Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Well, absolutely yes. You know, we all live in the accommodation and our school have a rule that we should keep our room clean for every day, every week check.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
No, I don't think so, although some rules can help students keep. Balance between study and life but more rules limited their.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Thí sinh
Absolutely yes. Our English teacher is so umm, dedicated. She always, she always umm, thinks some creative method to teach our English words.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Thí sinh
Where as a undergraduate I prefer having fewer rules at school. I think in that case we we may have more creativity and more freedom to.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Thí sinh
Absolutely yes. My math teacher is so strict to us that I believe a relaxed environment encourages personal growth and motivation, so I don't like my math teacher.
Giám khảo
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Thí sinh
Of course yes, I prefer working as a teacher in a roof free school. I think free and relaxed environment helps students feel more motivated and confident to ask questions and in that case we can be friends.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够自然,且信息不够具体。建议注意主谓一致,避免重复表达,并补充具体细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students living in the dormitory must keep their rooms clean, and inspections are conducted weekly to ensure this.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法混乱,表达不清晰。建议完整表达观点,使用连接词使句子连贯,并具体说明原因。
Ví dụ: No, I don't think more rules would benefit students. While some rules help maintain a balance between study and life, too many rules can limit their freedom and creativity.
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和口头语,表达不够流畅。建议减少口头语,使用更丰富的词汇,并具体描述老师的教学方法。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have. Our English teacher is very dedicated and always uses creative methods, such as games and stories, to help us learn new vocabulary.
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且有语法错误,表达不清晰。建议完整表达观点,注意语法准确,并具体说明理由。
Ví dụ: As an undergraduate, I prefer fewer rules at school because it allows more creativity and freedom for students to express themselves.
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较完整,但表达略显简单。建议使用更多连接词,使表达更连贯,并具体说明严格老师的影响。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have. My math teacher was very strict, which made the classroom atmosphere tense. I believe a relaxed environment encourages personal growth and motivation, so I didn't enjoy his classes.
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有发音错误(roof应为 rule),表达不够准确。建议注意词汇准确性,避免重复,并具体说明理由。
Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to work in a school without strict rules. A free and relaxed environment helps students feel motivated and confident to ask questions, which also helps build good relationships between teachers and students.
× we all live in the accommodation and our school have a rule that we should keep our room clean for every day, every week check.
✓ we all live in the accommodation and our school has a rule that we should keep our room clean every day and have a weekly check.
主谓一致错误,主语是单数'school',谓语动词应使用单数形式'has'。此外,表达时间频率时应使用'keep our room clean every day'和'weekly check'更自然。
× No, I don't think so, although some rules can help students keep. Balance between study and life but more rules limited their.
✓ No, I don't think so. Although some rules can help students keep a balance between study and life, more rules limit them.
句子结构错误,原句断句不当,导致意思不清。应将句子分开,并补充缺失的冠词'a'和代词'them',使句子完整通顺。
× She always, she always umm, thinks some creative method to teach our English words.
✓ She always, she always umm, thinks of some creative methods to teach us English words.
动词'think'后应接介词'of'表示想出,且'method'应使用复数形式'methods','teach our English words'应改为'teach us English words'更符合习惯用法。
× Where as a undergraduate I prefer having fewer rules at school.
✓ Whereas as an undergraduate, I prefer having fewer rules at school.
'Whereas'应连写且后面应加冠词'an'修饰单数名词'undergraduate',句首应加逗号分隔。
× My math teacher is so strict to us that I believe a relaxed environment encourages personal growth and motivation, so I don't like my math teacher.
✓ My math teacher is so strict with us that I believe a relaxed environment encourages personal growth and motivation, so I don't like my math teacher.
形容词'strict'后应接介词'with'表示对某人严格,'strict to'是不正确的搭配。
× I prefer working as a teacher in a roof free school.
✓ I prefer working as a teacher in a rule-free school.
原句中'roof free'是拼写错误,应为'rule-free'表示无规则的学校。