Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your answer more concise and fluent. Begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (um, uh), correct small grammar issues, and add one specific example. Use one or two linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my close friends because it helps me feel less lonely. For example, when I’m bored after a long day, I usually message a friend and we share funny stories or jokes to cheer each other up.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence and use logical linking words. Correct awkward phrases (e.g., “we pray each other” — perhaps you meant “check in on each other”) and be specific about topics. Keep to two to three supporting details.

Ví dụ: I usually start by asking how their day went and checking in on each other. After that, we often share small jokes or talk about recent events to lift each other’s mood.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence (state preference) and explain reasons with specific examples. Reduce repetition and eliminate fillers. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to connect ideas coherently.

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting in a group because there are more people to bounce ideas off and make spontaneous jokes. For example, in a group chat someone might post an unexpected meme that makes everyone laugh and sparks a new conversation.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and fix grammar (e.g., 'my personality suits offline communication'). Explain one or two clear reasons and give a brief example. Avoid hesitations and unfinished thoughts.

Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because my personality suits in-person interaction and I find it easier to read tone and body language. For example, at coffee shops I can have a deeper conversation without the misunderstandings that sometimes happen online.

Gợi ý: Make your meaning clear: decide whether you rarely argue or often agree. Use a clear topic sentence and explain reasons with coherent linking words. Correct contradictory phrases and avoid trailing off. Provide one short example of how you resolve disagreements.

Ví dụ: No, I rarely argue with my friends because we prefer discussion and try to understand each other’s views. For example, if we disagree about plans, we calmly talk through options and choose what works best for everyone.

× Yes, of course I like to chat in with my friends because umm, it's, it'll release my loneliness.

✓ Yes, of course I like chatting with my friends because it relieves my loneliness.

Use of 'like to chat in with' is incorrect; 'like' + gerund (chatting) is natural when describing preferences. 'Chat in with' is wrong preposition combination; use 'with'. 'It'll release my loneliness' uses 'release' which is unnatural; 'relieve' is the correct verb for reducing loneliness and agrees in present simple 'relieves' for a general statement.

× For example, when I uh, really bored at that day, I chat with my friends, uh, which is my close friends and sometimes we got a little jokes, we got a.

✓ For example, when I am really bored that day, I chat with my close friends and sometimes we tell little jokes.

Missing auxiliary 'am' for the present state 'really bored' (present tense). 'At that day' is incorrect; use 'that day' or 'on that day'. 'Which is my close friends' is incorrect relative clause; use 'my close friends'. 'We got a little jokes' uses incorrect past/informal 'got' and wrong article; use 'we tell little jokes' or 'we have a few jokes'.

× I usually usually chat uh at first with asking how's their day and we pray each other.

✓ I usually start by asking how their day is, and we wish each other well.

'Chat at first with asking' is ungrammatical; use 'start by asking' to indicate sequence. 'How's their day' is colloquial inversion; 'how their day is' fits reported clause. 'We pray each other' is incorrect verb choice and collocation in this context; use 'wish each other well'.

× Then we share our little jokes to lift up my daily life.

✓ Then we share little jokes to brighten my daily life.

'Share our little jokes to lift up my daily life' has awkward collocation. 'Lift up' is not used with 'daily life'; 'brighten' or 'cheer up' is more natural. 'Our little jokes' can be 'little jokes' depending on context; keeping 'my' with 'daily life' is fine.

× I prefer to chat with group people because I really love the jokes that they give to me.

✓ I prefer to chat with groups of people because I really love the jokes they tell me.

'Chat with group people' is incorrect word order and collocation; use 'groups of people' or 'a group of people'. 'Give to me' is unnatural for joking; use 'tell me' or 'make me laugh'.

× And there is a lot of, uh, jokes that, uh, like a sudden jokes and I never think about it.

✓ And there are a lot of sudden jokes that I never expect.

Subject-verb agreement: 'there is a lot of jokes' should be 'there are a lot of jokes' (plural). 'Like a sudden jokes' is ungrammatical; use 'sudden jokes' or 'unexpected jokes'. 'I never think about it' should be 'I never expect them' to match plural 'jokes'.

× And I think, uh, the idea is very broad.

✓ And I think the conversation is very broad.

'The idea is very broad' may be acceptable but 'idea' is vague; 'conversation' fits context. No strong grammatical error, but choice improves meaning; tense 'think' present simple is correct.

× I really enjoy face to face communication because, uh, my personality, uh, more suit to communicate, uh, offline and sometimes in social media, I just uh, uh, I usually skip the conversation and people, uh, seldom.

✓ I really enjoy face-to-face communication because my personality is more suited to communicating offline, and on social media I often skip conversations and people rarely engage.

Use hyphenated 'face-to-face' as compound adjective. 'More suit to communicate' is ungrammatical; use passive/participial form 'is more suited to communicating' or 'suits communicating'. 'Skip the conversation and people, seldom' is unclear; correct to 'skip conversations and people rarely engage' to express the intended meaning and fix adverb placement.

× No, not really, because I more like discussion with my friends, uh, instead of argue, Umm and my friends, uh, barely have a uh, the way they think it seem like me.

✓ No, not really, because I prefer discussing with my friends instead of arguing, and my friends rarely have the same way of thinking as me.

'I more like discussion' is incorrect; use 'I prefer discussing' or 'I like to discuss'. 'Instead of argue' needs gerund 'arguing'. 'Barely have a uh, the way they think it seem like me' has multiple issues: 'barely' collocation is odd; 'rarely have the same way of thinking as me' corrects pronoun and comparison structure.

× So I never and some and yeah, I never agree with my friends.

✓ So I rarely agree with my friends.

Fragmented speech 'So I never and some and yeah' should be cleaned; 'never agree' may be too absolute; 'rarely agree' is more natural if meant occasionally disagree. Remove filler words and use a single clear verb phrase.