Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Is our is 27 many rules and regulation and I can sort any following these rules students students are many many followers in these rules and suddenly we can follow school life rules and regulation. We are understanding their rules. So rules are rules are.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
Yeah, our reschool have a very rules and regulation and their, their benefits is very important in student life. So students are following these rules and they are suddenly understanding many environment and they following discipline rules and they can also understand in very, uh, very discipline and discipline and most student understand these rules.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Thí sinh
So many teasers are motivated, meaning discipline, and they are typeset in me so so teachers are suddenly discipline me, so they are very had a hard and very smart source.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Thí sinh
So rules are very important in school life, but uh, suddenly small rules is very good in student life. They are following in married rules and regulation and they can suddenly understand in very following rules. But umm, small rules are quietly following student rules.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Thí sinh
So these are these are also very strict, but TND is the many powerfully and very strict strictly in our school. They are they are understand me and for the the quite following rules are giving.
Giám khảo
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Thí sinh
Nah I am didn't for work in this type of school so rules are very important in school life.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 28.0Gợi ý: Be clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence saying whether there are rules, then give 1–2 specific examples (e.g., uniform, attendance) using linking words like 'for example' or 'also'. Keep to 2–4 sentences and avoid repetition.
Ví dụ: Yes, there are many rules at my school. For example, we must wear a uniform and arrive before 8:00 am every day. These rules help maintain discipline and create a calm learning environment.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: Answer directly with your opinion (yes or no) and give clear reasons. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to explain benefits. Avoid vague phrases and repetition.
Ví dụ: I think some additional rules could be beneficial because they promote safety and academic focus. For example, stricter rules about phone use in class would reduce distractions and help students concentrate better.
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: Start with a clear yes/no and name one dedicated teacher with a brief reason why they were dedicated. Give a specific example of what they did to support you and use 2–3 sentences.
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher in my high school English class. She spent extra time after school helping me improve my writing and gave detailed feedback on every essay, which greatly improved my skills.
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: Give a clear preference (more or fewer) and justify it with 1–2 specific reasons. Use contrast linking words like 'but' or 'however' to show nuance. Keep sentences concise and avoid repetition.
Ví dụ: I prefer fewer but clearer rules because too many rules can be confusing. However, essential rules about safety and respect should remain to maintain order and a positive learning environment.
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Điểm: 26.0Gợi ý: Answer directly and give one brief example of what made the teacher strict (e.g., punctuality, homework). Explain how that strictness affected you or the class using a linking word like 'as a result' or 'therefore'.
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very strict math teacher who always checked homework and punished late submissions. As a result, our class became more disciplined and most students started submitting work on time.
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Điểm: 34.0Gợi ý: State your preference clearly (no) and give 1–2 specific reasons why you would not want to work in a rule-free school. Use linking words like 'because' and keep it to two sentences.
Ví dụ: No, I would not want to work in a rule-free school because without rules it would be difficult to manage the class and ensure students learn. Clear rules help teachers create a safe and focused learning environment.
× Is our is 27 many rules and regulation and I can sort any following these rules students students are many many followers in these rules and suddenly we can follow school life rules and regulation.
✓ We have about 27 rules and regulations, and many students follow them in school life.
The sentence had multiple singular/plural errors: 'is 27 many rules' should be 'we have about 27 rules' (plural noun with correct verb), 'rule and regulation' should be plural 'rules and regulations', and 'students students are many many followers' should be 'many students follow them'. Also remove redundant words like 'suddenly' which is incorrect in this context. Suggestion: use 'we have' for possession and make nouns plural to match the number; use 'students follow them' for clarity.
× Is our is 27 many rules and regulation and I can sort any following these rules students students are many many followers in these rules and suddenly we can follow school life rules and regulation.
✓ We have about 27 rules and regulations, and many students follow them in school life.
The original used 'the' incorrectly and had unclear article usage. Using 'about 27 rules and regulations' requires no definite article; 'the' was not needed. Suggestion: use 'about' or 'around' with a number and use plural nouns without unnecessary articles.
× So rules are rules are.
✓ Rules are important.
