Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the response more grammatical and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words like "uh", use correct verb forms and plural/singular agreement, and give one specific detail or example. Keep it under five sentences and use a linking phrase to add the detail.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. I like to share new ideas and memorable moments with them, for example when we plan trips or discuss projects together. This helps us stay close and create lasting memories.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and clearly using correct grammar and specific vocabulary. Begin with a topic sentence saying the main subject, then add one or two specific examples with a linking word (for example, such as). Avoid repetition and filler words.

Ví dụ: We usually talk about video games. For example, we discuss new game releases, updates, and the latest gaming technologies such as graphics engines or virtual reality features.

Gợi ý: Give a clear preference in the first sentence and explain why with one specific reason. Use correct expressions (e.g., "I prefer chatting with one person") and avoid unclear phrases like "shut feed". Use a linking word to introduce the reason (because, since).

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one person because it is more convenient and reduces the chance of misunderstandings. For instance, one-to-one conversations make it easier to explain personal opinions clearly.

Gợi ý: State your preference clearly and use accurate terms (face-to-face, video calls, social media). If you mention both, compare them briefly and give a specific reason. Avoid vague phrases and repetitions.

Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows for better body language and eye contact. However, I also like video calls when meeting in person is not possible because they let us see each other's expressions.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and correct sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., "Not often") then explain why with a specific reason and example. Use linking words like "because" and avoid incorrect verb forms and unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: Not often, because we generally accept each other's opinions and support one another. If a disagreement happens, we talk it through and try to find a solution together.

× I like to chatting with my friends because, uh, I want to share some of my initial idea with my friend and share the best moment together in the greatest memory.

✓ I like chatting with my friends because I want to share some of my initial ideas with my friends and share the best moments together as great memories.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'chatting' (Grammar problem type 8) rather than the infinitive 'to chatting'. Also, 'idea' and 'friend' need plural forms to match meaning (singular/plural issue, ID 1). Changed 'the greatest memory' to 'great memories' for natural plural expression and corrected article usage. Suggestion: use 'like + -ing' for general preferences and ensure nouns agree in number.

× We are kind of like a person that keen to, uh, video games. So normally we, we just talk about the, the news about game, uh, technologies, for example.

✓ We are kind of like people who are keen on video games. So normally we just talk about news about games and game technologies, for example.

The original uses singular 'person' and incorrect pronoun 'that' and preposition 'keen to'. Changed to plural 'people' and relative pronoun 'who' (pronoun issue, ID 12) and the correct preposition 'keen on' (preposition issue, ID 11). Also pluralized 'game' to 'games' to match meaning (singular/plural issue, ID 1). Suggestion: use 'keen on' and match plural nouns with plural subjects.

× Uh, it's hard to say because sometimes I, I shut feed all of my groups, but I think at the end I would say chat with one person is, might be convenient and uh, prevent from, uh, misunderst.

✓ It's hard to say because sometimes I shut off all of my group feeds, but I think in the end chatting with one person might be more convenient and prevent misunderstandings.

Multiple errors: 'I shut feed all of my groups' is ungrammatical and unclear; corrected to 'I shut off all of my group feeds'. 'Chat with one person is' requires a gerund 'chatting' to be the subject (verb+ -ing issue, ID 8). 'Might be convenient' needs 'more' to compare (comparative context, ID 25) and 'prevent from misunderst' should be 'prevent misunderstandings' (noun form and plural) and remove unnecessary preposition 'from' (preposition issue, ID 11). Suggestion: use clear verbs like 'shut off feeds', use gerunds for activities, and use 'prevent + noun' without 'from'.

× Uh, I would say video call is the greatest thing that we did in the moment we do at the moment. So I think face to face is that's a good choice that we use it.

✓ I would say video calls are the best option for the moments we spend together. So I think face-to-face communication is also a good choice.

Original has article and number errors: 'video call is the greatest thing' is awkward; changed to plural 'video calls are' (singular/plural and article issues, IDs 1 and 17). Removed redundant phrasing 'in the moment we do at the moment'. 'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective and 'communication' clarifies the noun; removed unnecessary 'it'. Suggestion: prefer concise natural phrasing and ensure noun number and article usage are correct.

× Not very. I grew because we are except all of the topic that we talking and we kind of like, uh, support each other. So no matter what that we say, we understand and try to fix together.

✓ Not often. I think we rarely argue because we accept all the topics we talk about and we support each other. So no matter what we say, we understand each other and try to resolve issues together.

Several structural and word choice problems: 'I grew' is incorrect and likely meant 'I guess' (word choice, sentence structure ID 26). 'Except' should be 'accept' (word choice/pronoun issue ID 12) and 'the topic that we talking' needs 'topics we talk about' (tense/present participle issues, IDs 6 and 10). 'Fix together' is informal; 'resolve issues together' is clearer. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions, correct verb forms, and clear collocations like 'talk about', 'accept', 'support', and 'resolve'.