Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Uh, no, it, I think it depends on what kind of friends. If this friend is my best friend, I think I love to chat with them. But if, if I'm facing some somebody that not very close, I think I will not.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I usually chatting with my friends about the fast fashion things and and clothings or our families or some Sometimes we we will chat in the laboratories or the pets.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I think it will depend on what kind of things. If I am in the important event, I think I will like to be chatting with a group of of people.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
Umm, I think I will like to umm, talk to my friends face to face. I don't know, because I, I think it's a good way to share our emotions to this place. Uh, the atmosphere are more good than so than in the media.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, sometimes. Sometimes we may have different in idea about one things sometimes or we will argue to each other, but in the end we always can solve this problem and don't argue.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并用更自然的表达。避免重复语气词(uh, um)和赘述,句子保持简洁(不超过5句)。可以先给出总体观点,再用一两句具体原因或例子支持。注意代词一致性(friend/they)和语法(not very close → not very close to me)。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with close friends rather than acquaintances. For example, I often share personal stories and feelings with my best friend because we trust each other, but I usually keep conversations with acquaintances light and casual.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 答案需要更清晰和语法正确。用完整句子并整理话题顺序,避免重复词汇。尽量给出具体细节或例子(如最近谈论的服装品牌或宠物的趣事)。
Ví dụ: We usually talk about fashion trends, especially fast-fashion brands and new styles. We also discuss family matters, pet stories, and sometimes work-related topics from the lab, like a recent experiment or project.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 66.0Gợi ý: 回答要先给出明确立场,然后用一两句解释。避免语法和词序错误(important event → an important event)。可举例说明何种情境更适合群聊或单独聊天。
Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. For casual topics I prefer talking one-on-one, but at an important event or celebration I enjoy chatting with a group because it’s more lively and you can meet more people.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 尽量避免犹豫词,表达要更准确自然。把观点和原因分成两句:先表态,再给出具体原因(更好表达情感、非语言信号如表情语气)。注意语法(share our emotions with others; the atmosphere is better)。
Ví dụ: I prefer talking face-to-face because it’s easier to share emotions and read body language. For instance, during a difficult conversation I feel more understood in person than over social media.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答简洁明确,并修正语法和重复。可以说明争论的常见原因和解决方式,展示成熟的社交技能(例如道歉或妥协)。保持句子不超过五句。
Ví dụ: Yes, we sometimes argue when we have different opinions, for example about plans or responsibilities. However, we usually talk it through and find a compromise, so the disagreement doesn’t last long.
× Uh, no, it, I think it depends on what kind of friends.
✓ Uh, no, I think it depends on what kind of friends.
句中出现多余的代词“it”,导致表达冗余且不自然。去掉多余的“it”即可。建议注意句子主干,避免插入无意义的代词。
× If this friend is my best friend, I think I love to chat with them.
✓ If this friend is my best friend, I think I would love to chat with them.
原句时态和语气不一致,应使用与条件句匹配的情态表达。这里“them”用于指代单数“this friend”属于英语中常见的性别中性用法,可接受。建议使用“would”表示在假设情况下的倾向。
× But if, if I'm facing some somebody that not very close, I think I will not.
✓ But if I'm facing somebody who is not very close, I don't think I will.
“some somebody”重复且不规范,应用“somebody”。关系从句中需用“who is”来修饰人,原句缺少动词。否定表达用“I don't think I will”更自然。建议注意代词与关系代词的正确使用并补全动词。
× I usually chatting with my friends about the fast fashion things and and clothings or our families or some Sometimes we we will chat in the laboratories or the pets.
✓ I usually chat with my friends about fast fashion and clothing, our families, or sometimes we chat about the labs or pets.
“usually”后应接动词原形“chat”,而不是进行时“chatting”。“clothings”通常用不可数名词“clothing”。句子冗余重复(“and and”,“some Sometimes we we”),需去掉重复并理顺列举关系。建议简化并使用正确的名词形式与动词形式。
× Sometimes we we will chat in the laboratories or the pets.
✓ Sometimes we chat about the labs or pets.
与“chat”搭配的常用介词是“about”,表示“聊关于……”。原句用“in the laboratories”会改变含义且不自然;“the pets”前一般不用定冠词,改为复数普通名词“pets”。建议学习常见动词与介词搭配。
× I think it will depend on what kind of things.
✓ I think it depends on what kind of things.
此处表达一般现在时的习惯或常态,应用一般现在时“depends”,而不是将来时“will depend”。建议根据语境选择正确时态来表达习惯性或一般事实。
× If I am in the important event, I think I will like to be chatting with a group of of people.
✓ If I am at an important event, I think I would like to chat with a group of people.
“in the important event”介词搭配错误,通常用“at an important event”。情态动词应使用“would like to”而非“will like to”,而“chat”用原形而非进行时“chatting”。去掉重复“of of”。建议注意介词搭配和情态动词的使用。
× Umm, I think I will like to umm, talk to my friends face to face.
✓ Umm, I think I would like to talk to my friends face to face.
与前文条件或偏好相关,使用“would like to”更礼貌也更符合语境;“face to face”作为副词短语位置正确,但时态与语气需调整为“would”。建议用“would like to”表达偏好。
× I don't know, because I, I think it's a good way to share our emotions to this place.
✓ I don't know, because I think it's a good way to share our emotions in this place.
“share emotions to this place”中介词错误,应为“in this place”或更自然地“in person / face to face”。动词“share”后接地点用“in”,但更常见的是用“in person”。建议改为更自然的短语,例如“share our emotions in person”。
× Uh, the atmosphere are more good than so than in the media.
✓ Uh, the atmosphere is better than on social media.
主语“the atmosphere”为单数,应使用单数动词“is”。此外,比较级表达应使用“better”而非“more good”,并且与“social media”搭配常用介词“on”。建议学习主谓一致和比较级的标准表达。
× Yes, sometimes. Sometimes we may have different in idea about one things sometimes or we will argue to each other, but in the end we always can solve this problem and don't argue.
✓ Yes, sometimes. Sometimes we may have different ideas about things or we will argue with each other, but in the end we can always solve the problem and not continue arguing.
错误点较多: - “different in idea”应为“different ideas”; - “one things”数一致错误,应为“things”或“one thing”; - 与人争论用动词短语“argue with someone”而不是“argue to”; - 时态和表达顺序应自然,“we can always solve the problem”比“we always can solve this problem”更地道; - 句尾“不再争论”用“not continue arguing”更明确。建议注意名词复数形式、固定搭配(argue with)和句子自然顺序。