Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce fillers and repetition, give a concise topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words if adding details. Aim for natural phrasing and controlled hesitation.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax and stay connected. For example, we often share jokes and talk about our day, which makes me feel closer to them.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opening sentence naming typical topics, then add specific examples. Avoid vague phrases like “I don't know” and reduce repetition.

Ví dụ: We usually talk about TV series and movies. For instance, we recently discussed plot twists in a popular drama and exchanged recommendations, and sometimes we also talk about relationships and daily life.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct preference or balanced statement, then give brief reasons and an example. Remove hesitations and unnecessary fillers.

Ví dụ: I don't have a strong preference: I enjoy group chats because they are lively, but I also like private conversations with my best friend when we want to talk about personal matters. For example, I join a group chat for daily banter but message my childhood friend when I need advice.

Gợi ý: Give a clear preference and two concise reasons using linking words. Avoid repeated words and unclear statements about privacy.

Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal and I can read body language. Also, I value my privacy, so I avoid sharing everything on social media.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and explain briefly why arguments happen and how you handle them. Use clear linking words and fewer hesitations.

Ví dụ: Yes, we sometimes argue because we have different opinions, but I see arguments as a normal part of friendship. Usually we discuss our points calmly and resolve the disagreement quickly.

× Yes uh, it's like my favorite hobby to chat with friends and uh, like chit chat and uh, laughing together in messages like uh, it's so fun and so uh, like interesting I guess in my opinion.

✓ Yes, it's my favorite hobby to chat with friends, chit-chat, and laugh together in messages; it's so fun and interesting, I guess.

The original uses inconsistent verb forms and nouns (e.g., 'chit chat' as noun and 'laughing' as a gerund) and redundant fillers. Use parallel structure with verbs in the base form after 'to' or use gerunds consistently: 'to chat, chit-chat, and laugh' or 'chatting, chit-chatting, and laughing.' Also remove filler words for clarity. ID:8

× I don't know, I can't say like a usual topic we we chat about, but we you can say a series, movies about series and movies and even sometimes boys and a lot and yes.

✓ I can't say we have a usual topic, but we often talk about TV series and movies, and sometimes about boys.

The original has repetition, unclear phrasing, and fragmented ideas. Reorder to form a clear subject-verb-object structure: 'we have a usual topic' -> 'we have a usual topic' (negative), and use 'often talk about' to express frequency. Remove redundant words and combine related items with commas. ID:26

× Actually, I'm not biased 'cause I have a group of my friends, so I chat with this group and I have my bestie from my childhoods and I, I chat with her in my in in private.

✓ Actually, I'm not biased because I have a group of friends, so I chat with them, and I also chat privately with my childhood best friend.

Use 'with them' rather than 'with this group' for natural reference, and 'bestie from my childhoods' is incorrect—use 'my childhood best friend.' Preposition 'in private' is correct but 'chat with her in my in in private' is awkward; use 'chat privately with her.' ID:11

× I prefer, I prefer face to face 'cause I sometimes in social media, I uh, I like, I prefer my private like life and uh, time.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because on social media I prefer to keep my life and time private.

The phrase 'my private like life and time' is ungrammatical. Use adjective 'private' to modify 'life' and 'time' directly. 'Face to face' should be hyphenated as an adjective (face-to-face) or 'face to face' as adverb; here 'face-to-face communication' is clear. Reorder clause 'on social media' for correct placement. ID:13

× So I can't be like, uh, uh, not open, but you know, chit chatting all the time 'cause I have.

✓ So I can't be constantly open and chit-chat all the time.

The original is fragmented and ends abruptly ('cause I have' what?). Complete the thought and remove fillers. Use 'constantly open' or 'always open' to express the idea clearly. ID:26

× I mean, who doesn't like, uh, we are friends, but sometimes we, we, we don't agree in the same point.

✓ I mean, who doesn't? We are friends, but sometimes we don't agree on the same points.

The phrase 'don't agree in the same point' is incorrect preposition and number agreement. Use 'agree on' and plural 'points' if referring to multiple issues. Also split into two sentences for clarity. The first clause 'who doesn't' is a shortened question referring to everyone else; keep as is. ID:2

× So, uh, arguing it's uh, it's part of uh, friendship, I guess.

✓ So, arguing is part of friendship, I guess.

Remove the extra 'it's' and fillers. Use the gerund 'arguing' as the subject and link with 'is' for a concise sentence: 'Arguing is part of friendship.' ID:8