Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise, avoid repetition and hesitations, and use clear tense and pronouns. Start with a topic sentence, then give one specific supporting detail using linking words. Watch for grammar (use present simple) and reduce filler words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends, especially my girlfriend. For example, we talk for about an hour each day, which helps me relax because she listens carefully and supports me. Because of that, our conversations make me feel less stressed.

Gợi ý: Clarify the verb choice and remove hesitations. Use linking words to structure the answer (topic sentence + examples). Provide specific details about topics and use correct collocations (talk about, support a team).

Ví dụ: We usually talk about football matches with my male friends. For instance, many of us support different teams—some back Manchester City while others support Manchester United—so after big games we discuss the results and key moments.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and long circular phrases. Give a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then one coherent reason and one brief example. Use correct grammar (a group of people) and fewer redundant words.

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with a group of people because there are more varied topics to discuss. For example, in a group we can talk about sports, movies, and studies, which keeps the conversation interesting.

Gợi ý: Make the reason concise and correct word choice (emotional feedback). Use linking words and avoid repeating the same idea. Provide one specific example of when face-to-face is better.

Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it provides clear emotional feedback. For example, when discussing personal problems, seeing someone's facial expressions makes their support feel more genuine than messages online.

Gợi ý: Remove repetitions and improve grammar (math problems, homework). Start with a direct answer, then explain why with a specific example and linking words. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often argue with my friends, mainly about math problems. Since we're engineering students, we frequently disagree on solutions—for example, we recently debated the correct method for solving an integration problem until we checked the textbook together.

× I like chatting with my friend, particularly I like, I like chatting with my girlfriend 'cause every day I will spend an hour around an hour to chat with her.

✓ I like chatting with my girlfriend; I usually spend about an hour each day talking with her.

The original sentence repeats phrases and uses awkward pronoun/reference ('my friend' then 'my girlfriend'). Also 'around an hour' and 'will spend' are awkward. Use concise subject reference and habitual present tense for routine actions: 'I usually spend about an hour each day talking with her.' Avoid repetition and ensure consistent pronoun reference.

× When I chat with her, I feel so kinda, uh, chill because she every day she was there, willing to listen whatever I said.

✓ When I chat with her, I feel relaxed because she is always there and willing to listen to whatever I say.

Issues: informal filler words and tense inconsistency ('was there' and 'said' vs habitual present). Use present simple for habitual states: 'she is always there' and 'whatever I say.' Include necessary preposition 'to listen to.' Remove filler words and use 'relaxed' instead of 'chill' for clarity.

× I usually try to football games with my male friends because my friends around me, they are, most of them are football fans.

✓ I usually try to watch football games with my male friends because most of them are football fans.

The verb 'try to football games' is missing the correct verb. Use 'watch' + object. Also remove redundant phrases 'friends around me, they are.' Use concise wording: 'most of them are football fans.'

× Uh, many of us, we have our hosted teams, some, some of them like uh, Manchester City and some of them like uh, Manchester United.

✓ Many of us support different teams; some support Manchester City and others support Manchester United.

Problems: 'we have our hosted teams' is incorrect collocation. Use 'support teams' or 'have favorite teams.' Avoid redundant phrasing 'some, some of them.' Use parallel structure: 'some... others...'.

× So every after a big match, we will chat together.

✓ So after every big match, we chat together.

Using 'will' suggests future but the intended meaning is habitual. Use present simple for habitual actions: 'we chat together.' Also change 'every after a big match' to 'after every big match.'

× I prefer to chat with a group people because if I only chat with one one friend, sometimes it will feel I will feel I will feel bored because the common topic between me and my friend is limited.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because if I chat with only one friend, I sometimes feel bored since the topics we share are limited.

Errors: missing 'of' in 'group of people', repeated 'one', awkward word order and redundant phrases 'it will feel I will feel.' Use present simple 'I sometimes feel bored' for habitual feelings and plural 'topics' with 'are limited.'

× But in front of a group of people, the common topics are limitless.

✓ But in a group, the range of common topics is much greater.

'Limitless' is hyperbolic and unnatural here. 'In front of a group of people' is awkward; use 'in a group.' Prefer 'the range of common topics is much greater' for clarity and accuracy.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because face to face communication can make me feel more real because spending more time on the social media you cannot get enough emotion fit emotional feedback as the face to face communication.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it feels more genuine; when you spend more time on social media you cannot get the same emotional feedback as face-to-face communication.

Errors: missing hyphens 'face-to-face', incorrect preposition and article use 'on the social media', incorrect phrase 'emotion fit emotional feedback.' Use 'genuine' and 'the same emotional feedback' and correct prepositions: 'spend time on social media.' },{