This fragment repeats words and lacks clear meaning. It should be rephrased into a complete sentence with subject and complement. Suggestion: state the idea simply, e.g. 'Rules are important.'
× Yeah, our reschool have a very rules and regulation and their, their benefits is very important in student life.
✓ Yes, our school has many rules and regulations, and their benefits are very important in students' lives.
Errors: 'reschool' should be 'school'; subject-verb agreement 'school have' → 'school has'; 'a very rules' incorrect use of article and plurality → 'many rules'; 'their, their benefits is' subject-verb agreement → 'their benefits are'; 'student life' should be 'students' lives' for plural. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and match singular/plural nouns and possessives.
× So students are following these rules and they are suddenly understanding many environment and they following discipline rules and they can also understand in very, uh, very discipline and discipline and most student understand these rules.
✓ Students follow these rules and gradually understand the school environment; they follow disciplinary rules and most students understand them.
Problems with pronouns and verb forms: 'they are suddenly understanding many environment' is awkward—use 'gradually understand the school environment'; 'they following' missing auxiliary → 'they follow' or 'they are following'; 'most student' singular/plural mismatch → 'most students'. Suggestion: use clear pronouns and correct verb forms, avoid 'suddenly' when 'gradually' or 'generally' is meant.
× So many teasers are motivated, meaning discipline, and they are typeset in me so so teachers are suddenly discipline me, so they are very had a hard and very smart source.
✓ Many teachers are motivated and disciplined; they influenced me, so they taught me well and were intelligent and hardworking.
Multiple pronoun and word choice errors: 'teasers' → 'teachers'; 'meaning discipline' unclear—use 'and disciplined'; 'typeset in me' likely means 'influenced me'; 'suddenly discipline me' incorrect adverb and structure; 'they are very had a hard' incorrect tense and wording → 'they were hardworking'. Suggestion: choose correct nouns and verbs, use past tense for past influence, and use appropriate adverbs.
× So rules are very important in school life, but uh, suddenly small rules is very good in student life.
✓ Rules are very important in school life, but small rules are also good for students.
Tense and agreement issues: 'small rules is' should be 'small rules are'; 'in student life' better as 'for students'. Remove 'suddenly' which is inappropriate here. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and use natural prepositional phrases.
× They are following in married rules and regulation and they can suddenly understand in very following rules.
✓ They follow the established rules and regulations and can better understand how to follow rules.
Prepositions are incorrect: 'following in married rules' meaningless; 'understand in very following rules' incorrect. Use 'follow the rules' or 'follow rules and regulations' and 'understand how to follow rules'. Suggestion: use standard collocations like 'follow rules' and 'understand how to...'.
× But umm, small rules are quietly following student rules.
✓ But small rules are quietly followed by students.
Original has incorrect word order and verb form. Passive 'are followed' fits intention; subject-verb agreement 'small rules are' is correct but needed passive construction. Suggestion: use passive or active correctly: 'students quietly follow small rules.'
× So these are these are also very strict, but TND is the many powerfully and very strict strictly in our school.
✓ Some teachers are very strict, and strict discipline is enforced strongly in our school.
Pronoun and noun problems: repeated 'these are these are' and 'TND' unclear. Likely meant 'they' or 'the teachers'. Use clear noun 'teachers' and phrase 'strict discipline'. Suggestion: avoid unclear acronyms and repetitions; state subject clearly.
× They are they are understand me and for the the quite following rules are giving.
✓ They understand me and give clear instructions about following the rules.
Repetition and pronoun errors: 'They are they are understand me' should be 'They understand me'; 'the the quite following rules are giving' should be 'give clear instructions about following the rules'. Suggestion: remove repetitions and use appropriate verbs like 'give instructions'.
× Nah I am didn't for work in this type of school so rules are very important in school life.
✓ No, I would not want to work in this type of school because rules are very important in school life.
Tense and auxiliary errors: 'I am didn't for work' is ungrammatical. Use conditional 'would not want' or 'do not want' depending on meaning. Also connect reason with 'because'. Suggestion: use correct negative forms and modal verbs for preferences (would, want).