Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and correct basic grammar (e.g. "how my life is going", "my problems"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me share how my life is going and solve problems I face. For example, I often talk to a close friend about study stress and we give each other advice.

Gợi ý: Organize your answer: give a clear topic sentence and then specific examples. Use linking words such as "for example" or "also". Avoid vague phrases and correct word order ("my family", "trying new foods").

Ví dụ: I usually talk about my interests and daily life. For example, we discuss our studies and family matters, and we often plan to try new restaurants or recipes together.

Gợi ý: Give a clear preference and one or two specific reasons. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Use linking words like "because" and correct expressions ("a small group of friends", "rather than a large group").

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting in a small group because I value privacy and deeper conversations. For instance, with two or three close friends I can talk about personal issues comfortably, unlike in large groups.

Gợi ý: Structure your response: state your preference or say it depends, then give clear contrasting reasons. Reduce repetition and use linking words ("however", "if"). Correct grammar ("it depends on my mood", "FaceTime or messaging").

Ví dụ: It depends on my mood. If I'm feeling upbeat, I prefer meeting friends face-to-face to talk about my day; however, if I'm tired or upset, I use FaceTime or messaging because it's more comfortable.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give a clear reason with a specific example. Avoid hesitation and repetition; correct grammar ("one of my friends is always late", "I don't like when people are late"). Use linking words like "because" or "so".

Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes argue with a friend because she is often late. For example, we planned to meet last week and she arrived an hour late, which annoyed me and led to a short argument.

× I love to talk how are my life is going, and I also love to talk about my conflicts and my problem.

✓ I love to talk about how my life is going, and I also love to talk about my conflicts and my problems.

Pronoun and noun form errors: 'how are my life is going' has wrong word order and unnecessary pronoun 'are'; correct phrasing is 'how my life is going'. 'my problem' should be plural 'my problems' to match 'conflicts' or keep singular consistently. Suggestion: use 'talk about' + clause and ensure subject-verb order is natural, and match singular/plural nouns.

× I like sharing with my sharing things my friends, so I I often used to I often like to chat with my friends so I can feel really.

✓ I like sharing things with my friends, so I often like to chat with them because it makes me feel good.

Pronoun and word order mistakes: 'sharing with my sharing things my friends' is garbled; proper order is 'sharing things with my friends'. 'I I often used to I often like' contains repetitions and wrong tense; use simple present 'I often like'. Use pronoun 'them' to refer to friends. 'so I can feel really' is incomplete; use 'because it makes me feel good.' Suggestion: remove repetitions, use correct word order 'sharing things with', and complete the clause with a clear verb and adjective.

× I usually chat about my friends like, my likes and dislikes, about my studies, about my families and also about like and trying new foods so we can get together and try.

✓ I usually chat about things like my likes and dislikes, my studies, my family, and trying new foods so we can get together and try them.

Preposition and noun form issues: 'about my families' should be 'my family' unless referring to multiple families. 'chat about my friends like' is better as 'chat about things like'. 'trying new foods so we can get together and try' needs object 'them' to complete meaning. Suggestion: group topics using 'things like' and ensure noun forms and objects are correct.

× I prefer smaller group of friends because I like privacy.

✓ I prefer a smaller group of friends because I like privacy.

Singular/plural and article issue: 'smaller group' needs the indefinite article 'a' when singular. Suggestion: include articles before singular countable nouns: 'a smaller group of friends'.

× Uh, I don't like too many friends. Instead, I love to have we want to friends rather than tenfold, tenfold friends.

✓ Uh, I don't like having too many friends. Instead, I prefer to have a few close friends rather than many friends.

Pronoun and word choice errors: 'I love to have we want to friends' is ungrammatical; use 'I prefer to have'. 'tenfold, tenfold friends' is incorrect word choice for 'many' — use 'many' or 'a lot of'. Suggestion: use 'prefer' for preference and 'a few close friends' for clarity.

× So yeah, I would like privacy and.

✓ So yeah, I would like privacy.

Incomplete sentence: ending with 'and' leaves the sentence unfinished. Suggestion: remove trailing conjunction or add the continuation; here the idea is complete, so remove 'and'.

× I think it's depend on my mood if I feel good so I would love to go out and meet my meet my friends and talk face to face about my feelings and about daily routine.

✓ I think it depends on my mood. If I feel good, I would love to go out and meet my friends and talk face to face about my feelings and my daily routine.

Verb agreement and repetition: 'it's depend' should be 'it depends' (third person singular). Remove duplicate 'meet my'. Also split into two sentences for clarity and add article 'my daily routine'. Suggestion: use correct third-person singular verb forms and avoid repetition.

× But if I don't feel good so I prefer FaceTime.

✓ But if I don't feel good, I prefer FaceTime.

Redundant conjunction 'so' with conditional: in conditional clauses, do not add 'so' after 'but if'. Also add comma after the conditional clause. Suggestion: keep conditional structure 'But if..., I...'.

× So I don't want to go out and really want to express myself.

✓ So I don't want to go out and really want to express myself.

This sentence is grammatical but slightly awkward in meaning because the contrast is unclear: keep as is or rephrase to 'So I don't want to go out but still want to express myself.' Not correcting grammar since it fits present tense and pronouns; however consider clarifying conjunctions.

× Yes, I argue with my friends a lot because, uh, one of my friend is always late and with with that problem, I, I always like to have argue with her because I, I don't. Like when people are related.

✓ Yes, I argue with my friends a lot because, uh, one of my friends is always late, and because of that problem I often argue with her, because I don't like when people are late.

Plural and article errors: 'one of my friend' should be 'one of my friends'. 'like to have argue' should be 'often argue' or 'like to argue' — use correct verb form. 'I don't. Like when people are related' is fragmented and incorrect: likely intended 'I don't like when people are late.' Suggestion: correct plural forms, remove filler repetitions, and complete the clause with the intended idea.