Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方，比如“they don't allow the students bring their phone”应改为“students are not allowed to bring their phones”。建议注意主谓一致和时态的正确使用，同时避免重复和冗余。

Ví dụ: There are many rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to bring their phones, and they must wear uniforms every day.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。比如“stay more organisations”应为“be more organized”，“good controlled of to themselves”应为“have better self-control”。建议加强语法基础，使用更准确的词汇表达观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think more rules can help students become more organized and improve their self-control.

Gợi ý: 回答较好，但有小的语法错误，如“stay”应为“stays”。建议注意动词时态和单复数形式，提升语言准确性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I was lucky to have a dedicated teacher in high school. She always stays after class to help students who need extra support.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，如“I'm not a people a person who have good self-control”应为“I'm not a person who has good self-control”，“stay more organizations”应为“stay more organized”。建议简化句子结构，确保语法正确。

Ví dụ: I prefer more rules at school because I am not very good at self-control, so rules help me stay organized.

Gợi ý: 回答内容基本符合要求，但表达不够流畅，且“wear the shoes”应为“wear shoes”。建议减少口头语，使用更自然的表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, my middle school teacher was very strict. She didn't allow us to have long hair, and we had to wear shoes every day.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不完整且语法错误，如“I think I like”应为“I think I would like”，“do anything with my own flow”表达不自然。建议使用更准确的表达方式。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think I would like to work in a rule-free school because I could teach in my own way and enjoy more freedom.

× There are a lot of rules in my school such as they don't allow the students bring their phone to school and they the student must wear the suits at school.

✓ There are a lot of rules in my school, such as not allowing students to bring their phones to school and requiring students to wear suits at school.

句中代词使用不当，'they'重复且不必要，且动词形式错误。应使用不定式结构表达规则，避免重复代词。

× There are a lot of rules in my school such as they don't allow the students bring their phone to school and they the student must wear the suits at school.

✓ There are a lot of rules in my school, such as not allowing students to bring their phones to school and requiring students to wear suits at school.

动词后应接动名词形式表示规则内容，如'not allowing'和'requiring'，而非直接用动词原形。

× There are a lot of rules in my school such as they don't allow the students bring their phone to school and they the student must wear the suits at school.

✓ There are a lot of rules in my school, such as not allowing students to bring their phones to school and requiring students to wear suits at school.

'phone'和'suits'应使用复数形式，表示多部手机和多套制服。

× The rules can make a student to stay more organisations and good controlled of to themselves.

✓ The rules can help students stay more organized and have better self-control.

介词使用错误，'controlled of to'不正确，应使用'better self-control'表达自我控制。

× The rules can make a student to stay more organisations and good controlled of to themselves.

✓ The rules can help students stay more organized and have better self-control.

'organisations'用错，应为形容词'organized'，'good controlled'应为'better self-control'。

× She always stay after class to offer additional help to students.

✓ She always stays after class to offer additional help to students.

第三人称单数主语时，动词应加-s，'stay'应为'stays'。

× Well I prefer have more rules at school because I'm not a people a person who have good self-control.

✓ Well, I prefer to have more rules at school because I'm not a person who has good self-control.

代词使用错误，'a people a person'重复且错误，应为'a person'；动词与主语不一致，'have'应为'has'。

× So I need rules to make me stay more organizations.

✓ So I need rules to help me stay more organized.

'stay more organizations'结构错误，应使用形容词'organized'，且动词后接形容词。

× Umm, she didn't allow us to keep our hair long and uh, we must wear the shoes every day.

✓ Umm, she didn't allow us to keep our hair long and, uh, we had to wear shoes every day.

前半句为过去时，后半句应保持时态一致，'must'改为过去时'had to'。

× Umm, she didn't allow us to keep our hair long and uh, we must wear the shoes every day.

✓ Umm, she didn't allow us to keep our hair long and, uh, we had to wear shoes every day.

'the shoes'不合适，鞋子泛指应去掉定冠词'the'。

× Yes, I think I like because I can do anything with my own flow and it's very free.

✓ Yes, I think I would like it because I can do anything in my own way and it's very free.

情态动词使用不当，表达愿望应使用'would like'，'flow'用词不当，应为'way'。