Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰，存在语法错误和重复，且内容不具体。建议直接回答问题，避免犹豫和重复，提供具体的规则例子。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to smoke on campus, and they must wear uniforms every day. These rules help maintain order and discipline.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不够流畅，逻辑不清晰，缺少具体细节。建议使用连词连接观点，明确表达观点并举例说明。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe more rules can benefit students because they help maintain discipline. For instance, having a rule against using phones in class can reduce distractions and improve focus.

Gợi ý: 回答含糊不清，语法错误多，缺少具体描述。建议直接回答问题，描述老师的特点和影响，避免重复和犹豫。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher in secondary school. She was strict but caring, always encouraging us to do our best and helping us after class.

Gợi ý: 回答较完整但表达不够流畅，句子结构不够清晰。建议使用更连贯的句子，明确表达观点并补充具体理由。

Ví dụ: I think it depends. As a student, I prefer fewer rules because it encourages creativity. However, from a teacher's perspective, some rules are necessary to maintain discipline and order.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够自然。建议简洁明了地描述老师的严格行为及其影响，避免口头语。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very strict teacher in primary school. For example, we were not allowed to go to the toilet during class, which I think was unreasonable and made it difficult for young students.

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯，存在重复和语法错误。建议直接表达观点，使用连词使句子更流畅，并具体说明原因。

Ví dụ: No, I would not like to work in a school without rules because students need guidelines to behave properly. Without rules, it would be hard to maintain order and focus in the classroom.

× There are many routes in my school that's for students to com, uh, contend with uh, for example, you can't make uh, illegal things outside the school and umm, for example, umm, I can't remember it, it's too many.

✓ There are many rules in my school that are for students to comply with, for example, you can't do illegal things outside the school and, umm, for example, umm, I can't remember them all, there are too many.

这里的错误是“There are many routes”中的“routes”应为“rules”，且“that's”应改为“that are”，因为先行词是复数。还有“to com, uh, contend with”应为“to comply with”，意思是遵守规则。整体句子中存在主谓一致和词汇使用错误。

× you can't make uh, illegal things outside the school

✓ you can't do illegal things outside the school

动词“make”用错了，应该用“do”来表达“做非法的事情”。“make illegal things”是不正确的搭配。

× if you are a secondary school student, you will always feel like, oh you have to revoke something and umm to set some rules.

✓ if you are a secondary school student, you will always feel like, oh you have to follow something and umm set some rules.

“revoke something”用法不当，应该是“follow something”表示遵守规则；“to set some rules”中“to”不需要，直接用动词原形“set”。

× It is a good way to help to maintain their discipline.

✓ It is a good way to help maintain their discipline.

“help to maintain”中的“to”可以省略，英语中“help”后面接动词原形更自然。

× your question record uh, uh, periods when I was studying in secondary school.

✓ During the period when I was studying in secondary school.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，应该用“During the period when...”引导时间状语从句。

× there is a teacher who is really like, uh, is really strict and uh, a lot of students feel it's not very.

✓ there is a teacher who is really strict and a lot of students feel it's not very nice.

“feel it's not very”后面缺少形容词，应该补充形容词如“nice”使句子完整。

× But in an other position like teachers, it is good for them to make some rules to restrict the students because students should have developed in their disciplines or their.

✓ But in another position, like teachers, it is good for them to make some rules to restrict the students because students should develop their discipline.

“an other”应写作“another”；“have developed in their disciplines or their”结构不完整，应该改为“develop their discipline”。

× I have met a strict teacher when I was in primary school and she is very annoying.

✓ I met a strict teacher when I was in primary school and she was very annoying.

“have met”时态不符合上下文，应该用过去时“met”；“she is”应改为“she was”，保持时态一致。

× we cannot, uh, we even, we cannot go to toilet when we are in the class.

✓ we cannot, uh, we even cannot go to the toilet when we are in class.

“go to toilet”缺少冠词，应为“go to the toilet”；“in the class”应为“in class”，更自然。

× So I believe that this rules is not very like sensible.

✓ So I believe that these rules are not very sensible.

“this rules”中“rules”是复数，应该用“these rules”；谓语动词“is”应改为“are”，保持主谓一致。

× Well, I would say that is definitely not because, you know, sometimes students should be regulated by some rules.

✓ Well, I would say that is definitely not true because, you know, sometimes students should be regulated by some rules.

“that is definitely not”后缺少宾语，应该加“true”使句子完整。

× And if you, if you can't strike them or like control them in a proper way, they will like, umm, release all of them kind of, uh, imaginations or like they have, they have.

✓ And if you can't guide them or control them in a proper way, they will, umm, release all kinds of imagination they have.

“strike them”用词错误，应为“guide them”；“release all of them kind of”结构混乱，应改为“release all kinds of imagination”；句子结尾重复，应简化。