Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
I love chatting with friends. I don't like to stay at home. I like some activities in outdoor.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
We usually play some tennis, football, basketball together.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer to chat with a group of people because I play the sports that need a lot of people, not with only one friend. So I prefer to chat with a group of people.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer to communicate face to face so so that we can make more fun and play some activities together.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
I seldom argue with friends so that we can keep a good communication together and I can have more friends to play together.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答直接但不够自然和连贯。句子结构简单且有语法小错误(如“in outdoor”应为“outdoors”)。可以用一到两句更自然地表达喜好并给出简短原因,最多不超过5句,避免重复。
Ví dụ: Yes, I love chatting with my friends because I enjoy being social and active. I prefer going outdoors with them for walks or games rather than staying at home.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答抓住了主题,但没有直接回应“chat about”而是说活动。应先做主题句回答聊天内容,然后用连词补充具体活动作为细节。句子可更具体以增加信息量。
Ví dụ: We usually talk about our hobbies and plans, especially sports. For example, we often discuss arranging matches for tennis, football or basketball.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 内容重复,句子冗长且不够自然。应该先直接给出偏好,然后简要解释原因并用连词连接,避免重复同一句话。可提供对比以增强表达。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting in a group because many of my conversations revolve around team sports. Compared to one-on-one talks, group chats help us coordinate games and share different opinions.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 答案明确但有口误(重复“so”)和不够简洁。可以先说明偏好,再用具体原因支持,并用连词使逻辑更顺畅。避免口语填充词。
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it's more engaging and we can easily plan activities together. It also feels more personal than messages on social media.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 66.0Gợi ý: 回答意思清楚但逻辑表达有问题(因果关系表达不自然),且句子较长。应用更自然的连接词并把原因分成短句,提供一两个具体例子会更有说服力。
Ví dụ: I rarely argue with my friends because we try to resolve small issues quickly. For instance, if we disagree about plans, we usually talk it through and compromise.
× I love chatting with friends.
✓ I love chatting with friends.
原句没有形容词排序错误,保留不变。虽然无误,但保持句子简洁自然。
× I don't like to stay at home.
✓ I don't like staying at home.
原句使用不定式“to stay”虽然能被理解,但在表示不喜欢某个活动时更常用动名词(-ing)结构。建议使用“I don't like staying at home.” 更自然。
× I like some activities in outdoor.
✓ I like some outdoor activities.
原句中“in outdoor”是错误搭配,正确用法为复合形容词+名词或介词短语“outdoor activities”或“activities outdoors”。建议把形容词放在名词前:"outdoor activities"。
× We usually play some tennis, football, basketball together.
✓ We usually play tennis, football, and basketball together.
列举运动项目时不需要“some”,并且并列项之间用逗号和连词连接更自然。建议去掉“some”,并在最后两项间加“and”。
× I prefer to chat with a group of people because I play the sports that need a lot of people, not with only one friend.
✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because I play sports that need a lot of players, not just with one friend.
原句中“the sports that need a lot of people”表达重复且“people”用法不够准确。改为“sports that need a lot of players”更清晰;另外“not with only one friend”应改为“not just with one friend”更自然。整体为句子结构与用词改进。
× So I prefer to chat with a group of people.
✓ So I prefer chatting with a group of people.
前文已经说明偏好,用动名词形式“chatting”与前面句子一致更自然。原句语法可接受,但建议统一动名词结构。
× I prefer to communicate face to face so so that we can make more fun and play some activities together.
✓ I prefer to communicate face to face so that we can have more fun and do activities together.
原句有重复“so so that”,需删去重复。短语“make more fun”不自然,常用“have more fun”。“play some activities”错误,活动用“do activities”或直接用动词(play games)。因此改为“have more fun and do activities together”。
× I seldom argue with friends so that we can keep a good communication together and I can have more friends to play together.
✓ I seldom argue with my friends so that we can maintain good communication and I can have more friends to play with.
原句问题包括缺定冠词(my friends更自然)、“keep a good communication”搭配不当,应为“maintain good communication”或“keep in good communication”,并且“have more friends to play together”语序与介词错误,改为“have more friends to play with”。最终提高表达自然性和语法准确性。