Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and use natural phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific examples. Avoid repetition and minor grammar errors (e.g. 'when I am stressed' not 'when I stress').

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me share experiences and vent about my day. For example, when I feel stressed about exams, a friend recently gave me practical study tips that helped me feel calmer and more confident.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence and a specific example. Fix grammar and word order (e.g. 'we are still students', 'how to make it clearer'). Use a linking phrase to connect the general topic to a specific example.

Ví dụ: We mostly talk about our studies since we are still students. For instance, if I struggle with an assignment, a friend often goes through the questions with me and suggests clearer ways to structure my answers.

Gợi ý: Give a full answer with a clear preference and brief reason or example. One-word answers are too short and do not follow the required structure. Use a topic sentence and one supporting detail.

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with just one friend because conversations feel more personal and I can discuss sensitive topics in depth.

Gợi ý: Use a clear topic sentence and simplify sentences. Correct grammar (e.g. 'face to face', 'when I am talking', 'I can see their changing expressions'). Complete the supporting detail with a brief example and avoid unfinished sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer to communicate face to face because I can read facial expressions and body language. For example, when a friend seems upset in person, I can immediately offer comfort or ask if they want to talk.

Gợi ý: State your position clearly and give a reason with one short example. Avoid confusing phrasing and incorrect word choices (e.g. 'I'm an introvert', 'we solve problems without arguing'). Keep to two or three sentences maximum.

Ví dụ: I rarely argue with my friends because I'm an introvert and we try to resolve conflicts calmly. For example, when a disagreement occurs, we discuss it privately and find a compromise instead of shouting.

× Yes, I like to enjoy chatting with my friends because I like to share my experience and feelings to them.

✓ Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because I like to share my experiences and feelings with them.

Use 'enjoy' directly with a gerund (verb + -ing) not 'like to enjoy'. Also use plural 'experiences' for general instances and the correct preposition 'with' instead of 'to'. Suggestion: say 'I enjoy chatting' and 'share my experiences and feelings with them.'

× I like to share my experience and feelings to them.

✓ I like to share my experiences and feelings with them.

The correct preposition with 'share' is 'with', not 'to'. Also use plural 'experiences' for repeated or general events. Suggestion: 'share ... with someone.'

× When I stress, my friends will give me some advice and support.

✓ When I am stressed, my friends give me advice and support.

With general habits or repeated situations use simple present, not 'will'. Also use the adjective 'stressed' (or 'when I am stressed') instead of 'when I stress.' Suggestion: use 'When I am stressed, my friends give me advice and support.'

× It makes me feel more confident and more relaxed.

✓ They make me feel more confident and relaxed.

Subject should match plural 'friends' (they), so use 'they make'. Also avoid redundant 'more' before both adjectives; 'more relaxed' is fine but 'more' before 'confident' is unnecessary in context. Suggestion: 'They make me feel more confident and relaxed.'

× We usually talk about our academic performance because we still are students.

✓ We usually talk about our academic performance because we are still students.

Word order 'are still students' is preferred; use simple present for habitual action. Suggestion: 'we are still students.'

× If I don't understand any assignment, my friends will help me by going over the homework with me and giving advice on how to improve and how can make it clearly.

✓ If I don't understand an assignment, my friends help me by going over the homework with me and giving advice on how to improve and how to make it clearer.

Use 'an assignment' for a non-specific single task. For habitual action use simple present 'help' not 'will help'. Use infinitive structure 'how to make it clearer' instead of 'how can make it clearly.' 'Clearer' is the comparative adjective; 'clearly' is an adverb and does not fit here. Suggestion: 'how to make it clearer.'

× No.

✓ I prefer chatting with a small group rather than only one friend.

The answer 'No' is unclear and does not respond to the question. Provide a complete sentence using appropriate pronouns and structure. Suggestion: answer directly, e.g. 'I prefer chatting with a small group rather than just one friend.'

× I would prefer to communicate face to face because I can see their face what when I talking, I can see their emotional facing changing and I can know about their feelings on the chatting.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I can see their faces when I am talking; I can see their emotions change and know how they feel during the conversation.

Use 'face to face' or 'face-to-face' consistently and 'prefer' is simpler. 'See their faces' (plural) and 'when I am talking' (progressive) are correct. 'Emotions change' is correct phrasing; 'on the chatting' is incorrect—use 'during the conversation.' Suggestion: simplify and use correct prepositions 'during' and verb forms 'when I am talking.'

× If they feel sad I will.

✓ If they feel sad, I will try to comfort them.

Original sentence is incomplete ('I will' what?). Provide a full verb phrase to complete the sentence. Suggestion: specify the action, e.g. 'I will try to comfort them.'

× I'm not sure about that because I since I didn't I'm introvert person.

✓ I'm not sure because I am an introverted person.

Remove extra words 'since I didn't' which make the sentence ungrammatical. Use 'I am an introverted person' or 'I'm introverted.' 'Introverted' is the correct adjective form. Suggestion: simplify to 'I'm not sure because I'm introverted.'

× I don't like to argue with my friends because we are friendly and kind.

✓ I don't like to argue with my friends because we are friendly and kind to each other.

Add 'to each other' to clarify reciprocal kindness; original is acceptable but clearer with the phrase. Suggestion: include reciprocal expression when referring to mutual behavior.

× Everything we can solve it so we sell them to argue to ourselves.

✓ We can solve any problems together, so we don't argue with each other.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and contains incorrect words ('sell them to argue to ourselves'). Use clear subject-verb structure: 'We can solve problems together' and 'we don't argue with each other.' Suggestion: state the idea simply and use 'together' and 'each other' for mutual actions.