Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes. My school has several rules to keep students safe. For example, students are not allowed to leave the campus during school hours without permission, and mobile phones must be switched off in class. These rules help maintain discipline and reduce distractions.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion with reasons and use linking words to connect ideas. Avoid vague phrasing and incorrect grammar. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I don't think adding more rules would help. Too many rules can make school life restrictive and reduce students' motivation. Instead, I prefer a few clear rules that teach responsibility while allowing freedom to learn.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and provide specific examples of dedication. Use past tense correctly and avoid fillers. Mention one or two concrete actions that show dedication.

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a very dedicated teacher called Suja Sujansar. He often stayed after class to help me with difficult topics and encouraged me when I was struggling, which made me respect him a lot.

Gợi ý: State your preference clearly and explain with specific reasons. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., "food quality" and "hygienic") and avoid confusing sentences. Provide one clear example or consequence.

Ví dụ: I prefer fewer but important rules, especially about food safety. For example, the school should enforce strict hygiene standards in the cafeteria because poor food quality can cause food poisoning and harm students' health.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, polite description and provide specific behaviors that made the teacher strict. Use correct grammar and avoid informal fragments.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very strict teacher named Shivani. She enforced punctuality and expected students to complete homework on time; she also monitored behaviour closely, which helped improve our discipline.

Gợi ý: Express your position clearly and support it with reasons. Use linking words and correct sentence structure. Avoid repetition and unclear clauses.

Ví dụ: No, I would not. I believe schools need rules to maintain order and ensure student safety. For example, rules about attendance and classroom behaviour help teachers manage lessons effectively.

× Yes, and my schools.

✓ Yes, in my school.

The student used plural 'schools' though referring to one school; change to singular 'school' for agreement. Use 'in' to indicate location: 'in my school.'

× There are several types of rules in my school such as no, students are not allowed to leave another place during school hours without permission and most and all students must be.

✓ There are several rules at my school, such as students not being allowed to leave the school during school hours without permission, and most students must follow them.

Original sentence is fragmented and contains awkward word order. Reorder to a clearer structure: 'There are several rules... such as students not being allowed...' Use 'school' instead of 'another place,' and finish the thought with 'must follow them.' This fixes sentence structure and clarity.

× I think if schools are more from rules, it's very difficult for every students because students are not interested running roles, that's why.

✓ I think if schools have more rules, it would be very difficult for students because they are not interested in following rules.

Multiple errors: incorrect phrase 'more from rules' corrected to 'have more rules'; tense/modal adjusted to 'would' to express hypothetical; 'every students' should be 'students'; 'interested running roles' should be 'interested in following rules'. This addresses sentence structure and verb form issues.

× Yes, uh, one teacher I dedicate, I really dedicated and uh, his name is Suja Sujansar and uh, he always support me and uh, he always uh likes me and likes me like a daughter and I always respect him very much.

✓ Yes, there is one teacher I admire; his name is Suja Sujansar, and he always supports me. He treats me like a daughter, and I respect him very much.

Pronoun and verb form issues: 'one teacher I dedicate' is incorrect — use 'I admire' or 'there is one teacher I admire.' Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'he always supports me.' Remove repetition and make pronoun references clear.

× Umm, I think I just, uh, one rules to prefer in my school and that is the food qualities.

✓ Umm, I think I prefer one rule in my school, and that is about food quality.

Mismatch between 'one' (singular) and 'rules' (plural). Use 'one rule' and 'food quality' (singular noun phrase) for correct agreement.

× So food quality, uh, in my school's food quality is too high, too hygienic.

✓ The food quality at my school is very poor and not hygienic.

Student likely meant the food quality is bad (context later mentions poisoning). 'Too high, too hygienic' is incorrect adjective use. Replace with clear adjectives like 'poor' and 'not hygienic' to convey intended meaning.

× Uh, uh, if anyone to eat the foods, uh, suddenly they, uh, surviving food poison.

✓ If anyone eats the food, they might suddenly suffer from food poisoning.

Incorrect infinitive 'to eat the foods' should be 'eats the food'; 'surviving food poison' is ungrammatical — use 'suffer from food poisoning.' Also add modal 'might' to indicate possibility.

× Yes, in my schools I have a A1 hard, uh, strict teacher.

✓ Yes, at my school I have a very strict teacher.

Use singular 'school' and remove awkward 'A1 hard'; replace with 'a very strict teacher' for natural English and correct adjective use.

× And uh, she's name is Shivani ma'am.

✓ Her name is Shivani ma'am.

Incorrect possessive pronoun 'she's' (contraction of 'she is') used where possessive adjective 'her' is required: 'Her name is...'. Also avoid mixing contraction with honorific; use 'Ma'am' appropriately.

× She's very strict girl in our schools.

✓ She is a very strict teacher at our school.

Missing article 'a' before 'very strict girl' and awkward noun choice 'girl' for a teacher; use 'teacher.' Also use singular 'school.' Correct adjective placement with article.

× No, because all schools are deserves a rules and I prefer to uh, strict rules.

✓ No, because all schools deserve rules and I prefer strict rules.

Incorrect verb form 'are deserves' changed to 'deserve.' Article error 'a rules' should be 'rules' (no article) or 'a rule' if singular. Keep 'strict rules' without 'to' or extra articles.

× All school. Uh, that's uh, the reason to students are controlled in uh, in the teachers.

✓ All schools need rules. That's the reason students are controlled by teachers.

Fragmented sentences and incorrect preposition/voice: 'All school.' is a fragment — expand to 'All schools need rules.' 'the reason to students are controlled in the teachers' is ungrammatical; correct to passive 'students are controlled by teachers' or better 'teachers control students.' Clarify meaning and fix sentence structure.