Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, definitely yes. I am an outgoing person so I like chatting with my friend all the time.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
Uh, I think I try, I usually chat about my daily life or study with my friends because we are the same age, so we can have a lot of uh, same paragraph to say to communicate.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I think it's depend on different situations because when my mood is very high and happy so I prefer to chat with a group of people but when I feel down I just prefer 1 by 1.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I think I tend to prefer communicate face to face because we can totally see severeness talk to each other and talk about a lot of things by our daily life.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I sometimes argue with friends, especially when they have strong but differing opinions about important topic like relationships. For example, I once had a heated discussion about choices. So we disagree.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 74.0Gợi ý: 回答直接但稍显重复与语言错误,需注意单复数和连贯性。可以把句子简化为一到两句,避免重复“yes”。同时用更自然的表达说明原因并举例。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I'm an outgoing person, so I enjoy chatting with my friends about our plans and daily experiences, which helps me stay connected.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答含糊且有停顿与错误用词(如“same paragraph”)。需要直接给主题句并用具体细节支撑,使用连词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: I usually talk about my daily life and studies. For example, we discuss homework, upcoming exams and weekend plans, so we share similar experiences and advice.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰但语法和用词需改进(如“it's depend”,“1 by 1”)。可用一到两句表达偏好并用连词说明原因。
Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. When I'm in a good mood I enjoy chatting in a group because it's lively, but if I'm feeling down I prefer one-on-one conversations to be more personal.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答意思不够清楚,有语法错误和不合适词汇(如“severeness”)。应直接给偏好并说明具体理由,使用准确词汇如“body language”或“tone”。
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can read body language and tone, which makes conversations clearer and more sincere.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答内容有条理但表达不够自然,例子太模糊。应提供更具体的例子并用连接词使描述连贯,注意单复数和句子完整性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends when we have different views on important issues. For example, we once had a heated discussion about whether to stay in a relationship or break up, and we each explained our reasons calmly afterwards.
× I am an outgoing person so I like chatting with my friend all the time.
✓ I am an outgoing person so I like chatting with my friends all the time.
句中“my friend”應為複數“my friends”,因為說話者表示經常與多個朋友聊天,語境含有一般習慣性動作,需用複數。改進建議:注意用複數表達經常與多個人互動的情況。
× Uh, I think I try, I usually chat about my daily life or study with my friends because we are the same age, so we can have a lot of uh, same paragraph to say to communicate.
✓ Uh, I think I usually chat about my daily life or my studies with my friends because we are the same age, so we have a lot in common to talk about.
原句結構混亂,包含冗餘短語(I try),以及不恰當的表達“same paragraph”。需刪去多餘部分並用“have a lot in common to talk about”表達“有很多共同話題”。改進建議:說話前理清要點,避免插話和直接翻譯詞組,多用固定搭配(have a lot in common)。
× I think it's depend on different situations because when my mood is very high and happy so I prefer to chat with a group of people but when I feel down I just prefer 1 by 1.
✓ I think it depends on different situations because when my mood is very high and I'm happy I prefer to chat with a group of people, but when I feel down I prefer one-on-one conversations.
主語it後的動詞應用第三人稱單數形式“depends”。此外原句有重複連詞(because... so)和不自然的數字表達“1 by 1”。改進建議:注意主謂一致並使用完整的表達(one-on-one 或 one by one 根據語境選擇),避免重複連詞。
× I think I tend to prefer communicate face to face because we can totally see severeness talk to each other and talk about a lot of things by our daily life.
✓ I think I tend to prefer communicating face to face because we can clearly see each other's expressions and talk about a lot of things in our daily life.
動詞“prefer”後應接動名詞“communicating”,原句“face to face”前缺少動名詞或不定式形式。短語“see severeness”不自然且拼寫錯誤,應為“see each other's expressions”或“see how serious someone is”。“by our daily life”錯誤,應用“in our daily life”。改進建議:注意動詞後的固定結構(prefer doing)和常用搭配(face to face, in daily life)。
× Yes, I sometimes argue with friends, especially when they have strong but differing opinions about important topic like relationships.
✓ Yes, I sometimes argue with friends, especially when they have strong but differing opinions about important topics like relationships.
名詞“topic”需用複數“topics”,因為意指多種重要的話題(例如關係等)。改進建議:遇到表示多種情況或舉例列舉時使用複數形式。
× For example, I once had a heated discussion about choices. So we disagree.
✓ For example, I once had a heated discussion about choices, so we disagreed.
原句“So we disagree.”時態與前句不一致。敘述過去的事件應使用過去時“disagreed”。此外將兩句合併用逗號連接更自然。改進建議:注意敘述同一事件時態一致(使用過去時描述過去經歷)。