Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Of course, I enjoyed chatting with my friends and from from chatting my chatting to my friends, I can learn a little more interesting things from them and I can listen.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
MMM, such a we usually check like the life we we live in the universities and the my our parents and our our classmates and some interesting things.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer to chat with many people because everyone have different side and we we can talk about one thing with different opinions so I can learn different.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
Of course I I love communicating face to face. We, we umm my friends and I can umm notice others face changes and we know the and his or her.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I often argue with friends Different. Everyone has different perspectives and so it is common to it's common for us to have different opinions we argue some comments to.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答应更直接且语法正确,避免重复。先用一句话回答问题,再给出一两条具体原因或例子。注意时态一致和人称一致,精简句子长度不超过5句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me learn new things and see different viewpoints. For example, last week a friend told me about a useful study app that I started using.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答要有主题句并列出具体话题,避免停顿词和重复。使用连词如 'usually'、'for example' 来组织信息,并尽量提供具体细节。
Ví dụ: We usually talk about university life, our families, and classmates. For example, we discuss upcoming exams, interesting lectures, and plans for the weekend.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 语法需改进(主谓一致),句子应更简洁并用连接词使表达连贯。可以先给出偏好,再解释原因并举例。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting in groups because people share different opinions. For instance, when we plan a trip, everyone suggests different places and I learn about new options.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 回答要清晰说明偏好并给出具体理由,避免填充词(umm、I I)和不完整句子。可用连词补充原因并举具体情景。
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can see facial expressions and body language. For example, when discussing something serious, it's easier to understand each other's feelings in person.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答应更自然并避免重复。先直接回答频率,然后解释原因并举例。使用连接词如 'because' 或 'when' 来组织句子。
Ví dụ: Yes, we sometimes argue because everyone has different perspectives. For example, we once disagreed about which movie to watch, but we talked it through and resolved it calmly.
× Of course, I enjoyed chatting with my friends and from from chatting my chatting to my friends, I can learn a little more interesting things from them and I can listen.
✓ Of course, I enjoy chatting with my friends, and by chatting with them I can learn some interesting things and listen to them.
学生原句时态不一致,开头用过去时“enjoyed”但描述的是一般习惯,应使用一般现在时“enjoy”。句子重复且结构混乱(如“from from”、“my chatting to my friends”),应简化为“by chatting with them”表示方式。最后“learn a little more interesting things”搭配不自然,改为“learn some interesting things”;“listen”需加宾语“to them”。建议养成先确认时态(习惯用一般现在时),并精简表达,避免重复。
× MMM, such a we usually check like the life we we live in the universities and the my our parents and our our classmates and some interesting things.
✓ Hmm, we usually talk about the life we live at university, our parents, our classmates and some interesting things.
原句中大量介词和冠词使用混乱,如“check like”不合适,改为“talk about”。“live in the universities”应为“live at university”或“live in university”更自然。多处冗余代词(the my our)需要删除。建议学习常用介词搭配(talk about, live at/in)并避免重复代词。
× I prefer to chat with many people because everyone have different side and we we can talk about one thing with different opinions so I can learn different.
✓ I prefer to chat with many people because everyone has different sides, and we can talk about the same thing with different opinions, so I can learn different perspectives.
主谓不一致:“everyone”是单数,动词应为“has”而不是“have”。“different side”应为复数“different sides”或更自然的“different perspectives”。句尾“learn different”不完整,应补全为“learn different perspectives”。建议复习主语为不定代词时的动词形式(everyone/each/he/she -> singular verb)并使用完整名词短语。
× Of course I I love communicating face to face. We, we umm my friends and I can umm notice others face changes and we know the and his or her.
✓ Of course, I love communicating face to face. My friends and I can notice others' facial expressions and know their feelings.
句中重复“I I”与停顿词“umm”属口语填充,应删去以书面化。原句“notice others face changes”介词和名词搭配错误,改为“notice others' facial expressions”。“we know the and his or her”不完整且代词混乱,应改为“know their feelings”。时态仍为一般现在,保持不变。建议练习用简洁完整句子表达面部表情和情感相关短语。
× Yeah, I often argue with friends Different. Everyone has different perspectives and so it is common to it's common for us to have different opinions we argue some comments to.
✓ Yeah, I often argue with friends. Everyone has different perspectives, so it's common for us to have different opinions and sometimes we argue about each other's comments.
句子有断句问题和重复“it's common”。保持一般现在时“often argue”。“Different”单独使用位置不当,应并入下一句。原句“we argue some comments to”语法错误,改为“argue about each other's comments”。建议注意句子连接与标点,避免重复短语并使用正确介词搭配(argue about)。