Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise, correct grammar, and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct articles, verb forms, and remove fillers.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my close friends. For example, I have a small group of friends who live near me in SEM Valley, and we often talk about our day-to-day activities and what we see on social media.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and organize supporting points with linking words. Avoid repeating the same idea; be specific with examples and use varied vocabulary (e.g., daily routines, hobbies, problems, highlights).

Ví dụ: We usually talk about daily life and funny incidents. For instance, we discuss our routines, share amusing stories from the day, talk through any problems one of us has, and mention the highlights or best moments we experienced.

Gợi ý: Answer directly then explain preference with a reason and an example. Use correct plural/singular forms, avoid fillers, and keep sentences short and logical. State the preferred size and why.

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting in a small group of about four or five friends. In a small group everyone gets a chance to speak, and conversations stay friendly and personal, unlike in large groups where it can become chaotic.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear preference and support it with two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrasing; correct grammar (face-to-face, understand others' feelings).

Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it conveys emotions more clearly and makes it easier to understand someone’s feelings. For example, when we meet in person I can read facial expressions and tone of voice, which helps us connect better than through social media.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer, then explain frequency and how conflicts are resolved with specific details and linking words. Avoid fillers and vague time references; use clear phrases (e.g., a few minutes, a few hours).

Ví dụ: We sometimes argue, but only about small things and rarely have serious fights. Usually we resolve these disagreements within a few minutes by apologizing or explaining our point of view, and afterwards we continue our friendship as usual.

× I love chatting with my friends as I have a small group circle with of my friends.

✓ I love chatting with my friends because I have a small circle of friends.

The phrase 'group circle with of my friends' is incorrect and redundant. Use 'a small circle of friends' (singular 'circle' and plural 'friends') and link clauses with 'because' for reason. Remove duplicate words to be clear.

× I love to chatting with my limited friends as they both are living in SEM Valley as we all talk talk about our daily life and social media.

✓ I love chatting with my small group of friends because both of them live in SEM Valley and we talk about our daily lives and social media.

After 'I love,' use the gerund form 'chatting' not the infinitive plus -ing. 'Limited friends' is unclear; 'small group of friends' is natural. Use 'both of them live' (present simple) and plural 'daily lives.' Remove repeated word 'talk.'

× We usually talk about our daily lives, funny things, about our daily basis things and usually we talk about our problematic things and the best memories of the day.

✓ We usually talk about our daily lives, funny things, everyday matters, our problems, and the best memories of the day.

Avoid repeating 'about' and use 'everyday matters' instead of 'daily basis things.' 'Problematic things' is unnatural—use 'problems.' Keep parallel list structure and remove redundant 'usually.'

× I usually have a group of friend, not a big group but a small one.

✓ I usually have a group of friends, not a big one but a small one.

Use plural 'friends' after 'group of.' 'Group of friend' is singular and incorrect. Keep 'one' to refer to 'group.'

× I love to chat in a very few group of friends which is limited till 5 or 4 UMM.

✓ I love to chat in a very small group of friends, usually limited to four or five people.

Use 'chat' or 'chatting' consistently; 'love to chat in a very few group' is awkward. 'Very small group' and 'limited to four or five people' is natural. Use numerals spelled consistently and avoid filler 'UMM.'

× We if like if many people are in the group then we create more umm.

✓ If many people are in the group, we add more members.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and contains repeated 'if' and filler 'umm.' Use a clear conditional structure: 'If many people are in the group, we add more members.'

× I love to communicate in face to face rather than social media because in face to face we can have more emotional or again come can understand the others feelings more easily rather than in social media.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face rather than via social media because in person we can be more emotional and understand others' feelings more easily.

Use 'face to face' without 'in' and 'via social media.' 'Prefer' fits better than 'love to communicate.' Use 'in person' and possessive 'others'' for feelings. Remove repeated or unclear words like 'again come.'

× Yes and my friends are girls we speak in face to face.

✓ Yes, my friends are girls, and we speak face to face.

Add commas and conjunction 'and' for correct sentence flow. Use 'speak face to face' (no 'in') and ensure pronoun agreement; the sentence needs punctuation to separate ideas.

× We sometimes argue but not a big argument.

✓ We sometimes argue, but not a big argument.

Add a comma before the contrast clause. The phrase is acceptable but could be improved to 'but not seriously' or 'but not a big argument.' Keep adverb placement close to verb: 'sometimes argue.'

× Sometimes we argue in small small things which can be umm, which can be sort out in a 5 or 4 minutes after that or if longer than the whole day.

✓ Sometimes we argue about small things that can be sorted out in four or five minutes, but occasionally an argument lasts all day.

Remove repeated 'small small' and filler 'umm.' Use 'about small things' and 'sorted out' (passive acceptable) and place time expressions naturally: 'in four or five minutes' and 'lasts all day.' This addresses sentence structure and clarity.

× But next time we continue to speak like we used to.

✓ But next time we continue to talk as we used to.

Use 'talk' instead of 'speak' for natural conversational English and 'as we used to' is the correct phrase. The structure is acceptable but 'talk' fits context better.