Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Well, I will say yes, I like chatting with my close friends because that's a good way to know more about each other and it can raise up our relationships.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
Touch will include many kind of topics like painting, physics or just attitude to subjects and you know, many various topics that we can talk about and sometimes we really had a good time.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
Why I prefer to talk with one, only one friend? Because you know that kind of specialist. And when you just talk to only one, you can concentrate on their own perceptions, not what you are perception that will distract your mind.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer to communicate face to face because when you communicate in person to someone, you can directly observe their emojis on their face, like angry or disappointed or just happy. But when you are communicating with them on social media, you can't rob their.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Well, at terms, but I think, uh, that's a positive way to, uh, enhance your connections, you know, uh, in life we have many argues that with anyone, but it's really a effective way, efficient way to connect us.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、简洁并且用更地道的表达。开头直接肯定,然后给出一到两句具体原因或例子。注意语法(例如 'raise up our relationships' 不自然),用词要准确(use 'improve' 或 'strengthen'),句子不宜过长。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my close friends because it helps us get to know each other better and strengthens our relationships. For example, we often share personal stories and advice, which makes us feel closer.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答缺乏清晰的主题句,且有较多语法和词汇错误(例如 'Touch will include' 和 'attitude to subjects')。应该先给出一个概括性主题句,然后列举具体话题并用连接词使句子连贯,尽量使用准确的词汇。
Ví dụ: We talk about a wide range of things. For instance, some of my friends and I discuss hobbies like painting, while others are interested in science topics such as physics. We also talk about our opinions on school subjects and everyday life, and these conversations are usually fun.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 表达不连贯且句法错误较多。不要用反问句式开始,直接陈述偏好并给出明确理由。用更准确的词汇(例如 'focus on their point of view' 而不是 'perceptions' 的滥用),并用连接词组织原因。
Ví dụ: I prefer talking to one friend at a time because it's easier to focus on their point of view. In a one-on-one conversation I can listen carefully and respond thoughtfully, whereas group chats can be noisy and distracting.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 表达想法可以,但有措辞和句式问题(例如 'emojis on their face' 和 'you can't rob their' 不恰当)。应使用自然短语如 'facial expressions',并补充一两个具体原因或例子。句子要简洁,避免重复。
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can read people's facial expressions, such as anger or happiness, which helps you understand their true feelings. On social media, it's harder to tell how someone really feels.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答含糊并有填充词(uh, you know),语法和用词错误(例如 'at terms', 'have many argues')。应直接回答并解释原因,避免口头语,使用准确表达如 'disagree' 或 'have disagreements',并给出具体例子或结果。
Ví dụ: Yes, sometimes my friends and I have disagreements, but I see them as positive because they help us understand each other better. For example, after a disagreement about plans, we usually talk it through and end up respecting each other's views more.
× Well, I will say yes, I like chatting with my close friends because that's a good way to know more about each other and it can raise up our relationships.
✓ Well, I would say yes. I like chatting with my close friends because it's a good way to get to know each other better and it can improve our relationships.
问题类型:现在时/表达习惯错误。说明:原句中“I will say yes”用于一般喜好时不自然,英语中更常用“would say”或直接“I’d say”。“know more about each other”更地道的表达是“get to know each other better”。“raise up our relationships”搭配错误,应该用“improve our relationships”。建议:在表达一般偏好时用现在时或惯用语“would say”,使用固定搭配“get to know”和“improve”。
× Touch will include many kind of topics like painting, physics or just attitude to subjects and you know, many various topics that we can talk about and sometimes we really had a good time.
✓ Topics will include many kinds of things like painting, physics, or just attitudes toward subjects. You know, there are many different topics we can talk about and sometimes we really have a good time.
问题类型:介词及搭配使用错误。说明:原句用“Touch”错误,应为“Topics”。“many kind of topics”应为“many kinds of topics”或“many different topics”。“attitude to subjects”中介词应为“attitudes toward subjects”。时态方面“we really had a good time”与前后语境一致性需要现在时“we really have a good time”。建议:注意可数名词的复数形式和固定搭配(attitudes toward),时态保持一致。
× Why I prefer to talk with one, only one friend? Because you know that kind of specialist. And when you just talk to only one, you can concentrate on their own perceptions, not what you are perception that will distract your mind.
✓ Why do I prefer to talk with one — only one — friend? Because, you know, that allows more depth. And when you talk to only one person, you can concentrate on their perceptions, not on your own perceptions, which would distract your mind.
问题类型:主谓一致及句子结构错误。说明:疑问句需要助动词“do”。“you know that kind of specialist”意思不清,改为更自然的解释“that allows more depth”。“talk to only one”后需加“person”。代词和名词搭配应保持一致:“their perceptions”可以指代单数中性人,但“not what you are perception”完全错误,改为“not on your own perceptions”。最后从句需用“which would distract”。建议:构造疑问句使用助动词,注意名词与代词的一致性及逻辑清晰表达。
× I prefer to communicate face to face because when you communicate in person to someone, you can directly observe their emojis on their face, like angry or disappointed or just happy. But when you are communicating with them on social media, you can't rob their.
✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face because when you communicate with someone in person, you can directly observe their facial expressions, like anger, disappointment, or happiness. But when you are communicating with them on social media, you can't read them as well.
问题类型:现在时/词汇搭配错误。说明:“face to face”常写作“face-to-face”。“communicate in person to someone”不自然,应为“communicate with someone in person”。“observe their emojis on their face”错误,应该是“observe their facial expressions”或“see their emotions”。“like angry or disappointed or just happy”应使用名词形式“anger, disappointment, or happiness”。最后“you can't rob their”毫无意义,改为“you can't read them as well”。建议:使用正确的固定搭配“face-to-face”,“facial expressions”,以及名词而非形容词列表;保持句意清晰。
× Well, at terms, but I think, uh, that's a positive way to, uh, enhance your connections, you know, uh, in life we have many argues that with anyone, but it's really a effective way, efficient way to connect us.
✓ Well, at times, but I think that's a positive way to enhance your connections. You know, in life we have many arguments with others, and it's really an effective and efficient way to connect us.
问题类型:过去时/词汇与冠词使用错误。说明:原句“at terms”应为“at times”。“we have many argues that with anyone”语法完全错误,应为“we have many arguments with others”或“with anyone”改为“others”。“it's really a effective way, efficient way”冠词使用错误且表达冗余,改为“it's really an effective and efficient way”。时态用现在时描述常态正确。建议:使用正确名词“arguments”,注意冠词“an effective”,合并重复形容词用and连接。