Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Absolutely. My school has a set of guidelines that aims to maintain a positive learning environment. For example, students are expected to be punctual and respectful to teacher and peers, and that foster a sense of responsibility and discipline.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
Honestly, I actually think students would benefit more from less rules because that gives students more freedom so that they can think more independently and they have greater creativity.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had an incredible teacher back in primary school who teach math, so she was a teacher that went above and beyond for her students. So she organized extra sections for students to come up with tough concepts.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Thí sinh
I actually leaned towards having fewer rules at school because I think fewer rules can be less restrictive and more freedom is given to students so they can think more independently and that inspires more creativity.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have had a really strict teacher who, uh, followed school rules very much, so she did not allow any disagreement or conflict between students and I think she can give more freedom to us.
Giám khảo
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Thí sinh
Absolutely, I would like to work as a teacher in the referee school. Umm. I think less regulations can give more freedoms to students in this fosters a more collaborative and relaxing environments of learning.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答时语法有些错误,如"that aims"应为"that aim",且"respectful to teacher"应为"respectful to teachers"。建议注意主谓一致和复数形式的使用,同时回答可以更简洁自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, my school has several rules that aim to create a positive learning environment. For instance, students must be punctual and show respect to teachers and classmates, which helps foster responsibility and discipline.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中"less rules"应为"fewer rules",因为规则是可数名词。建议注意可数与不可数名词的区别,并尝试使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: Honestly, I believe students would benefit more from fewer rules because this gives them more freedom, allowing them to think independently and be more creative.
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如"who teach math"应为"who taught math","extra sections"表达不准确,建议使用"extra sessions"。建议注意时态一致和词汇准确性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had an incredible primary school teacher who taught math. She went above and beyond by organizing extra sessions to help students understand difficult concepts.
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中"leaned towards"时态使用不当,建议用"lean towards"。句子较长,建议使用连接词分开表达,使结构更清晰。
Ví dụ: I actually lean towards having fewer rules at school because they are less restrictive. This gives students more freedom to think independently, which inspires creativity.
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够清晰,"followed school rules very much"不自然,且最后一句与前文矛盾。建议用更准确的表达,并保持观点一致。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very strict teacher who strictly enforced school rules and did not allow any disagreements among students. However, I think she could have given us more freedom.
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中有词汇错误,如"referee school"应为"rule-free school","less regulations"应为"fewer regulations",且句子结构混乱。建议注意词汇准确性和句子连贯性。
Ví dụ: Absolutely, I would like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school. I believe fewer regulations give students more freedom, which fosters a more collaborative and relaxed learning environment.
× My school has a set of guidelines that aims to maintain a positive learning environment.
✓ My school has a set of guidelines that aim to maintain a positive learning environment.
这里的主语是复数形式的“guidelines”,谓语动词应使用复数形式“aim”,而不是单数“aims”。
× students are expected to be punctual and respectful to teacher and peers, and that foster a sense of responsibility and discipline.
✓ students are expected to be punctual and respectful to teachers and peers, and that fosters a sense of responsibility and discipline.
“teacher”应为复数形式“teachers”,因为指的是多个老师;“that”指代单数,应使用单数动词“fosters”。
× Honestly, I actually think students would benefit more from less rules because that gives students more freedom so that they can think more independently and they have greater creativity.
✓ Honestly, I actually think students would benefit more from fewer rules because that gives students more freedom so that they can think more independently and they have greater creativity.
“rules”是可数名词,表示“规则”,应使用“fewer”修饰可数名词,而不是“less”。
× Yes, I had an incredible teacher back in primary school who teach math, so she was a teacher that went above and beyond for her students.
✓ Yes, I had an incredible teacher back in primary school who taught math, so she was a teacher that went above and beyond for her students.
句子描述过去的情况,动词“teach”应使用过去式“taught”。
× So she organized extra sections for students to come up with tough concepts.
✓ So she organized extra sessions for students to come to grips with tough concepts.
“sections”应为“sessions”,表示“课时”;“come up with”意为“想出”,此处应使用“come to grips with”,表示“理解”。
× I actually leaned towards having fewer rules at school because I think fewer rules can be less restrictive and more freedom is given to students so they can think more independently and that inspires more creativity.
✓ I actually lean towards having fewer rules at school because I think fewer rules can be less restrictive and more freedom is given to students so they can think more independently and that inspires more creativity.
此句为一般现在时,表达习惯性观点,动词“leaned”应改为现在时“lean”。
× Yes, I have had a really strict teacher who, uh, followed school rules very much, so she did not allow any disagreement or conflict between students and I think she can give more freedom to us.
✓ Yes, I have had a really strict teacher who, uh, followed school rules very strictly, so she did not allow any disagreement or conflict between students and I think she could give more freedom to us.
“followed school rules very much”表达不准确,应改为“followed school rules very strictly”;“can”表示现在能力,描述过去应使用“could”。
× Absolutely, I would like to work as a teacher in the referee school.
✓ Absolutely, I would like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school.
原句“referee school”是拼写错误,应为“rule-free school”,表示“无规则的学校”。
× I think less regulations can give more freedoms to students in this fosters a more collaborative and relaxing environments of learning.
✓ I think fewer regulations can give more freedom to students and this fosters a more collaborative and relaxing learning environment.
“less regulations”应为“fewer regulations”,因为“regulations”是可数名词;“more freedoms”应为“more freedom”,因为“freedom”是不可数名词;“in this fosters”结构错误,应拆分为两个句子;“environments”应为单数“environment”。