Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers and repetition, and give one or two specific rule examples with linking words. Use correct verb forms and article use (e.g., “There are many rules at my school”).

Ví dụ: There are many rules at my school. For example, students must wear clean uniforms and are not allowed to wear slippers, which helps maintain a neat and professional environment.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion and support it with a specific reason and a linking phrase. Use correct tense and subject-verb agreement, and avoid vague phrasing like “from rules.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I think more rules could help. For instance, if the school enforces an anti-smoking policy, it could reduce smoking on campus and protect students’ health.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and describe the teacher with clear, relevant details. Avoid unclear or incorrect comparisons and improve grammar (e.g., “He cared about our health and spent a lot of time helping us”). Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a dedicated teacher about four years ago in high school. He genuinely cared about our health and well-being, and he often spent extra time after class helping students with personal and academic problems.

Gợi ý: State your preference clearly and give a specific reason with correct grammar and a linking phrase. Avoid repetition and incomplete thoughts; explain how more rules would affect you personally.

Ví dụ: I prefer fewer rules at school because I usually follow rules already, and too many regulations would make me feel anxious and constrained.

Gợi ý: Be clear about who you mean and describe one concrete example of strictness. Use correct pronouns and sentence structure, and avoid hesitations or unclear symbols. Explain briefly why the rule felt strict.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a strict teacher in high school who banned drinking water during lessons. That felt very strict because it seemed unnecessary and uncomfortable for students during long classes.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and one clear reason. Improve grammar and clarity: avoid contradictory phrases and explain personal preference with specific detail (e.g., workload, time commitment).

Ví dụ: No, I would not. I don't want to become a teacher because the job requires a lot of time and emotional energy supporting students, and I prefer a career with more flexible hours.

× Yes, they are many school includes many rules.

✓ Yes, there are many rules at my school.

The original uses incorrect subject and word order. 'They are many' is wrong; use 'there are many' for plural existence. Also 'school includes many rules' is awkward; 'rules at my school' is natural. Use plural 'rules' with 'there are' for plural nouns.

× For example, in my school, uh, they, they need you keep, uh, clothes clean, uh, when you go to school and you can't wear slippers.

✓ For example, at my school, they need you to keep your clothes clean when you come to school, and you can't wear slippers.

The sentence needs the infinitive 'to keep' after 'need' rather than bare 'keep' (Verb + -ing issue not directly but grammar requires infinitive). Also use 'at my school' and 'come to school' instead of 'go', and add possessive 'your clothes'. Remove filler words and duplicate 'they'.

× Yes I agree that cause many university students in school they will smoking but if school published rules they will limited them to smoking.

✓ Yes, I agree, because many students smoke at school, but if the school publishes rules, it will limit them from smoking.

Use 'because' instead of 'that cause'. 'Many students smoke' uses simple present for habitual action. 'Will smoking' is incorrect; use base verb 'smoke'. 'School published rules' should be 'the school publishes rules' (present simple) to indicate general truth. 'Will limited them to smoking' should be 'will limit them from smoking' or 'will prevent them from smoking.' Modal/auxiliary and verb forms corrected.

× So I think it's a good thing to from rules.

✓ So I think it's a good thing to have rules.

'To from rules' is ungrammatical. Use 'to have rules' or 'to create rules'. The infinitive structure 'to have' expresses the idea correctly.

× Yes, I had. I met him about four years ago and he is my high school teacher.

✓ Yes, I have. I met him about four years ago; he was my high school teacher.

The student answered with 'I had' which is incomplete. Use 'I have' or 'Yes, I have' to answer. Because the meeting happened four years ago, use past tense 'was' for 'my high school teacher.'

× He doesn't like other teachers.

✓ He is different from other teachers.

'He doesn't like other teachers' means he dislikes them, which likely isn't intended. If meant to say he is not like other teachers, use 'He is different from other teachers.' Adjust meaning accordingly.

× He very attention for our health and life, so he spent much time in our life.

✓ He paid a lot of attention to our health and lives, so he spent a lot of time helping us.

'He very attention' is wrong word order and form; use 'paid attention' or 'was very attentive to'. 'Attention' needs a verb. Use 'to our health and lives' (plural). 'Spent much time in our life' is awkward; 'spent a lot of time helping us' is clearer.

× Well, I prefer to have fewer rules at school because always a good student in school so I doesn't do some mistake.

✓ Well, I prefer to have fewer rules at school because I am always a good student, so I don't make many mistakes.

Missing subject 'I am' for 'always a good student'. 'I doesn't' is wrong; use 'I don't' for first person. 'Do some mistake' is ungrammatical; use 'make mistakes' and quantify with 'many' or 'any'.

× So if school has has more rules I will feel anxiety and and.

✓ So if the school has more rules, I will feel anxious.

Use 'the school' with article. 'Has has' is duplicated; use single 'has'. 'Feel anxiety' is a noun; use adjective 'feel anxious'. Remove extra 'and'.

× Well, I have had she is my high school teacher and she published A regulation for our class that he limited our drink water in class.

✓ Well, I had a strict teacher; she was my high school teacher and she introduced a rule for our class that limited drinking water in class.

Sentence has pronoun confusion and tense errors. 'I have had she is' is incorrect. Use 'she was' for past. 'Published A regulation' is unnatural; use 'introduced a rule'. 'He limited our drink water' mixes pronouns; clarify subject 'she' and verb 'limited drinking water'. },{