Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yes, there are a lot of rules. For example, we don't, we, we are not allowed to cheat on our examination. It is most important rules. And what's more, we need to umm, uh, we need to we, we are not permit to use our phone in my in our classes, yeah.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
No, I don't think more rules present more prevent more benefits to our students because it may limited our student F freedom. Yeah, but with in however with some.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, I once have a really dedicated teacher which is my English teacher in my Senior High School. She is really nice person that I have ever met. She always patiently answer my question and help me to analyze my examination grades. So it helped me. He should.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Thí sinh
I prefer to have flu, you know, the balance amounts rules in our school because it is not well with more or less rules with students, yeah. And.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, it is my English teacher in my Senior High School. She is really straight to us with our homework assignment and examination grade, which she is really a dedicated teacher as well.
Giám khảo
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Thí sinh
No, I believe it is hard to manage student with rule free and they may make a lot of, you know, trouble without rules. So I believe it is essential for student to have some rules in school when they.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁自然,避免重复和犹豫词(如 "umm"、"uh"、重复的词)。开头用一句主题句直接回答,然后用1–2个具体例子补充,并用连词使句子流畅。例如说明哪几条规则、为什么重要。注意语法(we are not permitted 而不是 we are not permit)。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several important rules at my school. For example, students are not permitted to cheat in exams, which helps keep assessments fair. Also, mobile phones are banned in classrooms so that students can focus on lessons.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答要更有逻辑并使用连接词。先明确立场(Yes/No),然后给出清晰的原因和必要的例外。避免语法错误(limited → limit,may limited → may limit)。去掉多余填充词。
Ví dụ: No, I don't think adding more rules would help. Too many rules can limit students' freedom and creativity, although some basic rules are necessary to keep order and safety.
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答要注意时态和代词一致,句子要连贯并提供具体例子说明老师的“dedicated”表现。去掉无关短语(如“He should”),使用过去时描述经历,并用连接词连接细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very dedicated English teacher in senior high school. She always patiently answered my questions and helped me analyze my exam results, which improved my grades and confidence.
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 要直接回答并用简洁句子说明理由。避免口语填充词("you know", "yeah")和模糊词("flu")。给出具体说明什么样的平衡,比如哪些规则需要存在,哪些可以放宽。
Ví dụ: I prefer a balanced number of rules at school. Some rules, like safety regulations and anti-cheating policies, should be strict, while others can be more flexible to encourage student independence.
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 改进语法和词汇(strict 而非 straight),使用更自然表达并举例说明老师严格的具体行为(如按时批改作业、严格评分)。保持句子简短有力。
Ví dụ: Yes, my senior high English teacher was quite strict. She enforced deadlines firmly and gave detailed feedback on homework and exams, which helped us improve our work.
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Điểm: 61.0Gợi ý: 回答要完整并避免句子未完结。直接陈述观点并给出两个简要理由(例如管理困难和影响学习环境)。用连接词使逻辑清晰,减少口语填充词。
Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't. A rule-free school would be hard to manage and could lead to disruptive behaviour, making it difficult for students to learn. Some basic rules are essential to maintain order and safety.
× It is most important rules.
✓ They are the most important rules.
问题类型ID:1(Singular and plural issue)及22(Article errors)。原句主语和谓语不一致且缺少定冠词。原句用“It is”指单数,但“rules”是复数,应改为“They are”或“This is”搭配单数。建议使用定冠词“the”表示特指:"They are the most important rules." 中文解释:原句主语数与动词不一致且缺少定冠词,应把“it is”改为复数形式并加上“the”。
× we are not permit to use our phone in my in our classes
✓ we are not permitted to use our phones in our classes
问题类型ID:4(Modal verb usage)及9(Verb in the past participle form)。原句中“permit”应使用过去分词“permitted”与被动结构“are not permitted”搭配;另外“phone”应为复数“phones”,并修正多余的“my”。中文解释:被动语态需要过去分词,且手机通常用复数,去掉多余的所有格“my”。建议:"we are not permitted to use our phones in our classes."
