it was very famous for its rules and discipline basically.

✓ Yes, my school was very famous for its rules and discipline.

The phrase 'In my school it was very famous' is awkward; 'my school was very famous' is correct. The word 'basically' is unnecessary and does not fit here.

× So all the teachers were very dedicated and they were very passionate about to teach their students and to become a good society members.

✓ So all the teachers were very dedicated and passionate about teaching their students and helping them become good members of society.

The phrase 'passionate about to teach' is incorrect; it should be 'passionate about teaching'. 'To become a good society members' is incorrect; it should be 'helping them become good members of society'.

× So I had many dedicated teachers at my schooling.

✓ So I had many dedicated teachers during my schooling.

The phrase 'at my schooling' is incorrect; 'during my schooling' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× I prefer the rules should be the first priority at the schools because the students from where they start their learning.

✓ I prefer that rules should be the first priority at schools because students start their learning there.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. 'I prefer the rules should be' should be 'I prefer that rules should be'. 'At the schools' should be 'at schools' or 'in schools'. The clause 'because the students from where they start their learning' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'because students start their learning there'.

× If there is a lack of discipline at their early ages, then they can lead this capability to learn the discipline and rules how to become a good members that it can make their life more hard.

✓ If there is a lack of discipline at an early age, then they may lose the ability to learn discipline and rules on how to become good members, which can make their life harder.

The phrase 'at their early ages' should be 'at an early age'. 'Lead this capability' is incorrect; it should be 'lose the ability'. 'How to become a good members' is incorrect; it should be 'how to become good members'. 'More hard' should be 'harder'.

× No, at my school time there was no teacher who was very strict.

✓ No, during my school time there was no teacher who was very strict.

The phrase 'at my school time' is incorrect; 'during my school time' is correct.

× The teacher only, uh, strict, uh, to some part, uh, no.

✓ The teacher was only strict to some extent, no.

The phrase 'strict to some part' is incorrect; it should be 'strict to some extent'.

× Where they can teach their students to be, to be careful about their responsibilities.

✓ They taught their students to be careful about their responsibilities.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. It should be a complete sentence stating that teachers taught students to be careful about responsibilities.

× No, if teacher don't do not follow rules then the students have no future because rules are the only basic building of the life.

✓ No, if teachers do not follow rules, then the students have no future because rules are the basic building blocks of life.

The phrase 'don't do not' is a double negative and incorrect; it should be 'do not'. 'Teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to agree with 'students'. 'The only basic building of the life' is incorrect; it should be 'the basic building blocks of life'.

× So there is a no school I think without the discipline.

✓ So I think there is no school without discipline.

The phrase 'there is a no school' is incorrect; it should be 'there is no school'. The sentence structure is improved by placing 'I think' earlier.

× So I would not like to be a teacher in such part of institution.

✓ So I would not like to be a teacher in such a part of an institution.

The phrase 'such part of institution' is missing articles; it should be 'such a part of an institution'.