× No, I don't think more rules present more prevent more benefits to our students because it may limited our student F freedom.
✓ No, I don't think more rules would bring more benefits to our students because they may limit our students' freedom.
问题类型ID:5(Past tense issue)/6(Present tense issue)/1(Singular and plural issue)/11(Incorrect use of prepositions)/22(Article errors)。原句时态和动词形式混乱:用“present more prevent more benefits”不合语法,应改为“would bring more benefits”。“may limited”应为“may limit”(情态动词后用动词原形)。“our student F freedom”应为“our students' freedom”(复数所有格)。中文解释:情态动词后需用动词原形,时态要保持一致,名词复数及所有格要正确。建议:"No, I don't think more rules would bring more benefits to our students because they may limit our students' freedom."
× Yes, I once have a really dedicated teacher which is my English teacher in my Senior High School.
✓ Yes, I once had a really dedicated teacher who was my English teacher in senior high school.
问题类型ID:5(Past tense issue)及26(Sentence structure errors)及12(Incorrect use of pronouns)。“once have”时态错误,过去经历应使用过去式“had”。用于指人的关系从句应使用关系代词“who”而非“which”。中文解释:描述过去经历要用过去式,修饰人的关系代词用who。建议:"Yes, I once had a really dedicated teacher who was my English teacher in senior high school."
× She always patiently answer my question and help me to analyze my examination grades.
✓ She always patiently answered my questions and helped me analyze my exam grades.
问题类型ID:27(Subject-verb agreement errors)及5(Past tense issue)。句子描述过去经历,谓语应为过去式“answered”和“helped”;同时“question”应为复数“questions”。“helped me analyze”中可省略to。中文解释:叙述过去要用过去式,主谓要一致,名词数要匹配。建议:"She always patiently answered my questions and helped me analyze my exam grades."
× So it helped me. He should.
✓ So it helped me.
问题类型ID:12(Incorrect use of pronouns)及26(Sentence structure errors)。“He should”片段不连贯且与上下文性别/指代不一致,应删除无意义的短语,保留完整句子。中文解释:保留连贯的句子,移除与上下文不符或不完整的代词短语。建议简化为一句合理完整的话。
× I prefer to have flu, you know, the balance amounts rules in our school because it is not well with more or less rules with students, yeah.
✓ I prefer to have a balanced number of rules at our school because too many or too few rules are not good for students.
问题类型ID:26(Sentence structure errors)及13(Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs)及18(Incorrect order of adjectives)。原句词语选择和结构混乱:"flu"错误,"balance amounts rules"不合语法。应改为"a balanced number of rules"并将后半句整理为“too many or too few rules are not good for students”。中文解释:使用正确的表达来表示“平衡数量”,并把句子重组为更自然的英文。建议:"I prefer to have a balanced number of rules at our school because too many or too few rules are not good for students."
× She is really straight to us with our homework assignment and examination grade, which she is really a dedicated teacher as well.
✓ She was really strict with us about our homework and exam grades; she was also a very dedicated teacher.
问题类型ID:13(Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs)及5(Past tense issue)。“straight”用法错误,应为“strict”。描述过去经历应使用过去式“was”。句子可分为两部分以提高清晰度。中文解释:注意形容词用法区分(straight vs. strict)并保持时态一致。建议:"She was really strict with us about our homework and exam grades; she was also a very dedicated teacher."
× No, I believe it is hard to manage student with rule free and they may make a lot of, you know, trouble without rules.
✓ No, I believe it is hard to manage students in a rule-free school and they may cause a lot of trouble without rules.
问题类型ID:1(Singular and plural issue)及4(Modal verb usage)及11(Incorrect use of prepositions)及22(Article errors)。“student”应为复数“students”。“rule free”需用连字符“rule-free”并加不定冠词“a”来修饰学校:“in a rule-free school”。“make ... trouble”不常用,改为“cause a lot of trouble”。中文解释:名词复数,复合形容词要连字符并与冠词搭配,动词搭配要自然。建议:"No, I believe it is hard to manage students in a rule-free school and they may cause a lot of trouble without rules."